1、Section Writing如何写好故事性记叙文My Experience in the Morning FogFog is a natural phenomenon. It usually appears in the morning, which makes people cant see clearly.It is Tuesday today. I got up very early to do some jogging as usual. When I got out of the building, I found that I was surrounded by the fog.
2、 I didnt know whether I was in a dream or not, because everything was not clear. The street lights seemed far away, like stars in the sky. I couldnt see anything or anybody three meters away. I could only hear some sounds. Suddenly I heard the sound of a car, but when the driver saw me, the car almo
3、st knocked me down. Its too dangerous, but I was safe. Just my hair was wet.The morning fog was gradually disappearing when the sun rose in the east. All the things were clear again. However, I can never forget this day.布局1话题特点故事性记叙文是以叙事为主要方式、以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体。在写作时，要把握好记叙文的六个要素，即五个W和一个H，时间(wh
4、en)，地点(where)，人物(who)，事件(what)，原因(why)和过程(how)。结构：常见的故事性记叙文的结构常分为三段：第一段：交代事情发生的时间、地点、人物等要素。第二段：进一步叙述发生了什么事以及如何发生的，在必要时可加入冲突，以达到故事高潮。第三段：结尾要尽量自然，做到水到渠成，可适当谈一下自己的感想，发表自己的看法，以达到升华文章主题的目的，但不宜过多。2话题词汇(1)hear听到 (2)consider考虑(3)intend打算 (4)meet遇到(5)find发现 (6)adventure冒险(7)experience经历 (8)start out/off出发(9)
5、without delay/hesitation毫不迟延/犹豫(10)learn. by heart记住3话题句式(试着替换方框中的黑体部分，变成你需要表达的意思)(1)Seeing this/Hearing this, I as soon as possible.看见/听见这种情况，我尽快朝他跑了过去。(2)I was taking a walk when .我正在湖边散步，这时我看见一个人从自行车上摔了下来。(3)Without hesitation/Without a word, I decided to .二话没说，我决定去帮助他。(4)What surprised/attracted
6、/delighted us most was that .最使我们吃惊的(吸引我们的/使我们高兴的)是那里的天空这么晴朗。(5)Tired as we were, we learned what .尽管很累，但我们学到了在学校学不到的东西。(6)Ill never forget the day which/that .我永远都不会忘记在农场度过的这天。某英文杂志栏目向读者征集有关消费者受广告欺骗而购物的文章，请你参照以下四幅图片，给该英文杂志栏目写一篇关于你购买照相机的经历。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：冲洗develop；胶卷film遣词1承诺 _2在前面 _
7、3出售 _4情不自禁做某事 _5两卷 _6迫不及待去做某事 _7照相 _8吃惊 _9出版；(照片)冲洗 _10对要明智 _造句1完成句子(1)人们离不开广告。Peope _ advertisements.(2)广告承诺便宜的商品和免费的礼品。Advertisements _ and free gifts.(3)我买照相机的经历很糟糕。I _ buying a camera.(4)我走在街上，在一家商店前看到一则广告。I _ in the street and _ in front of a shop.(5)这则广告说这种照相机只卖20元。The advertisement _ the came
8、ras were on sale for only 20 yuan each.(6)我看到了诱人的价格，忍不住走进商店买了一部相机和两卷胶卷。I saw the _， and _ the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of films.(7)我很兴奋，迫不及待地邀请我的朋友去附近的公园拍照。I was so excited that I _ invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park.(8)我们玩得很开心，在附近的公园里拍了很多照片。We _ and took lots of photos
9、in the nearby park.(9)我被告知了事实，我的照片一张也没有洗出来。I _ the fact that none of my photos _.2句式升级(10)用定语从句合并(1)(2)句People cannot get away from advertisements _ cheap goods and free gifts.(11)用时间状语从句改写(4)并用现在分词合并(4)(5)句_ the street, I saw an advertisement in front of a shop saying that the cameras were on sale
10、for only 20 yuan each.(12)用现在分词形式改写(6)句_， I couldnt help entering the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of films.(13)用定语从句合并(7)(8)句I was so excited that I couldnt wait to invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park, _ and took lots of photos.成篇_单元重点知识回顾.重点词汇1confirm v. 证实，证明confirmsth./th
11、at从句/wh从句(尤指通过提供更多证据)证实be confirmed _ sb. 被某人认可_ has been confirmed _.已确定/证实confirm sb. _ (belief/opinion/view)使某人确信信念/意见/观点2crowd n. 人群(1)a crowd _ (crowds _)一群(成群)(2)crowd _ ones mind 涌入某人的脑海crowd _ 聚集在周围；聚拢crowd _ (on sb.)(想法、问题等)涌上心头；涌入脑海(3)_ adj. 拥挤的；挤满的；充满的be crowded _ 挤满；充满着3attempt n. 努力，尝试(
12、1)attempt _ sth. 尝试做某事(2)make an attempt _ doing sth. 试图做某事_ the first attempt 第一次尝试(3)_ adj. 未遂的4thrill n. 惊险，刺激(1)Its a thrill _ sth. 因做某事而激动a thrill _ doing sth. 因做某事而激动(2)_ adj. 非常兴奋的_ adj. 惊险的，扣人心弦的_ n. 惊险小说/电影5injury n. 伤，损害do _ injury _ sb. 伤害某人be an injury/injuries _ sb./sth. 是对某人/某物的伤害6char
13、ge n. 主管，负责(1)free _ charge_ free 免费_ charge _. 掌管；负责(表状态)in/under _ charge of. 在掌管之下；由照料_ charge of.掌管；负责(表动作)(2)charge sb. some money _ sth. 因某事向某人收取的费用charge sb. _ doingaccuse sb. _ doing 指控某人犯罪be charged _. 被控告7permit v. 允许，准许，许可n. 许可证(1)permit sb. sth. 允许某人某事permit sb. _ sth. 允许某人做某事permit _ st
