1、35分写作规范抢分练(六)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)2020福州市高中毕业班质量检测I am David. As a eighteenyearold student in Senior 3, there have always a new challenge just around the corner! At times they can be quite stressful, which in turn makes me feel very worry. In order to help deal this, I go jogging a
2、s often as possibly. Whether Im at the gym and on the road, my nervous energy push me through one mile. By the second mile, the tension has moved from my mind to my leg. By the end of the run, all my stress has been disappeared and I am ready to meet more challenges with confidence the next day!第二节书
3、面表达(满分25分)2020绵阳市高中第三次诊断性考试假定你是某校的高三学生李华，高考后的暑假你打算去澳大利亚旅游，请你用英语给你身在悉尼的网友Justin写信，内容包括以下要点：1问他是否可以到机场接机；2请他推荐行程安排；3邀他同游。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Justin，How are you doing?_Yours，Li Hua35分写作规范抢分练(六)第一节答案与解析：I am David. As eighteenyearold student in Senior 3, there always a new
4、challenge just around the corner! At times can be quite stressful, which in turn makes me feel very . In order to help deal this, I go jogging as often as . Whether Im at the gym on the road, my nervous energy me through one mile. By the second mile, the tension has moved from my mind to my . By the
5、 end of the run, all my stress has disappeared and I am ready to meet more challenges with confidence the next day!a改为an。冠词误用。student是可数名词，又是第一次在语境中出现，所以应用不定冠词修饰，此处指作者自己，又eighteenyearold的发音以元音音素开头，故用an。have改为is。句型误用。此处考查“There be”句型Therebe主语其他成分。have表示“有”时，句子的主语往往是人。另，“There be”结构主谓遵循就近原则，即此处谓语的单复数形
6、式与a new challenge(单数形式)保持一致，故用is。they改为it。代词误用。此处代指前一句中的“a new challenge”(单数形式)，故用it。worry改为worried。名词和形容词混用。此处作系动词feel的表语，修饰人，应用形容词worried。deal后加with。介词漏用。deal with sth.“处理某事”是固定搭配，故此处应加介词with。possibly改为possible。副词和形容词混用。as. as possible“尽可能”是固定搭配，故用形容词possible。and改为or。连词误用。此处表示“不管我是在健身房还是在路上”，故此处应用
7、连词or，表选择。push改为pushes。主谓不一致。此处是不可数名词作主语，故谓语应该用单数形式。leg改为legs。名词的单复数误用。根据语境可知，此处表示紧张从思想转移到了双腿，是指作者的两条腿，由此可知，应该用legs。删除been。动词的语态误用。disappear是不及物动词，没有被动形式，故删除been。第二节参考范文：Dear Justin，How are you doing?You said you wanted to meet me in your last letter and I am very glad to tell you Im planning to pay
8、a visit to Australia this summer vacation. Will you meet me at the airport the day I get there?As a native, you must be very familiar with the attractions of your country. So I need your advice on where to go and what to do during my stay in Australia. And Ill be overjoyed if you can join me in the trip. Im sure well have a great time together.Yours，Li Hua