1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家专项技能保分练(二十三)短文改错Test 12019成都第二次诊断Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground
2、. But my friend encouraged me great. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me together and kept going. After threehour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we also found a hotel that loo
3、ked very much inviting.答案与解析：Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, turned out to be pretty for the hike. I am not an hiker and those endless steps me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me . “Look, the top is c
4、oming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled together and kept going. After threehour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful on the way, we got to the top finally. our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very inviting.that改为which考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是backpacks，应用wh
5、ich引导该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。heavier改为heavy考查形容词。分析句子结构可知，此处pretty是副词，相当于very，并没有比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可。故将heavier改为heavy。experiencing改为experienced考查形容词。根据句意可知，此处表示“我不是一个经验丰富的远足者”，应用experienced“经验丰富的，有经验的”，experiencing没有这个意思。make改为made考查动词的时态。与上文中的“Last year”呼应可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。great改为greatly考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作
6、状语，故用greatly修饰动词“encouraged”。me改为myself考查反身代词。与句子的主语I呼应可知，此处应用I的反身代词myself作动词pull的宾语，表示“使自己振作起来”。After后加a考查冠词。hike是可数名词，被“threehour exhausting”修饰，表示“一次三个小时的令人筋疲力尽的远足”，且threehour的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a修饰。sceneries改为scenery考查名词。scenery是不可数名词，没有复数形式。For改为To考查固定搭配。表示“令某人快乐的是”应用to ones pleasure，介词to在此表示“某事发生时
7、某人的反应”。删除much考查副词。very是副词，可修饰形容词，在句子中作状语，而much是副词，一般修饰形容词的比较级，此处修饰形容词inviting应用副词very，故删除much。Test 22019河南五校联考Dear Daniel，Im really delighted to learn that you have won first prize in your schools Chinese Traditional Culture Quiz last week. Im writing to offer your congratulations to you from the bo
8、ttoms of my heart.I know that you have always being interested in Chinese traditional culture since you came from China. Learning Chinese is not easy for you, and you keep on studying it hard. Now your efforts have paid off. There is your hard work that leads you to so a great success. Im sure you w
9、ill achieve an even great success in your future studies.Wish you happy stay in China!Yours ，Li Hua答案与解析：Dear Daniel，Im really delighted to learn that you won first prize in your schools Chinese Traditional Culture Quiz last week. Im writing to offer congratulations to you from the of my heart.I kno
10、w that you have always interested in Chinese traditional culture since you came China. Learning Chinese is not easy for you, you keep on studying it hard. Now your efforts have paid off. is your hard work that leads you to a great success. Im sure you will achieve an even success in your future stud
11、ies.Wish you happy stay in China!Yours ，Li Hua删除won前的have考查时态。句中有明确地表示过去时间的状语last week，因此不能与现在完成时连用，只能用一般过去时。your改为my考查代词。根据语境可知，此处表示“我写信向你表示我真心的祝贺”，故congratulations前的物主代词应用my。bottoms改为bottom考查名词的单复数。from the bottom of ones heart“从内心，真心地”，是固定搭配，bottom用单数形式。being改为been考查时态。根据时间状语从句since you. China可知，
12、此处应用现在完成时，故将being改为been。from改为to考查介词。根据语境可知，Daniel从国外来到中国，故用to。and改为but/yet考查并列连词。句意：学中文对你来说并非易事，但是你坚持努力学习。前后分句之间存在语意上的转折关系，故用but/yet。There改为It考查强调句。根据后面的that和语境“正是你的努力带领你取得如此大的成功”可知，本句是强调主语部分的强调句结构，故只能用It。so改为such考查限定词。soadj.a/an单数可数名词sucha/anadj.单数可数名词，表示“如此的”，故此处要用such。great改为greater考查形容词的比较级。上文提
13、到Daniel取得了很大的成功，此处表示“我确信你会在未来的学业上取得更大的成功”，语意上有递进关系，故用形容词的比较级。happy前加a考查冠词。stay作“停留，逗留，暂住”讲时，为可数名词。Test 32019石家庄一模The other day, we moved to the new school yard, where lies in the far north of the city. We were all on high spirits. It is much big than the old one. The classrooms are bright and clean.
