2023版高考英语一轮总复习 专题八 短文改错习题.docx

1、专题八短文改错5年高考Proofreading 1 (2021全国甲)话题:学校生活难度:中Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble?Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they􀆳re of the same age and can

2、understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we

3、trust mostly.答案1.第二句:are改为is2.第二句:go后面加to3.第四句:friend改为friends4.第五句:删除turn后面的out5.第六句:little改为few6.第六句:our改为their7.第七句:talk改为talking8.第八句:kept改为keep9.第九句:where改为when10.第九句:mostly改为mostProofreading 2 (2021全国乙)话题:家庭生活难度:中I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals.

4、 I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improve

5、s the family relationship. What􀆳s most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That􀆳s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!答案1.第二句:dish改为dishes2.第三句:tidying改为tidy3.第三句:whatever改为whenever4.第四句:a lot后面加from/by5.第五句:was

6、改为is6.第六句:删除like前面的are7.第七句:most改为more8.第七句:mentally改为mental9.第八句:our改为my10.第九句:hopes改为hopeProofreading 3 (2020课标全国)话题:家庭生活难度:中Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cu

7、t the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way,

8、” my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn􀆳t turn out as I had wished.答案1.第一句:simply改为simple2.第二句:frying改为fried3.第二句:删除must后面的to4.第三句:preparing改为prepare5.第四句:but改为and6.第五句:chopstick改为chopsticks7.第六句:off改为on8.第七句:unless改为until/till9.第八句:pan前面加the10.第九句:us改为meProofreading 4

9、(2020课标全国)话题:学习中国功夫难度:中Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I􀆳m glad to know that you􀆳ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I􀆳m surely you􀆳ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for

10、 I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.答案1.第一句:what改为which2.第二句:come后面加to3.第三句:surel

11、y改为sure4.第四句:start改为started5.第四句:for改为but/yet6.第五句:vacations改为vacation7.第六句:such改为so8.第六句:删除every day前面的on9.第七句:yours改为your/you10.第八句:sooner改为soonProofreading 5 (2020课标全国)话题:健康饮食难度:中My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good

12、 health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don􀆳t like the soup and I don􀆳t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we􀆳re forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insi

13、sts on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.答案1.第一句:concerning改为concerned2.第一句:families改为family3.第二句:surely改为sure4.第二句:删除she前面的and 5.第三句:the改为a6.第三句:had改为have7.第四句:like前的don􀆳t改为doesn􀆳t8.第五句:forced后面加

14、to9.第六句:he改为she10.第七句:what改为thatProofreading 6 (2019课标全国)话题:体育运动难度:中I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ba

15、ll and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone􀆳s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player n

16、ow.答案1.第一句:interesting改为interested2.第二句:where改为when3.第三句:football前面加a4.第三句:but改为and5.第四句:hardly改为hard6.第五句:surprising改为surprise7.第六句:player改为players8.第六句:say改为saying 9.第七句:now改为then10.第七句:删除play后面的myProofreading 7 (2019课标全国)话题:成长经历难度:中Since I was a kid, I􀆳ve considered different job I would

17、 like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for th

18、e decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.答案1.第一句:job改为jobs2.第二句:coolly改为cool3.第三句:five改为fifth4.第三句:too改为very/so5.第四句:high school前面加in/at6.第四句:or改为and7.第五句:They改为There

19、8.第六句:amazing改为amazed9.第六句:删除better前面的more10.第七句:is改为wasProofreading 8 (2019课标全国)话题:个人梦想难度:中I􀆳ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very s

20、pecial one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes wil

21、l have a different theme and an unique style.答案1.第二句:opens改为open2.第三句:required改为requires3.第四句:ordinarily改为ordinary4.第五句:have前面加to5.第五句:删除as后面的like6.第六句:yourselves改为themselves7.第六句:what改为that/which8.第七句:manage改为managing9.第八句:city改为cities10.第九句:an改为aProofreading 9 (2018课标全国)话题:乡村变化难度:中During my last w

22、inter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.

