1、 一篇短短只有100词左右的文章，很容易写成“流水账”，让阅卷老师感到枯燥乏味，这也是大多数考生只能得“平庸分”的主要原因。但若一篇文章中出现了35个不落俗套的亮点词汇、23个高级句式，再加上顺畅衔接的过渡，就能让长时间工作疲劳的阅卷老师精神一振，毫不吝啬地给出高分。“平庸分”到“高分”，仅差美化之功。本层级精设4讲，让你在大众化的写作上略施粉黛，实现由平庸习作到高分习作的跨越。第1招亮点词汇星光闪耀闪闪阅卷老师的“眼”高考阅卷通常在1分钟内阅完一篇习作，由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳，大众化的词汇只能让阅卷老师感到越来越困乏。但如果一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高级词汇，则会让阅卷老师眼前一亮、精神一
2、振，作文增分提档自在情理之中。一、使用亮点词汇的4个思考角度1“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。To be honest, his help has a great impact on me.To be honest, his assistance has a great impact on me. (2020全国卷书面表达)I think its a good idea.Its a chance to make the Chinese culture better known to international studen
3、ts.I think its a good idea.Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.(2019江苏高考书面表达)Im busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.Im occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examinati
4、on, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017天津高考书面表达)2更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal
5、 to you, including many matches.(2017全国卷书面表达)Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.3单词短语，巧妙互用
6、一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。Knowing that you like classical music, Id like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance.Knowing that you are fond of classical music, Id like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance.(2019全国卷书面表达)
7、Ive decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.Ive made up my mind to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017全国卷书面表达)4低级淘汰，高级替代为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中阶段学过的词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来
8、代替。200 students from all grades took part in this running race.200 students from all grades were involved in this running race.(2020新高考全国卷写作)I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Im sure you will have a great time.I hope my advice will be beneficial to you. Im sure you will have a great time.(201
9、8全国卷书面表达)Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017天津高考书面表达)二、使用亮点词汇的3点提醒1注意增加亮词的“出镜率”，变“消极”词汇为“积极”词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇
10、，也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背到的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生词汇。因此在备考过程中，考生要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大量的亮词妙语却用不出来。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出
11、彩的表达，如“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？2注意亮点词汇使用的场合写作时，在用词上不可随心所欲，决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语，也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇，否则给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失。一般来说，一篇文章能用好三至五个高级词汇就可以了。另外，为能更好地“完成规定的写作任务”，减少错误，特别提醒考生在使用高级词汇时，一定要注意遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，并且要注意使用的场合，难词和生僻词汇并不一定就是高级词汇，例如：Early in t
12、he morning we purchased some New Year presents. (purchased太过于书面化，改为bought更地道)一大早我们买了一些新年礼物。3记牢用熟常用到的24个亮点词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmake sense ofdeveloppromote
13、considertake into account形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/ significantinterestingabsorbing/ appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyin a flashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandas well asThats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will
