1、Section Writing描写标志性动物技法指导1篇章结构描写标志性动物时有以下几种写作方法可以采用：(1)总分结合法采用总分结合法描写动物时，要注意总述与分述之间的关系。分述部分要紧紧围绕总述的内容来写，包括动物的外表、栖息地、食物来源等方面。此外，分述要有一定的顺序。(2)特征说明法采用特征说明法描写动物时，一般先介绍动物的某一特征，再说明该特征的作用或说明为什么会具有这样的特征。接着用同样的方式介绍动物的其他特征。(3)重点突出法采用重点突出法描写动物时，首先要仔细观察此动物，找出它与众不同的地方并加以描述。其次在描述动物最主要的特点时，可采用比喻、拟人等修辞手法，使重点更加突出，给
2、读者留下深刻的印象。2常用表示.is an animal that/which lives in the mountains.是一种生活在山里的动物。It feeds/lives on.它以为食/靠为生。.is known as the national treasure of China.被称为中国的“国宝”。Therefore，.can find. easily, which they like to eat very much.因此，不用费力就能找到它们非常爱吃的.is one of the rare animals in the world, which is loved by bot
3、h the Chinese and the people around the world.是世界稀有动物之一，为中国人民和全世界人民所喜爱。To protect the., measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves.为了保护，(人们)应该采取措施建立一些自然保护区。精品展示假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信说他十分喜欢大熊猫，想请你介绍大熊猫的有关信息，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1大熊猫是世界稀有动物之一，现存仅几千只；2大熊猫的外表和主要栖息地；3呼吁大家保护大熊猫。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行
4、文连贯。_审题谋篇第一步：明确要求该写作是对标志性动物的描写，时态主要为一般现在时第二步：确定段落第一段：介绍写作背景，得知对方想了解有关大熊猫的情况，决定写信告之第二段：对大熊猫的描述第三段：呼吁大家保护大熊猫第三步：提炼要点1_ 目前，现在2_ 好像3_ 以为生4_ 缺少，缺乏5_ 灭绝6_ 建立7_ 自然保护区第四步：句式升级大熊猫是世界珍稀动物之一，它作为中国的国宝为大家所知晓。(一般表达)The giant panda is one of the rare animals in the world. It is known as the national treasure of Ch
5、ina.(高级表达)_连句成篇_Section Writing描写标志性动物审题谋篇第三步1at present2.as if3.feed on4.a lack of5.die out6.set up7.nature reserves第四步The giant panda is one of the rare animals in the world, which is known as the national treasure of China.连句成篇参考范文：Dear Mike，Informed that you are willing to know something about t
6、he panda, Im writing to tell you something about it.The giant panda is one of the rare animals in the world, which is known as the national treasure of China. However, only several thousand pandas exist in the world at present. This black and white animal has two black eyes, as if wearing a big pair of sunglasses. Pandas live in the bamboo forests in the west and north of Sichuan Province, feeding on bamboos.However, a lack of food makes pandas on the point of dying out. In my opinion, measures should be taken to set up more nature reserves to save pandas from dying out.Yours，Li Hua