23、 They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.答案1.第一句:countryside前面加the2.第二句:f

24、ind改为found3.第三句:another改为other4.第四句:here改为there5.第四句:chicken改为chickens6.第五句:which前面加in/which改为where7.第六句:sell改为selling8.第七句:happily改为happy9.第八句:删除return后面的for 10.第八句:but改为andProofreading 10 (2018课标全国)话题:家庭生活难度:中When I was little, Friday􀆳s night was our family game night. After supper, we wo

25、uld play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.

26、 I didn􀆳t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.答案1.第一句:Friday􀆳s改为Friday2.第二句:sort改为sorts3.第三句:the改为a4.第三句:watching改为watch5.第三句:删除not后面的to6.第四句:us改为me7.第五句:I后面加w

27、as8.第五句:for改为with9.第六句:are改为were10.第七句:where改为whenProofreading 11 (2018课标全国)话题:学校生活难度:中It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the clas

28、s activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake

29、as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand.答案1.第一句:begin改为begun2.第二句:wait改为waiting3.第二句:and改为or4.第三句:eager后面加to5.第四句:myself改为my/the6.第五句:删除afraid后面的that7.第五句:larger改为large8.第六句:include改为includes9.第六句:mistake改为mistakes10.第七句:Immediate改为ImmediatelyProofreading 12 (2017课标全国)话题:学习驾驶难度:中In the summer holiday f

30、ollowing my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor􀆳s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeat

31、ing the word,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案1.第一句:eighteen改为eighteenth2.第二句:firs

32、t前面加the/my3.第三句:so改为but/yet4.第三句:goes改为went5.第五句:word改为words6.第五句:Turning改为Turn7.第六句:删除so后面的much8.第七句:late改为later9.第八句:suddenly改为sudden10.第八句:on改为ofProofreading 13 (2017课标全国)话题:周围的人难度:中Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half

33、 to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informati

34、ons from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案1.第一句:all改为both/删除all2.第二句:about后的a改为an/one3.第三句:interesting改为interested4.第三句:that改为which5.第四句:earlier改为early6.第五句:删除bought后面的for7.第六句:Beside改为Besides8.第六句:informations改为information9.第七句:came改为comes1

35、0.第七句:students后面加toProofreading 14 (2017课标全国)话题:回忆高中生活难度:中When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a

36、 new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings

37、 back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案1.第一句:删除realize后面的of2.第二句:had改为have3.第二句:and改为but4.第三句:took改为taken5.第三句:become改为became6.第四句:picture前面加the/this7.第四句:they改为that/which8.第五句:difference改为different9.第五句:late改为latest10.第六句:your改为my3年模拟Proofreading 1 (2022届山西运城测试) 话题:瞻仰凡高难度:易July

38、29, 2021 marks the 131st anniversary of Van Gogh􀆳s die. As a big fan of Van Gogh, I fulfill my lifelong dream this summer by taking a trip to Europe. I first traveled to the Netherlands, where Van Gogh born and lived for most of his life. In Amsterdam I went to the Van Gogh Museum but viewe

39、d hundreds of his works, including much of his greatest paintings. Before visiting Amsterdam, I drove to Saint-Rmy. There Van Gogh, depressing and lonely as he was, he made one masterpiece after another. My last destination was The Church at Auvers, where continues to keep the subjects of Van Gogh&#

40、1049011;s paintings looking just as they did when he painted them. At that moment I had never felt close to Van Gogh. 答案 1.第一句:die改为death2.第二句:fulfill改为fulfilled3.第三句:在born前加was 4.第四句:but改为and5.第四句:much改为many6.第五句:Before改为After7.第六句:depressing改为depressed8.第六句:把made前的he删除 9.第七句:where改为which10.第八句:clo

41、se改为closer Proofreading 2 (2022届昆明一中摸底)话题:一位公交司机的壮举 难度:易The hero in my heart is an ordinary bus driver, who did what he could save the lives on the bus. In a cold morning, he was driving on the freeway while he had a sudden heart attack. He bears the great pain and braked the bus with perseverance.

