1、Section 写作指导写作方法指导给朋友写一封有关旅行计划的电子邮件写作储备阅读教材P30电子邮件，提炼电子邮件的写作特点。.写作格式有两种格式：1齐头式，即日期，正文，署名全在左边顶格写。教材中采用的是这种格式。2空格式：日期，署名在右边，正文每段开头空两格。.黄金写作模块.写作常用词汇1pack up整理，把打包2around the corner即将来临3take a bus/train乘公共汽车/火车4go on a tour/sightseeing旅行/观光5book a ticket订票6make arrangements for.为安排7in advance/ahead of
2、time提前8broaden ones view/horizons开阔眼界9take advantage of/make use of利用10as follows如下11set out/off出发12leave for sp.动身去某地13enjoy the scenery欣赏风景.写作常用句型1Here/Below is my travel plan.这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。2Winter holiday is coming/approaching.I have a plan for it.寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。3Im planning to travel to Suzhou, a
3、 city called Eastern Venice.我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。4May Day is coming/approaching, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游看看它美丽的风景。5Im planning to go there by train and come back by bus.我计划乘火车去那儿， 乘公共汽车回来。典例剖析假如你是王林，请根据下面的表格内容给你的朋友李华写一封电子邮件，介绍你的国庆北京旅行计划。第一天颐和园第二天
4、长城第三天天安门、清华大学和北京大学第四天国家游泳中心注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。审题谋篇.定框架好的开始，成功的一半体裁电子邮件人称第一人称时态一般将来时、现在进行时表示将来框架首段：点明主题中段：详细介绍尾段：询问看法.定要点、关键词及动词时态打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样的极优作文要点一：国庆节就要来了。 The National Day is approaching/coming/around the corner. 要点二：我计划从10月1日到4日花4天时间到北京旅行。 I am planning to s
5、pend 4 days from October 1st to October 4th visiting Beijing. 要点三：在第一天，我打算参观颐和园。 On the first day, I am visiting the Summer Palace. 要点四：据说它是中国最大的保存最完好的古代皇家园林。 It is said to be the largest and bestpreserved royal park in China. 要点五：在第二天，我要参观长城。 On the second day, I will visit the Great Wall. 要点六：它作为世
6、界七大奇迹之一为世人所知。 It is known to the world as one of the seven great wonders of the world. 要点七：第三天我要早起去天安门看升旗。 On the third day, I will get up early and go to Tiananmen Square to see the flag rising. 要点八：然后我要参观北京大学和清华大学。 Then, I will visit the Peking University and Tsinghua University. 要点九：我梦想进入这两所大学中的一
7、所。 I am dreaming of entering one of these two universities. 要点十：第四天我要参观国家游泳中心。 On the fourth day，I will visit the National Aquatics Center. 要点十一：它也被叫作水立方。 It is also called “Water Cube” .词汇、句式升级创造极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一：用since引导的从句连接要点一和要点二 Since the National Day is approaching, I am planning to spend 4 days
8、 from October 1st to October 4th visiting Beijing. 升级句式二：用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接要点三和要点四 On the first day, I am going to visit the Summer Palace, which is said to be the largest and bestpreserved royal park in China. 升级句式三：把要点六改为含有as引导的非限制性定语从句的复合句 As is known to the world, it is one of the seven great w
9、onders of the world. 升级句式四：用非谓语动词作后置定语合并要点十和要点十一 On the fourth day, I will visit the National Aquatics Center, also called “Water Cube” .组建极优作文水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉Dear Li Hua， A wonderful trip, do you agree?Yours，Wang Lin参考范文：Dear Li Hua，Since the National Day is approaching, I am planning to spend 4 days
10、 from October 1st to October 4th visiting Beijing. On the first day, I am visiting the Summer Palace, which is said to be the largest and bestpreserved royal park in China. On the second day, I will visit the Great Wall. As is known to the world, it is one of the seven great wonders of the world. On
11、 the third day, I will get up early and go to Tiananmen Square to see the flag rising. Then, I will visit the Peking University and Tsinghua University. I am dreaming of entering one of these two universities. On the fourth day, I will visit the National Aquatics Center, also called “Water Cube”A wo
12、nderful trip, do you agree?Yours，Wang Lin即学即练假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封email，分享你的出行计划。要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚；2第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品；3第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方明珠，欣赏上海全貌；4元月24日乘坐高铁返回。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：high speed railway(高铁)book(预订)Disneyland(迪士
13、尼乐园)recreation facilities(游乐设施)souvenir(纪念品)Shanghai Science and Technology Museum(上海科技馆)Oriental Pearl Tower(东方明珠)Dear Li Hua，How is everything going？ How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours，Wang Ming参考范文：Dear Li Hua，How is everything going? As the winte
14、r holiday is coming, I will have a fourday trip to Shanghai with my family. Here is my plan.We are leaving for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 200 pm. on Jan.21st. Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, online in advance, so that we can have enough
15、energy to visit Shanghai. On the second day, we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities, and buy some souvenirs at the same time. On the third day, we are visiting Shanghai Science and Technology Museum. Besides, we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower, from which
16、 we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai. We are also taking photos along the way to record our trip. On Jan. 24th, we will take the high speed railway back home. After I return, I will share all my photos with you.How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours，Wang Ming