14、h. 允许做某事(2)_ n. 允许，许可_ ones permission 在某人的许可下/未经某人的许可_ ones permission 请求/获得某人的允许8relate v. 相联系，有关联；讲述(1)relate._.把和联系在一起relate sth. _ sb. 向某人叙述/讲述某事relate _.和有关联；理解(2)_ adj. 相关的；有(亲属)关系的be related _. 和有关的；和有联系的(3)_ n. 关系in/with relation _ 关于_ n. 关系，联系9astonish v. 使吃惊，使惊讶(1)_ astonishes sb. _. 令某人感
15、到吃惊的是_ astonishes sb. is. 使某人吃惊的是(2)_ adj. 吃惊的(多修饰人)be astonished _. 对感到惊讶be astonished _ sth. 做某事感到惊讶be astonished that.对感到惊讶_ adj. 令人吃惊的(多修饰物)(3)_ n. 惊讶，吃惊_ ones astonishment 让某人感到惊讶的是_ astonishment 惊讶地10distinguish v. 看清；认出(1)distinguish _._. 区分/辨别和distinguish._. 使有别于distinguish _ (as.)(作为)表现突出di
16、stinguish oneself _.某人因而突出(2)_ adj. 卓越的；著名的；杰出的be distinguished _. 因而出名11surround v. 环绕，围绕(1)surround sb./sth. _ sb./sth. 使某人/物包围某人/物be surrounded _. 被包围(2)_ adj. 周围的_ n. 环境12_ 使成为焦点13_ 转身，翻转14_ 在前面；提前；领先；胜过.教材原句1For these people, climbing Qomolangma is an experience like no other, _， _.对于这些人来说，攀登珠峰
17、是一次与众不同的体验，让一些人感到弱小，另一些人则感到强大。2Research also _ our desire to seek risks can be connected to how much we expect to benefit from the result.研究表明：我们想去寻找刺激的愿望是和我们期待能够从结果中获得多少联系在一起的。3_ Ned Land can think only of escaping, Aronnax and Conseil are fascinated by their adventures in the new underwater world.
18、尼德兰只想着如何逃脱，而阿罗纳克期和孔塞伊被水下的精彩历险所吸引。4_ the calm surface of the sea.我的头上是平静的海面。.单句语法填空1Youd better ask the teacher for _ (permit) to leave before you go.2Theres no way of knowing why one man makes an important discovery _ another man, also intelligent, fails.3All of a sudden, the thief walking behind a
19、young and beautiful woman seized her handbag, rushing into _ crowd.4Shelly prepared carefully for the exam so that she could be sure of passing it _ the first attempt.5Dont let _ (fail) discourage you, for you can never tell how close you may be to victory.6Is it he or you who are in charge _ the jo
20、b and supposed to complete it punctually?7Unconscious of the danger ahead _ her, she walked deeper into the woods to seek her fortune.8Gone _ (be) the days when we had nothing to eat.9The tiny fire in the stove _ (gradual) died down, and it was getting dark outside.10They made up their mind that the
21、y _ (buy) a new house once Larry got a job.Section Writing遣词1promise2.in front of3.on sale4.cant help doing sth.5.two rolls of6.cant wait to do sth.7.take photos8.be surprised9come out10.be smart about造句1(1)cannot get away from(2)promise cheap goods(3)had a very bad experience of(4)was walking; saw
22、an advertisement(5)says that(6)attractive prices; couldnt help entering(7)couldnt wait to(8)had a good time(9)was told; came out2(10) which promise(11)When I was walking in(12)Seeing the attractive prices(13)where we had a good time成篇People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goo
23、ds and free gifts. I had a very bad experience of buying a camera.Last Wednesday, when I was walking in the street, I saw an advertisement in front of a shop saying that the cameras were on sale for only 20 yuan each. Seeing the attractive prices, I couldnt help entering the shop to buy one camera a
24、nd two rolls of films. I was so excited that I couldnt wait to invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park, where we had a good time and took lots of photos. After that, I sent the films to a shop to be developed.Unfortunately, when I went to collect my photos this morning, I was surprised t
25、o be told that none of my photos came out. At that time, I regretted getting a bargain for 20 yuan and I thought I should be smart about advertisements in future and not be tricked by them.单元重点知识回顾.重点词汇1by; It; that; in2(1)of; of(2)into; around; in(3)crowded; with3(1)to do(2)at; at(3)attempted4(1)to
26、 do; of(2)thrilled; thrilling; thriller5an; to; to6(1)of; for; in; of; the; take(2)for; with; of; with7(1)to do; doing(2)permission; with/without; ask for/get8(1)to; to; to(2)related; to(3)relation; to; relationship9(1)It; that; What(2)astonished; at/by; to do; astonishing(3)astonishment; to; in10(1
27、)between; and; from; oneself; by(2)distinguished; for11(1)with; by/with(2)surrounding; surroundings12bring.into focus13.turn around14.ahead of.教材原句1making some feel weak and others; powerful2.suggests that3While4.Above me was.单句语法填空1permission2.while3.the4.at5.failure6.of7.of8.are9gradually10.would buy
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