14、 We have a lot of modern equipment, making convenient for students to learn every subject. Now we can have a lot of afterschool activity on the new playground. Our teachers often play the basketball and soccer together with us. As spring approached, the flowers newly planting in the yard have just c
15、ome out. With such many green trees and fragrant flowers around, we feel it less hardly to study and our school life more enjoyable.答案与解析：The other day, we moved to the new school yard, lies in the far north of the city. We were all high spirits. It is much than the old one. The classrooms are brigh
16、t and clean. We have a lot of modern equipment, making convenient for students to learn every subject. Now we can have a lot of afterschool on the new playground. Our teachers often play basketball and soccer together with us. As spring , the flowers newly in the yard have just come out. With many g
17、reen trees and fragrant flowers around, we feel it less to study and our school life more enjoyable.where改为which考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为the new school yard，在从句中作主语，故应用which引导该定语从句。on改为in考查介词。句意：我们都兴高采烈。in high spirits为固定搭配，意为“情绪高”。big改为bigger考查形容词的比较级。根据该句中的“much”“than”可知，此处应用形容词的比较级。making
18、后加it考查代词。分析该句结构可知，making后缺形式宾语来指代动词不定式to learn every subject。activity改为activities考查名词的单复数。此处activity“活动”为可数名词，根据该句中的“a lot of”可知，该处应用复数形式。删除the考查冠词。表示球类、牌、棋等游戏名称的名词前用零冠词。approached改为approaches考查动词的时态和主谓一致。根据语境可知，该处描述的是当前的情况，故用一般现在时；主语spring为第三人称单数，故用approaches。planting改为planted考查非谓语动词。动词plant和其逻辑主语t
19、he flowers之间为动宾关系，故用过去分词形式作后置定语。such改为so考查副词。根据many可知，该处应用副词so。hardly改为hard考查形容词。句意：有这么多绿色的树和芳香的花在周围，我们觉得学习不那么困难了，我们的学校生活更愉快了。根据句意和前面的副词less可知，该处表示“不那么困难”，应用形容词hard。hardly为副词，表示“几乎不”，不符合语境。Test 42019太原一模My senior high school life is almost over. Although looked forward to entering college, I cant he
20、lp missing those good old days very much that I feel sad. Im unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar. However, I come to realize nature never stood still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die and new one come to life. We, like everything in nature, has to a
21、dapt to the changes. Before knowing it, I am a kind of calm. Now Id like to recall the most wonderful things what have happened, and accept happy whatever is to happen.答案与解析：My senior high school life is almost over. Although forward to entering college, I cant help missing those good old days much
22、that I feel sad. Im unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar . However, I come to realize nature never still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die and new come to life. We, like everything in nature, to adapt to the changes. knowing it, I am kind of calm. No
23、w Id like to recall the most wonderful things have happened, and accept whatever is to happen.looked改为looking考查现在分词。分析句子结构可知，look和其逻辑主语I是主谓关系，所以把looked改为looking。very改为so考查固定用法。根据句意可知，此处是so. that.结构，意为“如此以至于”，所以把very改为so。familiar后加with考查介词。根据句意可知，此处应为be familiar with sth.“熟悉某事物”。所以在familiar后加with。sto
24、od改为stands考查时态。根据语境可知，此处为客观描述，应用一般现在时，所以把stood改为stands。one改为ones考查代词。分析句子结构并结合语境可知，此处指代“Plants and animals”，所以用ones。has改为have考查时态和主谓一致。句意：像自然界中的一切，我们不得不适应变化。此处为一般性描述，应用一般现在时，且主语是We，谓语动词应用复数，所以把has改为have。Before改为After考查介词。句意：知道了这一点之后，我有点儿冷静了。根据句意可知此处应用After。删除kind前的a考查冠词。句意参见上题解析。kind of表示“有点儿”，为固定用法，故a多余。what改为that考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句，指代前面的最高级形式“the most wonderful things”，所以把what改为that。happy改为happily考查副词。修饰动词一般用副词，故用副词happily修饰动词accept。- 6 - 版权所有高考资源网