1、微技能四情绪与情感描写在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法，恰当的情绪与情感描写能够表现文中人物的性格，推动事件的发展。在描述人物情绪与情感时要突出文章的中心，与人物的性格吻合，符合事件发展的逻辑，要选用恰当的词句通过情绪与情感描写精确地刻画人物的内心世界。语言输入素材累积，为续写奠基人物喜乐.词汇积累1. be fond of music 爱好音乐2. a satisfied look 满意的表情3. brighten ones heart 使某人心情愉快 4. yell with delight 乐得大叫5. set ones heart at rest 使某人安心 6. b
2、e wild with delight 欣喜若狂7. be in high spirits 精神高涨 8. be excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜9. be on the top of the world 心满意足，非常幸福10. a mixture of excitement and happiness 既兴奋又开心.佳句背诵1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2. Her flushed face was shining with excitement. 她
3、激动得满脸通红。3. Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks. 幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。4. Her cheerful spirits and hearty laughter infected the whole class. 她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。5. She wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。人物悲忧消沉.词汇积累1. a broken spirit 意志消沉2. cry ones heart out 悲痛欲绝3. with a heavy heart 怀着
4、沉重的心情 4. be seized with panic 惊慌失措5. fall into despair 陷入绝望 6. a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感7. make ones heart bleed 使某人悲痛 8. be down in spirits 情绪低落9. lose ones spirit 垂头丧气.佳句背诵1. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。2. In those days he was in low spirits. 那些日子里他情绪低落。3
5、. Her hands were shaking and she was on the point of crying. 她的手在颤抖，快要哭出来了。4. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine. 听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。人物怨怒.词汇积累1. displeasure 不高兴2. frustrated 失意的；失望的3. annoyed 恼怒的，气恼的 4. complain constantly 不断地抱怨5. flame with anger 气得满脸通红 6. be/get
6、 mad at sb. 对某人勃然大怒7. have a worried look 愁眉苦脸8. express/voice a complaint about 对表示不满9. run out of the room in a burst of anger 怒气冲冲地跑出房间10. feel discouraged 感到泄气的.佳句背诵1. His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。2. He could hardly/ scarcely control his anger. 他几乎控制不住怒火。3. They stopped arguing and
7、glared at each other. 他们停止了争论，相互怒视着对方。4. He gave me a look of burning anger. 他愤怒地看了我一眼。5. This failure leaves the child depressed and frustrated. 这次失败使这个小孩沮丧失意。人物其他情绪.词汇积累1. serious 严肃的，庄重的 2. shame 羞愧；耻辱3. yawn 打呵欠 4. hopeless 没有希望的，绝望的5. not in the least is he interested in 他对一点也不感兴趣6. mixed with
8、the emotion of anxiety and hope 混合着焦虑与希望的情绪7. set off strong feelings 引起强烈的情感.佳句背诵1. He lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。2. I decided to go for a walk to clear my head. 我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。3. He felt his cheeks burning with shame. 他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。4. She looked at her father straight in the eye
9、and answered his question truthfully. 她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。5. My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office. 我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。语言输出层级训练，让续写添彩.基础练习补全句子(1)她的笑容照亮了整个房间。Her smile _. (2)那位妇人对找回被盗的珠宝感到非常高兴。The woman _ the recovery of her stolen jewels. (3)令人难忘的是，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着沉稳的微笑。Unforge
10、ttable were her eyes that _ and lips _. (4)她哭了起来，跑出了房间。She _ and ran out of the room. (5)她掩面哭泣。She sobbed _. (6)他的态度使我极为恼火。His attitude _. (7)别生我的气，我这样做完全是为了你好。Dont _. I did it all for your own good. (8)他的表情突然严肃起来。His face suddenly _. .综合演练完成读后续写，注意情感描写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和提示进行续写，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ali and his you
11、nger sister，Zahra，lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job，and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.One day, Al
12、i took Zahras shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed，but he lost them on the way home.It wasnt until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed，so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share A
13、lis running shoes.Zahras school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.Ali
14、 heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start, but halfw
15、ay through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third
16、. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided(碰撞)with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.【根据提示完成范文】Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. He dashed across the finish line
17、and won the fourth place. Thinking he would (1)_ (让他妹妹失望), Ali (2)_ (情不自禁哭了起来). Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third place as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule. Holding the shoes close to his chest during the awar
18、d ceremony, Ali (3)_ (感到非常高兴，并如释重负) as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. She (4)_ (非常紧张) whether her brother would bring her w
19、hat she was expecting.“Zahra, see what I have got for you.”he took the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands. The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face (5)_ (高兴起来). (6)_ (她非常激动) that she threw herself at Ali.“Thank you！Ali.”(7)_ (高兴的眼泪流了出来) as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.
20、【答案】.(1)lit up the whole room(2)was delighted at(3)shone like diamonds；in a steady smile(4)burst into tears(5)hiding her face in her hands(6)made me extremely annoyed(7)be/get mad at me(8)grew serious.(1)let his sister down(2)couldnt help sobbing(3)felt overjoyed and relieved(4)was really nervous(5)lit up(6)So thrilled was she(7)Tears of joy welled up their eyes