42、Finally, he was pulled up on the emergency lane, bring 54 passengers back from the death line. Therefore, he was unconscious and lost his life. He is a common individual, but he did a awesome deed. It is due to his strong sense of responsibility that he saved life in that urgent moment. He set a goo

43、d example for me and what inspires myself in my life is the spirit of being devoted to others. 答案1.第一句:在could后加to 2.第二句:In改为On3.第二句:while改为when4.第三句:bears改为bore5.第四句:去掉was6.第四句:bring改为bringing 7.第五句:Therefore改为However 8.第六句:awesome前的a改为an 9.第七句:life改为lives 10.第八句:myself改为me Proofreading 3 (2022届成都七中

44、测试)话题:给东京奥运健儿的一封信 难度:易Dear athletes, With your excellence, your joy, or your tears, we created the magic of the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games. You were competing fierce with each other for Olympic glory. You inspired us by the power of sports. This was even more remarkable given the many challenges you h

45、ad to face because of pandemic. In this difficult time, you gave the world the most precious giftshope. For the first time since the pandemic begins, the entire world has come together. Sports returned back to the centre stage. Billions of people around the globe were united by emotion, share moment

46、s of joy and inspiration, what gives us hope and faith in the future. Yours,Li Hua答案1.第一句:or改为and 2.第一句:we改为you 3.第二句:fierce改为fiercely 4.第三句:by改为with 5.第四句:在pandemic前加the 6.第五句:gifts改为gift 7.第六句:begins改为began 8.第七句:删除back9.第八句:share改为sharing 10.第八句:what改为which Proofreading 4 (2022届河南天一大联考阶段性测试)话题:成为

47、环保卫士的建议 难度:中Would you like to be a greener person to protect the environment? Here was some advice. You should reduce the waste you produce daily. You can use all sides of the paper and collecting the drinking bottles. Remember to sort the waste so that it can be well recycle. It would be better for

48、 you turn off the power in your house when you go out. Instead of driving your car everywhere, you can save energy by either walking nor riding a bike. Beside, take a bag along when shopping to avoid using too many plastic bag. Last but not least, never spit in the public. It is real easy to be an e

49、co-friendly person. 答案1.第二句:was改为is 2.第四句:all改为both 3.第四句:collecting改为collect 4.第五句:recycle 改为 recycled 5.第六句:在turn off前加to 6.第七句:nor改为 or 7.第八句:Beside改为Besides 8.第八句:bag改为bags 9.第九句:去掉the 10.第十句:real改为really Proofreading 5 (2022届河南许昌质检)话题:以“劳动”为主题的班级活动 难度:中Last week, our class carried out an activi

50、ty, which theme is about labour.At first, the important of labour was emphasised by our teacher. Keep what he said in mind, I packed the suitcase all by me before setting off. Then come the two-day activity. We were asked to helping the fruit farmer pick and deliver the watermelons. Exhausted though

51、 I was, I experienced great sense of achievement from hard work. When I came back to home, I couldn􀆳t wait to share with my parents the forgettable experience. I harvested very much from the activity that they were both proud of me.答案1.第一句:which改为whose 2.第二句:important改为importance3.第三句:Keep改

52、为Keeping 4.第三句:me改为myself5.第四句:come改为came 6.第五句:helping改为help 7.第六句:在great前加a 8.第七句:去掉back后的to 9.第七句:forgettable改为unforgettable10.第八句:very改为soProofreading 6 (2022届云南师大附中测试)话题:旅游的好处 难度:中Traveling had become increasingly popular over the years. Perhaps one of the big reasons is that it makes people fe

53、el refreshed. Other reason is that it allows us to escape our lives. Sometimes, what our mind really need is a break from the same atmosphere. When we travel, more often than not, we will spend great deal of time outdoors, that is the best medicine for a mind locked indoors for most of the time. But

