1、Section Writing慰问信 文体感知1慰问信是向对方表示关怀和慰问的信函。它是以组织或个人的名义向对方表示问候和关心的一种信函。2慰问信的格式和一般英文信件格式相同,要明确慰问信的对象。3明确文章结构:开头,表明写慰问信的原因;主体,向对方的遭遇表示同情并鼓励对方或表达自己想帮助对方的愿望或具体措施;结尾,表示写信者的良好祝愿或同情之心。4语言要亲切、生动,感情要充沛、真挚。 增分佳句1Im shocked/sorry to hear that you are worried about your figure/shape.听说你在为你的体型而忧虑,我感到很惊讶/抱歉。2Im wri
2、ting to express my deep sympathy/care for you.我给你写信来表达我对你的同情/关心。3I understand how you feel now./I know the way you feel very well now.我理解你现在的感受。 写作模板Dear ,Im sorry to know that _(问题). The truth is everyone will experience _, so you dont have to worry so much. Here are three useful tips.First _(建议).
3、This is a good way of _. Second, _(建议).Last but not least, _I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 写作要求(2019大连高一检测)假设你叫李华,是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信,提到自己偏胖,想节食减肥,征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信,谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下:1健康的重要性;2.学生的任务;3.合理的建议。注意:1短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;2词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);参考词汇:s
4、tate of mind 心态。 审题谋篇 词汇推敲1减肥lose weight2多锻炼 get/take more exercise3不健康的饮食习惯 unhealthy eating habits4影响你正常的生活 affect/influence your normal life5保持一个健康的心态 keep a healthy state of mind6克服困难 overcome difficulties 遣词造句1完成句子像你这个年龄的女孩希望看起来漂亮。这是很自然的。Young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. It is nat
5、ural对一个学生来说,学习是最先考虑的而容貌是其次。For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.通过多锻炼以及改变不健康的饮食习惯来减肥是一个好主意。It is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits.最重要的是你要保持健康的心态,因为这有助于你的学习,而且有助于你克服节食中的困难。The most important thing is th
6、at you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.2句式升级合并句It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.用非限制性定语从句改写句The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, which will help wit
7、h your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting. 妙笔成篇Dear Xiao Wang,I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting._Yours,Li HuaOne possible version:Dear Xiao Wang,I have received and read your letter, in which you menti
8、oned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others opinions affect
9、your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, which will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in di
10、eting.I hope my advice will be helpful to you and Im looking forward to your next letter.Yours,Li Hua假定你是李华,从报纸上得知你的美国笔友James的家乡遭遇了飓风。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,给予关心和安慰。注意:1词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear James,_Yours sincerely,Li HuaOne possible version:Dear James,I was greatly shocked to learn
11、 that a hurricane took place in your hometown from todays newspaper. I am writing to extend my deepest sympathy.It broke my heart to see lots of homes had been destroyed in the tragic hurricane. I can imagine how difficult this time must be for you and your family. But where theres life theres hope. Some organisations in my country are launching various campaigns to call on people to donate money in the hope that you can go through the difficulties as soon as possible.Please pass my concerns on to your parents. If I can be of any help, dont hesitate to let me know.Yours sincerely,Li Hua