1、第四讲 学用修辞，再上台阶 解题攻略在一篇100个词左右的文章中，如果没有一两句精彩的句子，就很难拿高分。反之，如果有一两句精彩的句子，则会使你的文章档次上升，拿到更高的分数。除了写一些较难的高级句式外，精彩句子的表达可通过修辞方法这个途径获得。运用简单的修辞，可增加句子的优雅性。有些同学可能会感觉太难，但简单易行的修辞方法我们在阅读过程中随处可见，只是我们只顾做题，从未领会过文章中的生花妙笔。中学阶段英语写作常用的修辞方法有：比喻、拟人、排比、委婉等。1.比喻Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.读书对于思想，就像运动对于身体
2、一样。The whole world is a stage.All men and women are merely players.世界就是个舞台，所有的男人和女人仅仅是演员。One who teaches morality but practices immorality is a wolf in a sheeps skin.满口仁义道德，一肚子男盗女娼的人就是披着羊皮的狼。2.拟人His name escaped me.我忘记了他的名字。The year 2015 saw many great events.2015年见证了很多大事。3.排比In order to get her to
3、recover as soon as possible,I took good care of her by helping her take some medicine,putting cold towel on her forehead,preparing her meals,etc.为了让她尽快恢复，我细心照顾她，帮她服药、把冷手巾放在她的额头上、为她做饭等。The teacher said that he was a poor student because he waiteduntil the last minute to study for the exam,completed h
4、is homework in a careless way,and lacked motivation.老师说他是个差生，因为他要等到考试时才学习、做作业漫不经心、而且缺乏学习动力。4.委婉Nelson Mandela passed away on December 15,2013.纳尔逊曼德拉于2013年12月15日去世。I am not quite myself today.我今天感觉不大舒服。随堂训练A随着车的数量增加，道路安全问题变得越来越重要。假定你是李华，是校学生会主席，请你根据下面的写作要点，给校报的英语专栏写一篇英语稿件。1.列举街道上常见的交通违规现象；2.分析违反交通规则造
5、成的后果；3.发出几点倡议(至少两点)。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数参考词汇：车行道roadwayDear boys and girls，I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students Union.Id like to call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules._Lets take responsibility for ourselves and others and take action now！答案：Dear_boys_and_girls
6、，I_am_Li_Hua,_chairman_of_the_Students_Union._Id_like_to_call_your_attention_to_the_importance_of_obeying_the_traffic_rules.Nowadays,as the number of vehicles is increasing on the road,traffic problems have become part of our life.Some people run the red light at the crossing and others ride their b
7、ikes on the roadway.Some drivers drive too fast in the street.All the behavior presents potential danger.If we dont obey the traffic rules,there might be more traffic jams and accidents.To keep the traffic smooth,I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walking in the street to
8、make sure we are safe and avoid trouble.Also,I think it is necessary to lay stress on the traffic safety education.Lets_take_responsibility_for_ourselves_and_others_and_take_action_now！B请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，谈谈你对“Details Determine Success”的理解。_答案：Details refer to something ordinary and specific,such as a
9、 word,a movement and a look.Maybe it seems tiny,but it is part of work and life,and is the basis to achieve success.Everything is composed of details which may be the very things that have a great impact on what were doing.Attention to details is actually a kind of ability that gradually forms over a long period,and it is also a kind of working attitude.A persons working attitude reflects his life attitude which,in return,determines his life achievement.Therefore,only by paying attention to details can we achieve success.