54、 traveling allows us to adopt to new perspectives. Strange enough, it􀆳s when we take a break from our problems that they sometimes manage to find solutions to them.答案1.第一句:had改为has 2.第二句:big改为biggest3.第三句:Other改为Another4.第四句:need改为needs 5.第五句:在great前加a 6.第五句:that改为which7.第六句:But改为And8.第六句:删

55、除adopt后的to9.第七句:Strange改为Strangely 10.第七句:they改为weProofreading 7 (2022届南宁摸底)话题:毕业之际的心情和计划 难度:中As June is coming, I will leave for my high school soon. I feel real excited because that mean I􀆳m going to start my college life. At same time, I􀆳m a little sad because I can imagine sayi

56、ng goodbye to my classmates and teacher. I want to take some photos with both of them. We will not be together so we will be friends forever. We will keep in touch with each other by send e-mails on the Internet. In the past three years I had learned not only how to study, but also how to be a man.

57、I will work even harder in the future to become the proud of my school.答案1.第一句:删除for2.第二句:real改为really 3.第二句:mean改为means4.第三句:At后加the5.第三句:teacher改为teachers6.第四句:both改为all7.第五句:so改为but8.第六句:send改为sending9.第七句:had改为have10.第八句:proud改为prideProofreading 8 (2022届西南四省名校大联考)话题:回国后表示感激之情 难度:中I have returned

58、 back to my country safe and sound. I really wanted to express my gratitude to my host for that he has done for me. During my stay with him, I was good looked after and he showed me around many place of interest, which left a deep impression on me. In addition, with her help, my oral English has gre

59、atly improved. Besides, I have better knowledge of American culture. With its atmosphere attracted me, I hope I can have a second chance to go there.As the winter vacation is at the corner, I hope he can spare some time to visit China. Unless he comes, I will accompany him to enjoy the beauty of Chi

60、nese culture.答案1.第一句:去掉back 2.第二句:wanted改为want 3.第二句:that改为what4.第三句:good改为well5.第三句:place改为places6.第四句:her改为his7.第五句:have后加a 8.第六句:attracted改为attracting9.第七句:at改为around10.第八句:Unless改为IfProofreading 9 (2022届山西长治质量监测)话题:发生在日本的一次地震 难度:难March 11, 2011 was a holiday in Japan. Everything was going on lik

61、e usual. Most people were at home while there came an extreme loud sound like thunder. Next, people􀆳s houses began to shake. Buildings cracked and water pipes bursting. In the town of Fukushima (福岛), the main street went up into the air ten feet, holes opened up in the ground, and buildings

62、 fell into ruins. People were shocking by the unexpected quake. Some ran up and down the street, while others were trapped in the buildings were looking out their windows for help. An earthquake that hit Japan was one of the strongest disaster in the world. Many towns were destroyed in the earthquak

63、e and a great number of people was killed. Most seriously, the Fukushima nuclear accident happened.答案1.第二句:like改为as 2.第三句:while改为when3.第三句:extreme改为extremely4.第五句:bursting改为burst5.第七句:shocking改为shocked6.第八句:删除trapped前的were7.第八句:out后加of 8.第九句:An改为The 9.第九句:disaster改为disasters 10.第十句:was改为were Proofre

64、ading 10 (2022届哈尔滨六中期中)话题:散步时发现了生活中的美 难度:难 People always say that we lack of the eyes to realize the beauty in life. I can􀆳t agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I found several elders absorb in

65、feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized that the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shop, which used to be old and shabby, were decorated pretty well and caught my attention. On both sides of the street were big trees covering the whole city, making a green city. At that moment, I

66、found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!答案1.第一句:去掉of 2.第二句:complete改为completely3.第三句:wake改为waked或woke 4.第四句:there改为where 5.第四句:absorb改为absorbed6.第五句:but改为and 7.第六句:shop改为shops8.第七句:making后加it 9.第八句:a改为the 10.第九句:ignore改为ignoring Proofreading 11 (2021云南文山教学质检)话题:未来规划难度:

