1、Section Writing 描述地点的文章写作技法指导描述一个地点就是对某一地点的自然环境、人文特点、历史风貌等进行描述。写此类文章应注意以下几点:1内容一般包括该地方的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。也可以适当地融入人文风貌,简单介绍当地的文化遗址、民间风俗及有趣的生活方式等。但是一定要抓住该地方的主要特色,这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。2要遵循一定的写作顺序。描述该地方的位置时,首先要找好中心点,再由近及远,也可以先整体后局部,或按照一定时间层次或空间层次。描述时可以适当使用过渡性连接词。3可以适当运用比喻句式。形象的比喻可以给读者展示一幅生动的画面。积“黄金”词句,写高分文章1
2、China is a large country with a long history and a large population.2The weather here is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.3It covers an area of about 14 million square kilometers,whichmakes up almost one tenth of the worlds total land area.4Its winter is very long,which lasts from Ap
3、ril to October.5It is so cold that very few plants can live there.6Although there are no humans living there,it is rich in iron,coal,gas and other natural resources.三步写作规范题目要求请根据以下信息,写一篇文章介绍广州的基本情况,内容要包括以下几点:1广州有“花城”的美誉。2有 2 200 多年的历史,是中国古代“海上丝绸之路”的发祥地。3大约有人口 1 490 万,面积 7 434.4 平方千米。4旅游资源丰富,有著名的“羊城八
4、景”,现以其迷人风采,吸引了来自世界各地的海内外游客。注意:词数 100 左右。参考词汇:发祥地 birthplace;海上丝绸之路 The Road of Silk on the Sea;羊城八景 Guangzhou Hakkei第一步 搜索词汇1位于 _2有的历史_3占面积_4被命名为_5吸引_be located/situated inwith a history ofcover an area ofbe named asappeal to/attract/draw ones attention to第二步 由词造句1根据汉语提示完成句子众所周知广州是一个美丽的城市。_ Guangzho
5、u is a city of much beauty.广州市占地 7 434.4 平方千米。Guangzhou 7,434.4 square kilometers.广州有约 1 490 万人口。Guangzhou 14.9 million or so.广州旅游资源丰富。Guangzhou.广州吸引了越来越多的来自世界各地的游客。Guangzhou from all over the world.It is well known thatcovers an area ofhas a population ofhas rich tourist resourcesis appealing to mo
6、re and more tourists2句式升级把句进行句式转换,Guangzhou is a city of much beauty.(as引导的定语从句)that Guangzhou is a city of much beauty.(what 引导的主语从句)把句合并为一句话_用定语从句合并句_As is well knownWhat is well known isGuangzhou covers an area of 7,434.4 square kilometers with a population of 14.9 million or so.Guangzhou has ric
7、h tourist resources,which is appealing tomore and more tourists from all over the world.第三步 连句成篇It is well known that Guangzhou is a city of much beauty.Located in the middle of Guangdong Province,Guangzhou,the capital city of Guangdong,is an ancient city with ahistoryof over2,200 years.It was once
8、the birthplace of“The Road ofSilk on the Sea”It covers an area of 7,434.4 square kilometerswith a population of 14.9 million or so.Because it is warm andfloweryalltheyearround,itisalsocalled“FloweryCity”Guangzhou has been named as one of the first historicaland cultural cities.Guangzhou has rich tourist resources such as GuangzhouHakkei,which is appealing to more and more tourists from allover the world.“单元加餐练”见“Module 1 单元加餐练”(单击进入电子文档)“单元质量检测”见“Module 1 单元质量检测”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看