1、Section Writing 事物描写写作技法指导事物描写文属于说明文范畴。要求写作目的明确，实事求是，把介绍的对象说明白。写作时，层次要分明，安排要合理，过渡要自然，语言要简练，用词要准确，使人们对被说明的人或事物有一个清楚、完整的认识和了解。事物描写类文章属于描写文的范畴，描写事物通常采用一般现在时态。介绍事物时要注意以下几点：1要考虑好描写的视角和次序。视角，就是我们通常所讲的人称，用第一和第三人称都可以。描写次序是指先写什么后写什么的问题。一般来讲，英语描写文是按空间顺序来写的。2要选择重点部位或内容来写。无论描写什么景物都不可能面面俱到，故要选择最能体现事物特征的几个方面作详细描述
2、。3要选好主题，突出主题，用细节来烘托主题。发挥想象力，从不同的方面描写景物的特征，把它活灵活现地呈现在读者的面前，唤起读者的想象和情感共鸣。4具体写作时要注意的细节：(1)文章的组织要有层次顺序，避免忽东忽西，杂乱无章。(2)充分利用、正确选用形容词和副词，以达到引人入胜、生动直观的效果。(3)尽量使用简单常用的词语和单句，少用或不用复杂冗长的复合句，以避免出错。(4)描写一般使用动词的现在时态。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章1(It is)Located/Situated at the back of/in the east of.2It covers an area of.3The old
3、building is 20 years old/dates back to/dates from.4In the east of/East of the old building is/lies.5It plays an important role/part in our life.6It really makes our school beautiful.三步写作规范题目要求你所在的学校为了进一步提高办学质量，在全校开展了题为我理想中的学校的征文活动，请结合你校的现状和你理想中的学校写一篇个人随笔。词数 100 左右。第一步：搜索词汇1高度评价 2在某种程度上3除了(还有)4对有影响5有
4、可能/机会6另一方面speak highly of;think highly ofto a certain extent;to some degree;insome wayaside from;apart from;besideshave an effect onhave access to;be likely to doon the other hand7专心于；致力于8缺乏9课外知识10适应11就个人而言12不但而且 be buried in;be devoted to；beoccupied inlack;be short of;be lacking inextra-curricular
5、knowledgeadapt to;fit intopersonally speaking;in ones opinionnot only.but also.第二步：由词造句1我们学校在某种程度上受到学生、家长的高度评价，但我感觉还有需要改进的地方。Our school by students and parents,but I think.our school by students and parents,I still think.is thought highly ofto a certain extentthere should be something to be improved
6、Whileis spoken highly ofto some degreeit should be better in many ways2如果我们能多种些树，多呼吸新鲜空气，这样会更好。we plant more trees,and it will be better.will benefit us a lot.3我们就像是处理作业的机器，每天沉浸于无尽的作业中。We endless homework,and we were machines for it.We the endless homework we were machines for it.Ifhave access to mo
7、re fresh airPlanting more trees and having access to more fresh airare buried init seems as ifare occupied inas if4我们缺乏社会经验，所以我希望学校开放阅览室，从而我们可以获取更多课外知识，以更好地适应发展的社会。We social experience,so I hope that the reading room will and we can learn more to the developing society better.we experience,I hope th
8、e reading room will we can learn more the developing society better.lackbe open to usextra-curriculaextra-curricular adaptAsare lacking in socialbe open so thatextra-curricular knowledge so as to adapt to第三步：连句成篇My ideal schoolWhile our school is thought highly of by students and parents to some deg
9、ree,I still think it should be better in many ways.The school lies in the city centre.Though it is convenient for us to go to school,the air is polluted apart from too much noise,which has a bad effect on our health and studies.If we plant more trees,and have access to more fresh air,it will be bett
10、er.All our teachers are strict with us in our studies,so they often leave us too much homework.But we are occupied in the endless homework as if we were machines for it.So I wish I could have free time and take part in some after-class activities so that we can relax ourselves.As we are lacking in s
11、ocial experience,I hope the reading room will be open so that we can learn more extra-curricular knowledge so as to adapt to the developing society better.Personally speaking,attention should be paid to not only increasing our knowledge but also developing our ability.If we studied in such an ideal school,we would have a brighter future.“单元质量检测”见“单元质量检测（三）”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看