67、中Does the university you attend or the major you choose determine your success in the future? According up to a recent survey done by China Youth Daily, 48.6 percent of participants believe that the university one goes to plays a important role in shaping their future. On the other hand, 33.8 percen

68、t of people held the view that it􀆳s what you do in the university which matters. For some students, they think that a prestigious university does bring many benefit. Without access to academic training in college, she wouldn􀆳t have successfully got their invaluable experience. Howe

69、ver, others believe that choose the right major has much weight than choosing a good university. Both the university and one􀆳s major are important, and they don􀆳t necessary determine your life. It􀆳s what one has learned that matters.答案1.第二句:删除According后面的up2.第二句:plays后的a改为

70、an3.第三句:held改为hold4.第三句:which改为that5.第四句:benefit改为benefits6.第五句:she改为they7.第六句:choose改为choosing8.第六句:much改为more/much后面加more9.第七句:逗号后的and改为but10.第七句:necessary改为necessarilyProofreading 12 (2021郑州示范性高中阶段性考试)话题:健康家庭难度:中In your e-mail, you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. H

71、ere is my advice. Generally spoken, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally, that is important for the family. What􀆳s more, children or parents both benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the ad

72、dition, every member should give other member right expectations. Finally, you should love my own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.答

73、案1.第一句:ask改为asked2.第三句:spoken改为speaking3.第四句:obviously改为obvious4.第四句:逗号后的that改为which5.第五句:or改为and6.第六句:删除In后面的the7.第六句:other后面的member改为members8.第七句:my改为your9.第八句:are改为is10.第九句:appreciate后面加itProofreading 13 (2021“皖南八校”联考)话题:校园生活难度:中As it we all know, do exercise is good for our health. I join in a s

74、chool sports meeting at the beginning of this term. There were many activity that we could do, such as running, the relay race or so on. All the students and teachers took part all kinds of sports competitions. I joined in the boys􀆳 100-meter relay race of Senior 3 with three another boys f

75、rom our class. We won the first prize with your efforts. I felt very happily not only because we won but also because we enjoyed doing sports, where helped us to be stronger and healthier.答案1.第一句:删除we前面的it2.第一句:do改为doing3.第二句:join改为joined4.第三句:activity改为activities5.第三句:or改为and6.第四句:part后面加in7.第五句:an

76、other改为other8.第六句:your改为our9.第七句:happily改为happy10.第七句:where改为whichProofreading 14 (2021云南师大附中适应性月考)话题:智能手机携带细菌难度:中Tens of million of people carry their smartphones with them everywhere they go, included the bathroom. Our phones are always within their grasp, which means they are also constantly bein

77、g exposed to however bacteria we may have accumulated on our hands. Unfortunately, a new survey of 1,200 Americans and their cleaning habits find that 25 percent of them have never cleaned their phones. Researchers estimate that a regularly use smartphone that has never been cleaned may hold up more

78、 bacteria than an entire household bathroom. According to survey conducted by the company Vital Vio, that is common for smartphone users to come into contact with various forms of bacteria. Suddenly, eating a sandwich in your bathroom doesn􀆳t sound so badly.答案1.第一句:million改为millions2.第一句:in

79、cluded改为including3.第二句:their改为our4.第二句:however改为whatever5.第三句:find改为finds6.第四句:use改为used7.第四句:删除hold后面的up8.第五句:survey前面加the9.第五句:that改为it10.第六句:badly改为badProofreading 15 (2021广西钦州一中月考)话题:人物故事难度:难My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My

80、 mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my

81、 coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!答案1.第一句:删除last前面的in2.第二句:anything改为something3.第三

82、句:better改为best4.第三句:decide改为decided5.第四句:step改为steps6.第六句:well改为good7.第七句:after改为when/while8.第八句:party前面的a改为the9.第八句:just后面加to10.第九句:enjoy改为enjoyingProofreading 16 (2021银川宁大附中月考)话题:运动会经历难度:中Last week we had a school sports meeting on the playground of our school. All the students in our class took a