14、be a better choice.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.(2017北京高考书面表达)那就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择。In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。 强化落实训练.请用高级词汇替
15、换下列句子中的加黑部分1(2020全国卷书面表达)When I have problems in English learning, my teacher listens to me patiently and explains them carefully, helping me overcome the difficulties.encounter2(2020全国卷书面表达)I decide to study hard, to be a useful person to the country and to contribute to the improvement of peoples
16、lives.am determined3(2019全国卷书面表达)As the match is very important, we have to make good preparations in advance.of great importance/significance4(2019浙江高考写作)But if hes out there every day and playing hard，you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.are supposed to5(2019全国
17、卷书面表达)In addition, I can introduce the Chinese paintings in detail and give help to anyone who is in need.as well as6(2019全国卷书面表达)I am very glad to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school.more than delighted7(2018天津高考书面表达)The training schedule, apart from regular training, includes
18、 joining in various activities, such as participating in some national competitions.a variety of8(2017全国卷书面表达)So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.Therefore; make preparations for.用所给单词的高级词汇补全句子1就我而言，我认为游客的数量应得到
19、限制，理由如下。(believe)As for me, I am convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.2更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致进攻性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。(cause)Whats worse, violent video games can lead to/result in aggressive behaviours, which is more harmful than violent movies.3我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。(way)We wi
20、ll be exploring different approaches to gathering information.4(2018天津高考书面表达)因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。(chance, advice)Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance.5所获得的经验对我们有很大价值。(valuable)The experience
21、gained will be of great value to us.6由于晚上休息不好，课堂上我总是感到筋疲力尽。(tired)Not sleeping well at night, I always feel exhausted in class.请用高级词汇升格下面的学生习作假定你是李华。你的英国网友Gary给你发来邮件，询问你高考后的暑假计划。请你给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1介绍假期计划(如读书、旅游、做志愿者等)；2邀请对方来中国游玩。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Gary，How is everythin
22、g going？ Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua学生习作Dear Gary，How is everything going? In your last email, you asked about my plan for the summer vacation. Im writing to tell you something about it. As you know, this is my last holiday before I go to university. So I am going to use it doing some
23、thing Ive been eager for. Reading some books is the first thing on my list, which I believe will definitely enrich my mind. In addition, Im going to spend four weeks teaching kids English in my community as a volunteer. Hopefully, my English can be improved too. At the end of the vacation, Ill take
24、a trip around Beijing. And I would like you to join.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua我来升格将文中加黑词汇升级1asked aboutshowed interest in2SoTherefore3am going tointend to4usemake use of5eagerlonging6believeam convinced7definitelybe sure to/be bound to8tooas well9joinparticipate第2招高级句式镶嵌其中亮亮自身写作的“功”写
