1、Section Writing 幽默故事写作技法指导1在写幽默故事时，可适当使用含蓄、风趣的小对话，以增加文章的生动性和感染力。有的对话是作铺垫的，有的是照应前文的。最后几句对话可以联系你的生活常识，体现出幽默。同时，我们还要了解中西方文化的异同，掌握不同的修辞手法。既要了解表层意思，又要领会深层含义。2从形式上看，幽默故事通常比较简短，并常带有推理性。前面的部分往往起铺垫作用，后面的部分才是幽默的“灵魂”。故事中的一些前因后果的说明常常被省略，直接进入一个意想不到的结局，使故事达到高潮。3从内容上看，幽默故事往往来自日常生活，但随着故事的发展，要有意想不到的结局，这才会使读者感到幽默之所在。
2、积“黄金”词句，写高分文章1A friend of mine noticed a man walking unsteadily in the subway station.我的一位朋友看到一名男子在地铁站摇摇晃晃地走着。2However,my friend simply thought he could not leave without trying to help.然而，我朋友认为他不能不试图帮忙就离开。3Everyone in the town knew that Lord Ye was very fond of dragons.镇上的每个人都知道叶公非常喜欢龙。4However,at
3、the sight of the real dragon,Lord Ye was scared and ran away as fast as he could.然而，一看到真龙，叶公吓得拔腿就跑。三步写作规范题目要求假如你们学校将要举办一场英文幽默故事比赛，你有意参加这次活动。请根据以下提示写一个英语小故事。女主人打算在家中招待一位客人。不幸的是，她在准备苹果馅饼时发现奶酪用光了，于是女主人向客人致歉。这家的小男孩悄悄地离开了屋子。过了一会儿，他拿着一片奶酪回到房间，把奶酪放在客人的盘子里。妈妈对孩子的行为感到十分满意。客人微笑着品尝奶酪，好像这是世界上最美味的食物，接着他说：“孩子，你的眼
4、睛就是比你妈妈的好。你在哪里找到的奶酪？”“在捕鼠夹上，先生。”小男孩小声说。注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2词数 80 左右。参考词汇：用光 run out 捕鼠夹 mouse trap第一步：搜索单元词汇1招待客人吃晚饭 2不幸地3对感到满意4小声说entertain a guest to dinnerunfortunatelybe/feel content with.whisper第二步：巧用单元语法和句型(一)完成句子1她在准备苹果馅饼时发现奶酪用光了。She when preparing an apple pie.2由于苹果馅饼没有奶酪，她只好向客人致歉。She had
5、to serving an apple pie without any cheese.found the cheese running outapologize to her guest for3他拿着一片奶酪回到房间，把奶酪放在客人的盘子里。He a piece of cheese,and he _ the guests plate.4客人微笑着品尝奶酪，好像这是世界上最美味的食物。The guest smiled,and tasted the cheese the most delicious food in the world.returned withput it onas if it
6、 were(二)根据所给要求，用以上句子完成句式升级升级一：用 as a result 连接 1、2 句升级二：用定语从句改写 3 句升级三：用动词 smile 的现在分词形式改写 4 句She found the cheese running out when preparing an apple pie;as a result,she had to apologize to her guest for serving an apple pie without any cheese.He returned with a piece of cheese,which he put on the
7、guests plate.Smiling,the guest tasted the cheese as if it were the most delicious food in the world.第三步：连接过渡成篇One day a hostess planned to entertain a guest to dinner at her home.Unfortunately,she found the cheese running out when preparing an apple pie;as a result,she had to apologize to her guest
8、for serving an apple pie without any cheese.The little boy of the family left the room quietly and after a moment returned with a piece of cheese,which he put on the guests plate.The mother was quite content with what he had done.Smiling,the guest tasted the cheese as if it were the most delicious food in the world and then said to the little boy,“You must have better eyes than your mother,child,but where did you find the cheese？”“In the mouse trap,sir，”whispered the boy.“单元加餐练”见“Unit 3 单元加餐练”(单击进入电子文档)“单元质量检测”见“Unit 3 单元质量检测”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看