83、n actively part in it. John took part in the 1,500-meter race. He was the fastest runner in the race, win a gold medal. Lisa was a short girl,who didn􀆳t do good in the high jump, so we said “Don􀆳t blame yourself” to comfort him. I took part in the 200-meter running race. As soon as

84、 I hear the sound of the starting gun, I tried my better to run faster than others. As I was running, I could hear“Come on! Come on!” from my classmate. That gave me great strength. Finally I was first person to cross the finishing line. As a result of, my class was No.1 in the sports meeting. What

85、proud we were! It was really an exciting day!答案1.第二句:actively改为active2.第四句:win改为winning3.第五句:good改为well4.第五句:him改为her5.第七句:hear改为heard6.第七句:better改为best7.第八句:classmate改为classmates8.第十句:first前面加the9.第十一句:删除result后面的of10.第十二句:What改为HowProofreading 17 (2021四川省南充高级中学月考)话题:运用新方法游览故宫难度:难During the holiday

86、, I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, where left me with deep impression. To avoid waste time buying a ticket on the spot, I made a reservation online. I got my ticket from a machine without difficulty and start the exploration. I was deep attracted by the grand architecture. To my exci

87、ted, I could scan the QR codes to get detailed informations. With the VR glasses on, I even found me back to the time when the palace was under construction. How impressive! I found the Forbidden City both traditional or modern because of our history was made alive here.答案1.第一句:where改为which2.第一句:dee

88、p前面加a3.第二句:waste改为wasting4.第三句:start改为started5.第四句:deep改为deeply6.第五句:excited改为excitement7.第五句:informations改为information8.第六句:me改为myself9.第八句:or改为and10.第八句:删除because后面的ofProofreading 18 (2020四省八校上学期质检)话题:旅游经历难度:中Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of foreigner. I found a tour

89、guide which spoke both English and Chinese because of I was not confident with my English. Interesting, some native English speakers joined me in the trip. When we are in the Grand Canyon, we lost contact with our guide but everyone was worried. All of sudden, my phone rang and it was from the guide

90、, said that he would wait for us at the gate of the Canyon. He asked I to inform the other members. I collected my courage to tell them in English, and then I was praising by them. I felt more confident afterwards. 答案1.第一句:foreigner改为foreigners2.第二句:which改为who/that3.第二句:删除because后面的of4.第三句:Interesti

91、ng改为Interestingly5.第四句:are改为were6.第四句:but改为so/and7.第五句:sudden前面加a8.第五句:said改为saying9.第六句:I改为me10.第七句:praising改为praisedProofreading 19 (2020河南名校线上联考)话题:个人倡议难度:中I think teenagers in China should have a specially festival that I would call it Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most teenagers i

92、n China are brought up as a only child in the family. They usually given too many care and attention.Through volunteering, teenagers may learn to think of others and many other important life lesson. In Teenager Volunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to volunteer wherever you are needed. They may h

93、elp to raise money for people which suffer from a serious disease. They may go to a home for the aged to do what is good for old people, or collecting books for children in poor areas.答案1.第一句:specially改为special2.第一句:删除call后面的it3.第二句:a改为an4.第三句:They后面加are5.第三句:many改为much6.第四句:lesson改为lessons7.第五句:In改

94、为On8.第五句:you改为they9.第六句:which改为who10.第七句:collecting改为collectProofreading 20 (2020安徽合肥质检)话题:个人梦想难度:中I have been decided to become a pilot since I am a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across sky, I feel extremely excited but want to fly it. That is why I believe it can make me happily and f

95、ree. To make my dream come true, I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and work out regularly. Besides, I must work hard to make great progresses with my studies. Although it is not that easy to being a pilot, I􀆳ll never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.答案1.第一句:删除have后面的been2.第一句:am改为was3.第二句:sky前面加the4.第二句:but改为and5.第三句:why改为because6.第三句:happily改为happy7.第四句:work改为working8.第五句:progresses改为progress9.第六句:being改为be10.第六句:them改为it