25、作时应避免结构相同、句式单一式的表述，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列复合句和主从复合句并用，还可以使用简化句等，这样可以使文章读起来抑扬顿挫、韵味十足，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，也能赢得阅卷老师的认可。以下从4个方面教考生如何打造高级句式。一、准确使用高级简单句有些句子过于冗长，让句子显得不够简洁，如果用单词、介词短语、非谓语动词等简化句子，可使句子变得更加优美。1用单词简化句子As he was tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.Tired and hungry, the boy was unwillin
26、g to move on.2用介词短语简化句子We will not finish the task if you do not help us.Without your help, we will not finish the task.3用非谓语动词简化句子Mary came late, which made her teacher angry.Marys coming late made her teacher angry.Because he did not know what to do, he had to ask the teacher for help.Not knowing
27、what to do, he had to ask the teacher for help.4用并列结构简化句子I am a music lover. Jack is also a music lover.Both Jack and I are music lovers.二、灵活改变句子开头在英语写作中，倒装句型应用比较广泛，我们可以通过倒装强调我们要传达的信息，让句子更高级，给文章增色。涉及的句型主要包括部分倒装和全部倒装。1“only状语”置于句首时，主句要用部分倒装。(2019全国卷书面表达)Only if we have confidence can we win.只有我们有信心，我
28、们才能获得胜利。2none, neither, nor, not, never, hardly, little, seldom等否定词，以及表示否定意义的介词短语如at no time, by no means等置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。Hardly/No sooner had we arrived at the activity center when/than we signed up to participate in the Walking Contest.我们一到达活动中心就报名参加了健步走比赛。3在so/such .that .结构中，当so/such连同它所修饰的成分共同位于句
29、首时，主句要用部分倒装。So clearly does he speak English that he can always make himself understood.他说英语说得如此清晰，以至于别人都能听懂。4here, there, now, then, out, in, around, up, down, on the wall, in the room等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首，且主语是名词而不是代词时，句子用全部倒装。Here are my tips for you.这是我给你的建议。In that picture, around the table wi
30、th three books on it sit three students.在那幅画中，三个学生围坐在桌子周围，桌子上有三本书。For a moment nothing happened.Then came voices all shouting together.有一段时间什么也没发生，然后传来了大家一起喊叫的声音。三、合理使用省略句英语中为了避免重复，句子中的某些部分可以省略，从而让文章显得紧凑自然。省略句在写作中的巧妙运用应得到重视。写作中常见的省略有下列几种情况：1在以when, while, once引导的时间状语从句及以if, unless引导的条件状语从句和though, a
31、lthough引导的让步状语从句中，如果从句中的主语与主句中的主语一致或从句的主语为it，且从句中含有be动词时，可以省略从句中的“主语be动词”部分。(2020全国卷书面表达)While enjoying being close to nature, we began to help pick peaches covering every tree.在享受亲近大自然的同时，我们开始帮忙摘每棵树上的桃子。(2017全国卷书面表达)In addition, if(you are) interested, you can take part in the process of papercutti
32、ng in person.此外，如果你感兴趣，你可以亲自参加剪纸过程。If (it is) possible, Im going to visit some homes for the old in the city.如果可能的话，我将去探望市里的几家敬老院。2两个并列句中，后一个分句中与前一分句中相同的部分常省略。My brother is a doctor and my sisterinlaw (is) a lawyer.我哥哥是医生，我嫂子是律师。Many players believe table tennis is not only a physical game but (tabl
33、e tennis is) a psychological competition as well.许多选手认为，乒乓球不仅是体力竞赛，也是心理较量。四、适当运用非谓语结构众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。而恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。1运用非谓语动词转换简单句写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换，使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用“三步法”：示例第一步：写出两个简单句。I want to improve m
34、yself by reading some books.The books were written in the Tang Dynasty.第二步：让句作主句，用非谓语动词改写句。第三步：让句作定语，由于其动词write与主语the books之间为被动关系，故用过去分词短语作定语。I want to improve myself by reading some books written in the Tang Dynasty.(2017全国卷书面表达)其他几个转换的例子如下：The farm is surrounded by green trees. It is located at t
