1、短文改错第一节 短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Chen Ming，What you said in the last letter is common problem among
2、 high school students. Maybe the following advices can help you. First of all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack of self-confidence. Smile at your classmates is the first thing that you should do. One smile speaks louder about your wish to make friends than any word. Your s
3、mile will show you are friendly to him. Next, try talking with a student who share the same interest with you. You can discuss your study with a classmate, or you can also talk about your hobbies as well. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you had confidence, y
4、ou can possible make a lot of new friends.Yours, Li Hua【参考答案】Dear Chen Ming，What you said in the last letter is common problem among high school students. Maybe a the following advices can help you. First of all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is advicethat you lack of self-confidence. S
5、mile at your classmates is the first thing that you should do. SmilingOne smile speaks louder about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show you are friendly to him. Next, try talking with a student who share the same interest them shareswith you. You can discuss your study with
6、 a classmate, or you can also talk about your hobbies andas well. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you had If haveconfidence, you can possible make a lot of new friends. possiblyYours, Li Hua第一节 短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有
7、10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。As I board in school, I eat my every meal in the cafeteria of my school. Since the first time I go there, I like it very much. Firstly, it is v
8、ery big that it allows about all the students to have the meal in the same time. Secondly, I like the advanced and modern equipments there. And it looks very beautifully and makes a good eating atmosphere. There are many workers working in it, doing the different jobs and give their best help the st
9、udents and teachers. I find that the food in it are not only delicious but also nutritious. I feel very content to enjoy meals in the cafeteria of our school.【参考答案】As I board in school, I eat my every meal in the cafeteria of my school. Since the first time I go there, I like it very much. Firstly,
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11、obs and give their best help the students and teachers. I find that the food giving in it are not only delicious but also nutritious. I feel very content to enjoy meals in the iscafeteria of our school. my答案与解析：本文讲述了作者中学住校期间爱上在食堂就餐的几个原因。1. 去掉my 因为my 和every不能连用。2. gowent Since后面的从句的谓语动词用过去时。3.veryso
12、跟后面的that构成sothat结构。4.inat at the same time是固定搭配。5.equipmentsequipment equipment是不可数名词。6.beautifullybeautiful look是系动词，构成系表结构。7. givegiving 跟前面的doing构成并列。8. 在help前面加to Give ones best to do something的结构和搭配。9.areis 前面的主语food是不可数名词。10.ourmy 全文都用第一人称单数叙述的。第一节 短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
13、请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Li Hong，a 18-year-old girl from Shanghai, loves reading English books, such as magazines, newspapers and even original novel
14、s. She has made three copy of notes, which shows his good habit of reading and properly reading method. She is always willing help her fellow classmates improve their reading. Li Hong is expert at communicating but she is also a cooperative girl who is active in all kinds of reading activities. In l
15、ast years “Reading and Progress” activity, she wins first place in the Provincial Middle School Students English Speech Contest. She often says, “Read can make me feel delighting and happy.” That is what she has been learnt from reading. 参考答案：ancopiestoherproperanddelightedReadingwonLi Hong，a 18-yea
16、r-old girl from Shanghai, loves reading English books, such as magazines, newspapers and even original novels. She has made three copy of notes, which shows his good habit of reading and properly reading method. She is always willing help her fellow classmates improve their reading. Li Hong is exper
17、t at communicating but she is also a cooperative girl who is active in all kinds of reading activities. In last years “Reading and Progress” activity, she wins first place in the Provincial Middle School Students English Speech Contest. She often says, “Read can make me feel delighting and happy.” That is what she has been learnt from reading.