1、Section Writing 急救写作技法指导本单元的写作任务为介绍急救措施，为指导性说明文，该类说明文旨在为读者提供解决问题的方法及具体步骤。其基本结构：第一部分：对要说明的现象或事物作简单介绍，引出主题。第二部分：按照一定的顺序对要说明的现象或事物进行客观描述。第三部分：简要总结全文。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章 一、常用的开头语1We should check whether she/he is conscious or not.我们应当检查他/她是否清醒。2If a person stops breathing,you must start his breathing at once,
2、如果某人停止呼吸，你必须立即进行人工呼吸使他恢复呼吸。3If a person is poisoned by the gas,open the doors and windows to let the fresh air in.若某人煤气中毒，开门窗，通风换气。4If someone has eaten or drunk poison by mistake,take him and the poison to hospital at once.若有人误吃或误喝有毒食品，带着病人和毒品立即去医院。(if引导的条件状语从句；祈使句)5If a person is bleeding badly,pr
3、ess a clean handkerchief or a piece of cloth on the bleeding point and hold it there.若某人大出血，用块干净手帕或布压在出血点，按住不放。二、主体部分常用表达1Close his nose with your fingers and breathe into his mouth until he begins to breathe again.用手指捏住他的鼻子，口对口吹气，直到他恢复呼吸。2Use the mouth-to-mouth method within five minutes.在五分钟内进行人工呼
4、吸。3Dont move him or her leave him/her where he/she is.不要搬动他(她)，让他(她)待在原地。4Cover the wound with a bandage or a piece of dry clean cloth.用绷带或一块干净的干布把伤口包扎起来。5Wash the wound with cold running water.用凉自来水冲洗伤口。6Please call 120 for ambulance at once.请立即拨打120叫救护车。三、常用的结束语There is no doubt that we should kno
5、w some knowledge of first aid.毫无疑问我们应知道一些急救方面的知识。三步写作规范题目要求请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的短文，简要介绍一下对遇到心脏病等疾病突发(seizure)病人应该采取什么样的措施。题目：First Aid for Seizures急救过程中的注意事项：1把附近的危险物体移开以免病人受到伤害；不要移动病人，除非他们处于危险中。2把病人的头部用垫子垫起来。等病发结束后帮助病人呼吸。3在病人没有完全恢复之前不要给他任何吃的或喝的东西，等病人完全恢复以后再离开。4如果病情发作持续5分钟以上，打电话叫救护车。第一步：对接单元词汇1许多 2生病3紧急的
6、4有所影响；起作用5急救a number offall illurgentmake a differencefirst aid第二步：巧用单元语法和句型1日常生活中，我们有时遇到几种这样的情况：人们患有心脏病或者突然生病。We sometimes come across a number of cases in our daily life.people suffer from heart attacks or they fall ill suddenly.In our daily life,we sometimes come across people suffer from heart a
7、ttacks or they fall ill suddenly.In these casesa number ofcases where2毫无疑问我们应知道一些急救方面的知识。We should know some knowledge of first aid.it.we should know some knowledge of first aid.3不要移动病人，除非他们处于危险中。Dont try to move the person he isnt in danger.Dont try to move the person he is in danger.There is nodou
8、bt aboutThere is no doubt thatifunless4在病人没有完全恢复之前不要给他任何吃的或喝的东西。,you shouldnt give the person anything to eat or drink.Dont give the person anything to eat or drink.Before he is fully recovereduntil he isfully recovered第三步：连接过渡成篇First Aid for SeizuresIn our daily life,we sometimes come across a numb
9、er ofcases where people suffer from heart attacks or they fall ill suddenly.So there is no doubt that we should know some knowledge of first aid.The following are some tips we can follow to help these people on urgent occasions.Firstly,remove objects from nearby to protect the persons injury.Dont tr
10、y to move the person unless he is in danger.Secondly,cushion his head and aid breathing by gently placing him in the recovery position once the seizure has finished.Thirdly,dont give the person anything to eat or drink until he is fully recovered and stay with the person until recovery is complete.If the seizure continues for more than five minutes,call an ambulance immediately.I really hope the tips above will make a difference to you.“单元质量检测”见“UNIT 5 单元质量检测（五）”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看