35、he foot of the hill near our school.Surrounded by green trees, the farm is located at the foot of the hill near our school.(2020全国卷书面表达)Mount Tai stands in Shandong Province. It has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it.Standing in Shandong Provin
36、ce, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it.(2017北京高考书面表达)2运用非谓语动词转换复合句用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可，所以只需两步。示例第一步：写出复合句。Since you have realized that your time is limited, youll have to study for your
37、goals without anger or hesitation.第二步：把since引导的原因状语从句转换为非谓语动词，realize与you之间为主动关系，且表示完成，故用现在分词的完成式作状语。Having realized that your time is limited, youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.其他转换的例子如下：Because I thought that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the proble
38、m and tried to work it out in a different way.Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. 强化落实训练.句型转化(改为高级简单句)1We have access to an exploration of a variety of cultures by learning English.Learning English gives us an acces
39、s to an exploration of a variety of cultures.2Shanghai, which is one of the biggest cities in China, is the most developed.Shanghai, one of the biggest cities in China, is the most developed.3I wasnt good at communicating with others, which made me feel lonely.Not being good at communicating with ot
40、hers made me feel lonely.4As time went on, the class are beginning to know me better.With time going on, the class are beginning to know me better.5If you speak more, write more and read more, you can improve your English before you know them.By speaking, writing and reading more, you can improve yo
41、ur English before you know them.6Because she is working hard, she is bound to rank first in the coming exam.Working hard, she is bound to rank first in the coming exam.利用倒装句型，结合提示补全短文In front of my home 1.lies a mountain (有一座山), which is very high.2Never will I forget (我永远不会忘记) the first time I clim
42、bed the mountain with my father.The sky was clear and the sun was shining brightly.3.So fast did my father walk (我父亲走得如此快) that he was far ahead of me.Not until he stopped to wait for me 4.did I catch up with him (我才赶上他).5.Tired as/though I was (尽管我很累), I didnt give up.When reaching the top, we felt
43、 a sense of achievement.6So is the life (生活也是这样)We shouldnt give up halfway, however great the difficulties are.Only in this way 7.can we succeed (我们才能成功).用非谓语动词进行句型转换1I went back home proudly that afternoon.I jumped with joy.I went back home proudly that afternoon, jumping with joy.2To return to th
44、e problem of water pollution, Id like you to look at a study. It was conducted in Australia.To return to the problem of water pollution, Id like you to look at a study conducted in Australia.3The books were ordered over a week ago. The books are expected to arrive any time now.Ordered over a week ag
45、o, the books are expected to arrive any time now.4When I saw a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.Seeing a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.5After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be th
