1、Section Writing 人物描写写作技法指导人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。1生平介绍。人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材料要真实。2事迹叙述。选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。3简短的评论。对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章1Li Yue is always w
2、arm-hearted and ready to help us whenever we are in need of help.每当我们需要帮助时，李越总是热心肠，乐于帮助我们。2We think that she deserves to be recognized as“Star Student of the Week”我们认为她理应被授予“每周之星”。3During her career life,she obtained 132 championships,including 4 Olympic championships.在她的职业生涯中，她获得了 132 个冠军，包括 4 次奥运会
3、冠军。4She is an ordinary-looking girl,but her kindness and consideration impress me most.她是个相貌平平的女孩，但是她的善良和体贴给我留下了深刻的印象。5When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in literature.从童年时代起，他就对文学表现出了极大的兴趣。6O.Henrys stories,most of which are short ones,give people surprising endings.欧亨利的小说大多数为短篇小说，结局往
4、往出人意料。7He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.他/她擅长英语口语，计算机娴熟。8Her story tells us that we should value what we have,and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.她的故事告诉我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的东西，努力克服生活中的任何困难。三步写作规范题目要求根据以下内容提示写一篇 80 词左右的短文，介绍简古道尔博士。姓名简古道尔研究领域著名的野生动物研究专家，尤其在研究黑
5、猩猩方面性格谦虚、坦诚、考虑周到主要事迹1.童年时代，碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜拉德博士的书。受到极大鼓舞，打算研究动物2.那个时代，妇女受到歧视，但妈妈支持她3.20世纪60年代，简动身去非洲研究黑猩猩，用了超过25年的时间观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动，完全弄懂了它们的习性成就1.成立了几个组织，发起了一项保护动物的运动2.在世界各地演讲，呼吁年轻一代参加“根与芽”活动3.被授予了多个奖项参考词汇：泰山和杜拉德博士Tarzan and Dr Doolittle;“根与芽”“Shoot and Root”第一步：搜索单元词汇1谦虚的 2坦诚3考虑周到4看不起5支持6行为；习性7发表演讲8项目mod
6、estoutspokenconsideratelookdownonsupportbehaviourdeliver speechesproject第二步：巧用单元语法和句型(一)完成句子1简古道尔博士是著名的野生动物研究专家，尤其在研究黑猩猩方面。Dr Jane Goodall in studying wild animals,especially in chimps.2童年时代，她碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜拉德博士的书。In her childhood,she Tarzanand Dr Doolittle.is a famous specialistcame across a book call
7、edby chance3她受到了极大鼓舞，打算将来研究动物。She was greatly inspired by it and _animals one day.420 世纪 60 年代，简动身去非洲研究黑猩猩，在那里她用了超过 25 年的时间观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动，完全弄懂了它们的习性。In the 1960s,Jane to Africa to study chimps,_ she spent over 25 years _ and recording their daily activities and fully understood their behaviour.intend
8、ed to studymoved offwhereobserving5成立了几个组织并发起了一项保护动物的运动让她世界闻名。Setting up several organizations and launching a campaign to protect animals all over the world.6这就是简古道尔，由于突出成绩她获得了许多奖项。_ is Jane Goodall,is awarded many prizes for her great achievements.(二)根据所给要求，用以上句子完成句式升级升级一：用 a famous specialist 作同位
9、语改写句 1have made her famousSuchwhoDr Jane Goodall,a famous specialist,studies wild animals,especially in chimps.升级二：用 which 引导的定语从句改写句 2升级三：用过去分词作状语改写句 3升级四：用 award 的过去分词短语作定语改写句 6In her childhood,she came across a book which is calledTarzan and Dr Doolittle by chance.Greatly inspired by it,Jane inte
10、nded to study animals oneday.Such is Jane Goodall,awarded many prizes for her greatachievements.第三步：连接过渡成篇Dr Jane Goodall,a famous specialist,studies wild animals,especially in chimps.She is a modest,outspoken and considerate woman.In her childhood,she came across a book which is called Tarzanand Dr
11、 Doolittle by chance.Greatly inspired by it,Jane intended to study animals one day.At that time,women were often looked down on and only her mother supported her decision.In the 1960s,Janemoved off to Africa to study chimps,where she spent over 25 years observing and recording their daily activities
12、 and fully understood their behaviour.Setting up several organizations and launching a campaign to protect animals have made her famous all over the world.In recent years,Jane has delivered speeches all over the world to call on younger generations to take part in her project“Shoot and Root”Such is Jane Goodall,awarded many prizes for her great achievements.“单元加餐练”见“Unit 1 单元加餐练”(单击进入电子文档)“单元质量检测”见“Unit 1 单元质量检测”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看