1、Section Writing关于志愿活动或有关分享的记叙文 文体感知关于志愿活动或有关分享的文章是记述活动的目的、过程以及结果(或影响)的记叙文。注意事项:理清与活动相关的时间、地点、人物、活动的过程以及影响等。明确文章结构:开头部分介绍人物、活动的目的或原因;第二部分介绍活动的过程或者主人公做了什么;最后记述活动对他人、自己或社会的影响。找准时态与人称,理清写作顺序,将文章的要素合理结合,使其完整。 增分佳句1Having had a heated discussion, we decided to do something.热烈讨论后,我们决定做一些事情。2We also realize
2、 that we can do something to those who are in need.我们也意识到我们能对那些需要的人做一些事。3The story may be unbelievable, but it still has a realistic significance now.这个故事可能不可信,但是它现在仍然具有一个现实意义。 写作模板Last week _ in our class volunteered their time to help other people. Having had a heated discussion, we decided to do
3、_(总体介绍活动的目的和背景)On _ day, we set out early in the morning. On ones arrival/arriving, we did _ first. Then, we did _ and did _. In addition, not only did we do _ but also we did _. Last but not least, we did _(叙述活动的过程)We have learned that _. We also realize that we can do _ to those who are in need.(表
4、达对活动的感受和活动的影响) 写作要求你校英文杂志社正在举办有关志愿者活动的征文大赛。请你根据自己的志愿者经历写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1表达对志愿者活动的热爱;2讲述做志愿者的经历;3呼吁更多人参与志愿者活动。注意:1.词数100左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 审题谋篇 词汇推敲1对某事充满热情be_enthusiastic_about_sth.2对某人有益 be_beneficial_to_sb.3对某人有意义 be_meaningful_to_sb.4自愿做某事 volunteer_to_do_sth.5全身心投入到某事 devote_ones_efforts_to_sth.6号
5、召某人做某事 call_on_sb._to_do_sth. 遣词造句1. 完成句子我热衷于志愿者活动,它不仅对他人有益而且对我而言很有意义。I am_enthusiastic_about_volunteer_activities. They are not only beneficial_to_others_but_also_meaningful_to_me自从进入高中以来,我有多次志愿者活动的经历。Since_I_attended_high_school,_Ive had several experiences of being a volunteer.我印象最深的是帮助地震受灾区的受害者。
6、And the_most_impressive_one_is when I volunteered to assist the victims in an earthquake.我一到达受灾地区,就帮忙为灾民发放慰问品。I arrived at the disasterhit area. I helped_to_distribute relief materials to_the_victims我努力帮助医护人员进行救援工作。I devoted_all_my_efforts_to the rescue work with the medical staff.为了安慰那些失去家园的人,我与他们谈
7、话,鼓励他们。To_comfort_those_who_lost_their_family,_I talked with them and inspired them.当一名志愿者使我感到高兴与自豪。Being_a_volunteer makes me delighted and proud.我想号召人人参加志愿者活动。I want to call_on_everyone_to_take_part_in_volunteer_activities2句式升级把中的两个句子合并并升级为定语从句。I_am_enthusiastic_about_volunteer_activities,_which_a
8、re_not_only_beneficial_to_others_but_also_meaningful_to_me.把中的两个句子合并并升级为时间状语从句。As_soon_as_I_arrived_at_the_disasterhit_area,_I_helped_to_distribute_relief_materials_to_the_victims. 妙笔成篇_One possible version:I am enthusiastic about volunteer activities, which are not only beneficial to others but als
9、o meaningful to me.Since I attended high school, Ive had several experiences of being a volunteer. And the most impressive one is when I volunteered to assist the victims in an earthquake. As soon as I arrived at the disasterhit area, I helped to distribute relief materials to the victims. In additi
10、on, I devoted all my efforts to the rescue work with the medical staff. Besides, to comfort those who lost their family, I talked with them and inspired them.Being a volunteer makes me delighted and proud. Here I want to call on everyone to take part in volunteer activities.假定你叫李华,上周末你和几位同学在学校附近的孤儿院
11、做志愿者,请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文。内容包括:1时间和地点;2活动的主要内容:分发礼物;教他们阅读和写作;打扫卫生和洗衣服;3你的感受。注意:1.词数100左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:孤儿院orphanage_One possible version:Last weekend, some of my classmates and I went to work as volunteers in an orphanage near our school.When we got there, all the children welcomed us happily. We
12、were touched deeply and gave them big hugs. After that, we gave away presents to them, and taught them reading and writing. Besides, we helped to clean their rooms and wash their clothes. Seeing the sweet smiles on their faces, we felt very pleased. This valuable experience impressed me deeply and inspired me to keep on helping those in need.