46、e winner.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner. 用省略结构补全句子1(2018全国卷书面表达)如果迟到了，你最好给主人打个电话解释一下你为什么迟到。If late, youd better give the host a call explaining why you are late.2(2018全国卷书面表达)正如预期的那样，它不仅有意义而且有趣。As expected, it will be not only meaningfu
47、l but also interesting.3(2017全国卷书面表达)如果这样的话，请到教学楼二楼的学生会办公室报名。If so, please go to sign up at the Students Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building.4(2017浙江6月高考写作)按照计划，我们早上7点将在学校大门口乘公共汽车出发。As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate.5如果你被录取做这份工作，你很快就会接到通知。
48、If accepted for the job, youll be informed soon.6当我沿着马路走时，听到有人喊我的名字。While walking along the street, I heard my name called.第3招衔接过渡水银泻地搭建语句顺畅的“桥”缺乏衔接过渡的文章，就好比一串断了线的珍珠，每个词句虽光彩夺目，拿出来却七零八落，不堪受用。要想成就一篇美文，光靠一个个华丽词句的堆砌不行，还需要穿珠之线，这个线就是衔接过渡。增分技法一过渡自然的对比用语比较或对照法是英语作文的基本写作方法之一。在这类作文的表达中，要使作文连贯、流畅，有条理，灵活运用对比类过渡
49、连接词至关重要，过渡词也是信息词，能较好地表明作者想比较或对照的意图。对比用语大致分为两类：(一)相似的比较常用的有for one thing .for another (一方面另一方面), in the same way (以相同的方式，同样地), just as (正如), similarly (相似地，类似地), equally (同样地)。如：(2020江苏高考书面表达)For one thing, the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to fam
50、iliarize themselves with what is going on in China. For another，China enjoys a long history and rich culture.一方面，过去几十年的整体发展如此引人注目，以至于他们渴望熟悉中国正在发生的事情。另一方面，中国有着悠久的历史和丰富的文化。(二)相反的比较常用的有on the other hand (另一方面), on the contrary (相反), compared with/to (与比较), in comparison with (与比较), in contrast (to)(和对比
51、), instead (相反), while (而；然而), unlike (不像), however (然而)，whereas (然而；反之), yet (然而)。As a citizen, we mustnt do anything to harm our city. On the contrary, we should obey the city rules and protect the city environment.作为一个公民，我们不能做损害我们的城市的事。相反，我们应该遵守城市规则，保护城市环境。(2019全国卷书面表达)As we all know, friendship
52、always comes first. However, we should still make good preparations for the match, and try our best to be the winner.众所周知，友谊第一。然而，我们仍然应该为比赛做好准备并尽力赢得比赛。增分技法二不要人云亦云的因果桥梁词(一)让“因为”变得不简单“因为”，如because等很难激起阅卷老师心底哪怕一丝丝的涟漪。如何有效诠释这个人们时常挂在嘴边的“因为”呢？我们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多变的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。1首先as
53、 a result of, as a consequence of, due to, owing to, on account of, thanks to, by reason of, for the reason of, for the sake of等介词短语都将是你不错的选择。(2020浙江1月高考写作)There is no doubt that you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas, because of your abundant skills.毫无疑问，你有足够的资格和经验来表达你的想法
54、，因为你有丰富的技能。2若想连接句子，则可使用since, for, as, now that, in that, considering等连接词。Since it happened, why not try hard to get it settled?既然事已发生，为什么不努力去解决它呢？3倘若认为以上表达稍显单调，则可加入各种从句。譬如：借助名词性从句，可构成owing/due to the fact that .此类表达；借助定语从句，可构成which results from/accounts for/makes for等表达。Due to the fact that Ryan wa
55、s severely injured in the car accident, he was immediately sent to the ICU.由于在车祸中受了重伤，瑞恩立刻被送往重症监护病房。Generation gap, which may result from differences in thoughts and consciousness, makes it hard for children to live harmoniously with their parents.代沟可能产生于思想和意识上的分歧，它让孩子们很难与父母和睦相处。(二)炫酷“结果”表达法简单地使用“be
56、cause, so”来表示英语中的因果关系，难免会使你的作文落入俗套。然而，若巧妙运用一些小心机，借用炫酷“结果”表达法，则极易引人入胜。1表达“结果”“因此”，可借用以下衔接词：thus, therefore, consequently, as a result, as a consequence等，简洁明了，干净利索。I was badly treated in your store.Consequently, I am writing to you in expectation of getting things settled.在你的店里，我受到了不好的对待。因此，我写信给你，希望事情
