1、河北宣化县2016高考英语二轮书面表达选读（5）含参考范文【广西省南宁市2014高考英语模拟试题】书面表达（满分25分）近几年，随着网络的普及，越来越多的学生书写明显退步。为了保护传统的民族文化汉字，你学校学生会向全校学生提出建议： 1. 减少课外上网时间，多读书； 2. 养成每天记日记的好习惯，练习书法； 3. 少发电子邮件，尽量动手给亲朋好友写书信。请你根据以上内容，代表学生会写一封英文倡议书。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。 4. 参考词汇:汉字Chinese charactersDear friends, _ Le
2、ts take action now! Students Union 【参考范文】书面表达Dear friends, In recent years, many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity. As a result, we dont write as well as we did in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, wed like to offer some sug
3、gestions: We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books. Wed better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting. Besides, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails. Beautiful and neat handwriting
4、 is beneficial to us students. So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future. Lets take action now! 【广东省深圳市2014高考英语第一次调研考试】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇快讯，报道一次比赛的情况。【写作内容】保护森林，人人有责！比赛目的：培养保护环境习惯主题：废物*利用创意作品*比赛组 织 者：学生会评选过程：1元月1日至2月10日2有900多人参赛，提交了1,000多幅作品3材料主要为废物，利用网络展示结果：1有近2
5、00名同学分获一、二、三等奖2李明用旧报纸和杂志制作的作品“保护森林，人人有责”获得了第一名意义：同学们显示了热情，提高了环保意识*废物：waste material*创意作品：creative works【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）Aiming to cultivate the good habit of protecting the environment, the Students Union held a creative work competition with the
6、theme of making good use of waste materials. From Jan. 1st to Feb, 10th, more than 900 students participated and presented through the Internet over 1,000 works mainly made of waste materials. About 200 participants got the first, second and third prizes respectively. Zhang Hua, whose work “Protecti
7、ng the forests, including you and me!” was made of old newspapers and magazines, got the first place. In this activity, the students not only have shown their enthusiasm, but also have raised their awareness of environmental protection. 写作评分标准第一节：基础写作一、评分原则1、本题总分为15分，按3个方面给分。2、评分时，首先根据文章句子结构的准确性，信息内
8、容的完整性和连贯性, 初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。4、评分时，应注意信息内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点：（可以有不同的组合）1比赛的时间、对象及主题；2比赛的过程、结果及意义。三、评分标准语言言yan言 言7-8具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6具有较好的语言
9、运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。备注每多或少写一个句子，扣1分。内 容5包括了所有信息内容。4包括了大部分信息内容。3包括了基本信息内容。2包括了小部分信息内容。1包括了少许信息内容。0没有包括所提供的信息内容。连 贯2内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。1
10、内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。0内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注文不对题，给0分。2016书面表达训练假设你是商丘某高中学生李华，请为你的澳大利亚笔友Tim写封电子邮件，介绍商丘的情况及一些旅游景点，希望Tim到商丘来旅游。主要内容包括： 1商丘地处中原，交通便利，气候宜人。 2重点介绍两处旅游景点，如：南湖、商丘古城遗址、应天书院遗址等。 注意：1词数100左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：商丘古城-the ancient city of Shangqiu 应天书院-Ying tian Academy 南湖-the South L
11、akeDear Tim,Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. _Yours sincerely, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Tim, Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. Shangqiu is located in Henan province and has the convenient transportation and pleasant climate.Shangqiu is rich in tourist attractions such as the South Lake，the ancient city of
12、Shangqiu.The South Lake is well known for its beautiful scenery and clear water, the banks of which are lined with green trees. Another famous site is the ancient city of Shangqiu. Now it lies in the south of Shangqiu City. It is not only very beautiful but also has a long history. When you walk alo
13、ng the ancient wall, you can think of many stories happening in Shangqiu. I am sure youll have a good time in Shangqiu.I am looking forward to your arrival. Yours sincerely, Li Hua书面表达（B）（20分钟）最近，很多中学生都纷纷开起了自己的博客。一方面，博客可以作为展示自己的窗口，可以释放学习的压力，因此已经被越来越多的中学生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家长和老师都认为管理个人博客要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习。
14、请对这一现象进行简要介绍，并发表自己的看法。 注意：1词数：l50左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2参考词汇：开博客open ones blog Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. _【参考范文】One possible version:本文为议论文体。要求简要描述深受同学们喜爱的开博客现象，以及中学生和家长、老师对此事的不同看法，更要求同学们对上述现象提出自己的观点。后者是文章的重点。注意：个人观点表达
15、要做到观点鲜明、论据充分、条理清晰。时态应用一般现在时。【参考范文】 Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide a colorful platform to showcase their talent, and it is a way to release their pressure, and all this makes it more and m
16、ore popular with high school students. But many parents and teachers hold a different view, they think that managing ones blog will take a lot of time and energy, while this should be used to study which is their main responsibility.In my opinion, I do approve of this activity. Opening and organizin
17、g an eye catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skilful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs.Blog itself is of little harm. It is y
18、our attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.2016书面表达训练假如你是李华。你的好友John给你发来电子邮件说他最近刚去了美国一所中学学习，但对那里的生活很不习惯，为此他感到非常苦恼。请你给他回一封电子邮件，提几点建议。内容要点：1. 尊重当地风俗习惯，积极融入当地人生活；2. 主动和美国学生交流，和他们交朋友；3. 和朋友们一起参加户外运动；4. 注意自己的言行举止，和朋友坦诚相处。注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
19、，语意通顺；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John，【参考范文】Dear John，Im really glad heart from you and know how you are getting along. I think it is common for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some advice for you.First of all, you should respect local customs and try to involve yourself in the liv
20、es of the locals. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” Secondly, dont forget to communicate with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you happiness. Whats more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Last but not the least, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.I hope you can adapt to your new life soon and enjoy your stay there.Keep in touch. Yours Li Hua
