1、河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（14）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Tony,Thank you for your letter. To tell you the truth, Ive thought a
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7、s in students.At present, an increasing number of students wear glasses and some even in high degree, which worries themselves a lot. In my opinion, there are mainly three reasons. First, their ways of using eyes are not healthy. Second, because of the high pressure of study, they often study for to
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