57、能得到解决。He worked hard at his study. As a result, he passed the exam easily. 他努力学习，结果，轻松地通过了这次考试。2非谓语动词的加入也为“结果”表达法增色不少，极易吸引阅卷老师的眼球。其中，较为突出的表达有thus/therefore doing, end up doing, only/never to do等，充分展示了非谓语动词这种高级语言结构的妙用。The scientists made joint efforts, thus making a great breakthrough.这些科学家勠力同心，因此取得了
58、重大突破。I eagerly unpacked the package, only to find a broken book in it.我急切地打开包裹，结果只在里面发现了一本破书。3在表达“结果”时，定语从句也可作为生机勃勃的生力军。拥有“结果”“因此”“导致”之意的动词短语、介词短语和定语从句的有机结合，如：which results in/leads to/contributes to或者as a result/consequence of which等，更是为“结果”表达法注入了亮点。When facing troubles, he couldnt keep calm, which
59、 results in his constant failures.面对困境时，他不能保持镇定，这导致他不断失败。增分技法三峰回路转的转折表达法转折关系是逻辑关系中最常见的一种，在高考英语写作中常常会用到，比如在记叙文中表达事情出现转折，在议论文中表达不同的观点等。在转折关系中，最常用的就是although/though和but，二者不能同时使用。例如：Although everyone wants to succeed in trying, sometimes failure cant be avoided.Everyone wants to succeed in trying, but s
60、ometimes failure cant be avoided.虽然每个人都想在尝试中成功，但有时失败是不可避免的。关于转折关系的表达，大致可以分为以下几类：1however, but, yet, whereas“然而，不过，但是”(2019全国卷书面表达)We are confident that we can win the competition, but we must be prepared for it.我们自信能赢得这场比赛，但是我们必须为此作好准备。However, it can be harmful to our friendship.然而，这可能会对我们的友谊造成伤害。S
61、he has her weaknesses, yet that does not mean she is not up to the job.她有缺点，然而那并不意味着她不能胜任这项工作。2otherwise (否则，不然), despite/in spite of/regardless of (不管，不顾), rather than (而不是), instead (of) (相反，而，却), on the other hand (另一方面), unfortunately (不幸地，令人遗憾地)Do your work every day; otherwise, it will pile up
62、.今日事今日毕，否则事情会堆积如山。On the other hand, it causes pollution to our fragile environment, which will in turn do harm to our health.另一方面，它对我们脆弱的环境造成污染，反过来也会损害我们的健康。3although/though/as/while (虽然), even if/though (尽管), no matter .(无论，不管)Although/though I can enjoy more freedom, I realize that being a grownu
63、p means more responsibilities.虽然我可以享受更多的自由，但是我认识到作为成年人也意味着更多的责任。增分技法四多样多变的递进用语大部分学生都能够脱口而出一个递进用语：“not only .but also”。我们在英语学习的过程中已经习惯了很多诸如此类的“简单的递进关系”，因而不常思变。实际上，英语中有很多方式表达递进关系。下面介绍一些可以让文章增色，增加表达效果的递进用语。1常见的递进用语词有：besides/moreover/furthermore (此外；而且), also (也), additionally (另外)等。(2019全国卷书面表达)Additi
64、onally, sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food, we will be fully absorbed in the attractive and fascinating performances.此外，坐在草地上，享受美食，我们将会完全沉浸在迷人的表演中。Besides, I get along well with my parents and my friends.而且，我和父母、朋友之间相处融洽。2我们还可以使用一些短语来表示递进关系，如not only .but also (不但而且), apart from/as wel
65、l as . (此外；除之外), in addition (而且), more importantly (更重要的是), equally important (同样重要的是), last but not least (最后但同样重要的是), worse still/whats worse (更糟糕的是), to make matters worse (使情况更糟糕的是)等。(2018全国卷书面表达)As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. In addition, the English sho
66、rt film will be shown from 9 am to 11 am this Saturday in our school library.正如我们所期望的，它不仅有意义，而且有趣。此外，这部英文短片将于本周六上午9点至11点在学校图书馆放映。The car broke down when I was driving home from work, and worse still, it was pouring with rain.下班回家的路上我的汽车坏了，更糟糕的是，天还下着大雨。增分技法五锦上添花的总结用语一篇优秀的英语写作，不仅仅需要华丽的开篇和意蕴丰满的中段，还需要尾段
67、来锦上添花。尾段虽然要求言简意赅，但也不可太过苍白无力，以免“虎头蛇尾”。巧妙使用合适的总结语，必能让阅卷老师眼前一亮，尽显“低调的奢华”。1插入语的使用，可为英语写作带来完美的结尾。常用的插入语有：all in all, altogether, on the whole, in short/brief/general/conclusion, in a/one word, generally/briefly speaking, to conclude, to sum up, to put it simply等。(2019浙江高考写作)All in all, words fail to expr
