1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT 4 Exploring literature如何写推荐信推荐信是向有关单位或个人推荐或介绍有关人、物或地点等的专用书信。推荐信书写要求如下:1说明被推荐者的基本情况。推荐人时,应包括姓名、性别、年龄、业务水平、工作能力、身体状况等;推荐某物品、地方或去处时,应包含具体位置、如何到达、服务水平、用途等。2说明推荐的理由。要求写得具体、充分,如实地介绍优点,客观地叙述理由。如有短处,一定坦诚相告,让对方对被推荐的人或物能有比较全面的了解。3语气上要诚恳,既不能自高自大,又不能妄自菲薄。4时态一般以现在时为主;如有回顾过去的情况,可以穿插着使用过去时。基本框架 推荐信一般采
2、用三段式:1开头概括说明要推荐的内容;2主体从表面和深层两方面叙述推荐的东西的价值;3结尾简单归纳总结或表达期待与感谢。常用词块 1offer sb.some recommendations 向某人提议 2make a big decision 做出一个重大的决定 3choose the hotel on their recommendation 根据他们的推荐选了这家酒店 4as far as Im concerned 我认为 5a well-known tourist attraction 一个著名的旅游胜地 6a suitable candidate 一位合适的人选 7with a de
3、ep sense of gratitude 怀着深深的谢意 8have a wide range of uses 有广泛的用途 9 take into consideration the candidates experience and qualifications 考虑到候选人的经验和资格 10the value of regular exercise 经常锻炼的好处 常用语句 精彩开头 1Learning you want to read a Chinese novel,I cant wait to write to recommend a classical novel A Dream
4、 in Red Mansions to you.得知你想读中国小说,我迫不及待地写信向你推荐一部经典小说红楼梦。2Please allow me to introduce one of my best friends to you.请允许我向你介绍一位我最好的朋友。3Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture,I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.既然你对中国文化很感兴趣,我认为北京语言大学是你理想的地方。正文佳句 1T
5、he reason why I recommend.is that.我推荐的原因是 2There are rich places of interest in Xian,so it is worth visiting.西安有丰富的名胜古迹,所以值得参观。3So I hold the belief that.be(am/is/are)quite suitable for the post.所以我认为很适合这个职位。余味结尾 1Thanks for your attention and hope to receive your reply.多谢你的关注,希望能收到你的回复。2I would be
6、grateful if you could give her some help.如果你能给她提供一些帮助我将不胜感激。3Ill be more than happy if you can take my suggestions/ideas into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封 80词左右的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。注意:信
7、的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Wang,_ _ _ Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendations.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 学生习作 Dear Mr.Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some suggestions.We need popular science books most.Usually popular science books explain basic rules of natu
8、re in a simple and interesting way.They help us understand the world better and make us curious about scientific discoveries.Besides reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another kind of books:literary books.They were written by famous writers and they present
9、 great thoughts,offer us joy and encourage us to think differently.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendations.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 点评:1文章结构合理,详略得当,重点突出;2文中不乏亮点词汇或句式,例如 for fun and inspiration,recommend,that is why,present(呈现,表达),offer,differently.3不足之处:有些句子还有升格空间。升格作文 Dear Mr.Wang,Knowing
10、that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic rules of nature in a simple and interesting way.They help us understand the world better and make us curious about scientific discoveries.Be
11、sides reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another kind of books:literary books.Written by famous writers,they present great thoughts,offer us joy and encourage us to think differently.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendations.Yours sincerely,Li Yue
12、假定你是李华,你的朋友张柯发邮件,就买什么样的英语词典征求你的建议。请你回复邮件,推荐他买电子词典,内容包括:1方便、快捷;2内置几部词典、能发音;3能储存资料。注意:词数 80 左右。参考词汇:内存 RAM _ _ _ _【参考范文】Dear Zhang Ke,Ive got your e-mail and think it a wise choice to buy an electronic dictionary.To begin with,an electronic dictionary much smaller than the common one is convenient to
13、carry.Additionally,you can get what you want in it immediately.Also it has several dictionaries and you can store material as much as possible because there is RAM in it.What makes it outstanding from others is that it can give you a vivid,clear and correct pronunciation.I do hope my suggestions will be useful to you.Yours,Li Hua 点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!