68、ess my thankfulness to you.总之，言语无法表达我对你的感激之情。In short, playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident.总之，打篮球丰富了我的生活，使我更加自信。(2019全国卷书面表达)To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.总而言之，我希望你不辜负我们学校的期望。In brief, we cannot emphasize the essence of honesty too
69、much.简言之，我们怎么强调诚信的重要性也不为过。2三大从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)、非谓语动词等各种语法结构的使用，无疑为收束全文锦上添花。As is stated above, a conclusion can be drawn that this volunteer activity is well worth taking part.综上所述，我们可以得出这一结论：这次志愿者活动非常值得参与。Based on the view above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that diligence is of gre
70、at benefit to our development and improvement.基于以上观点，我们可以清楚地得出结论：勤奋对我们的发展和提高极有益处。Judging by the figures, we can easily be aware of the severity of the problem.根据数据来判断，我们不难发现问题的严重性。 强化落实训练翻译句子1(2020全国卷书面表达)我很高兴，因为我帮助了农民。并且我第一次明白了把水果放在餐桌上需要付出多少艰辛。I was very happy because I helped the farmers.And I lea
71、rned for the first time of the difficulty of getting fruits onto the kitchen table.2(2019全国卷书面表达)首先，我非常熟悉中国传统绘画。To begin with/To start with, Im very familiar with traditional Chinese paintings.3(2019天津高考书面表达)另外，我很想学习如何欣赏西方绘画，如果你能告诉我们一些绘画技巧那就太好了。Additionally/In addition，Im crazy to learn how to appre
72、ciate Western paintings, and it cant be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint.4(2019江苏高考书面表达)校服很好，但不够特别，不能给人一种独特的中国风味。The school uniforms are fine, however, they are not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour.5(2018全国卷书面表达)首先，记住，你最好准时到达，或者比约定时间早一点到达，这对于表示你的礼貌很重要。First of
73、all，bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time，which is of great significance to show your politeness.6(2018全国卷书面表达)总而言之，我诚挚地邀请你来我们学校亲自观看。All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.第4招美观书写赏心悦目呈上见字如面的“脸”“字如其人”，说的是
74、能从字的书写风格看出人的性格。虽然有点夸张，却也有一定道理，但有一点是可以肯定的，那就是考场的工整字体代表了一种态度、一份尊重。高颜值的卷面不仅让阅卷老师享受到一份美感，更能赢得阅卷老师的好感，由卷面而获得的潜在的印象分可达23分哟。一、书写有诀窍，细节见分晓1分段大多数文章可分为三段。段落层次清晰，段首对齐或缩进约4个字符的距离。2字母饱满圆润，清晰可辨对于a，o；u，r，v；e，t，c；h，l等在手写体中易于混淆的字母，一定要写清楚，易于辨认。要避免笔顺错误或随意连笔造成的字母混淆。笔顺易错的字母是E，F，H，N，O，R，W，d，i，j，需重点模仿英语规范手写体字帖上这些字母的笔顺。3间距
75、均匀字母与字母之间，单词与单词之间都要间距均匀。单词之间约为一两个字母的宽度，千万不能太拥挤或太松散。如：I come from China.不能写成：IcomefromChina.也不能写成I comefromChina.4倾斜度一致写字母时要注意倾斜度，所有的字母一律向右倾斜5度左右，要保持倾斜度一致。5准确运用标点英语中的标点符号与汉语标点符号基本相同，只有句号、省略号等不一样。英语的句号不是“。”，而是实心的“.”；省略号不是“”，而是“.”。连字符号不要写得太长，以免跟破折号混淆。其长度相当于一个小写字母。英语中没有顿号“、”，在表示句中较短的并列词语之间的停顿时，只能用逗号；连接一
76、系列并列项目的“and”或“or”之前往往可以用逗号。英语中没有书名号 ，一般用斜体或引号。如：Yesterday she saw an English film “Gone with the Wind”6切忌涂抹如果下笔有误，按照短文改错中删词的做法在错单词上自左上到右下画一斜线即可。不能抹黑，影响整篇书写的整洁美观。考生应先做简要的草稿以确保下笔不再涂改。如果同学们能按照以上标准坚持每天训练，一定能在高考英语书面表达中上升一个档次。二、不比不知道，一比吓一跳典例感悟(2018北京高考书面表达第一节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明
77、年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1表示欢迎；2推荐他上哪所大学；3建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：1.词数不少于50；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim， Yours，Li Hua让阅卷老师厌倦的卷面类型典型示例评卷厌倦点1.出现了书信格式错误，开头格式就不对。2.书写潦草，有涂改、增补现象。3.有较多的单词拼写错误、词性应用错误、高级词汇使用错误。4.有较多的语法错误，根本不会使用高级句式。5.表达不地道，出现了大量的汉语式英语。6.语言基础不扎实，整篇文章找不到一个令人感觉良好的句子。让阅卷老师喜欢的卷面类型典型示例评卷兴奋点1.外在美书写规范，卷面整洁，给人赏心悦目之感。2.结构美段落层次合理，条理清晰。很好地利用了“三段式”作文法：第一段：表明写信的目的表示欢迎；第二段：具体说明推荐的学校及专业；第三段：希望对方梦想成真。3.词汇美选词准确，能灵活运用高级词汇，语言功底深厚。4.句式美句式多变，长短句结合，能灵活运用非谓语动词等高级句式。5.衔接美内容连贯，衔接自然，结构紧凑，能有效地使用句子间、段落间的衔接词和过渡语。