1、数据说明类书面表达-作文指导I. How to improve your writingExample Is It The Only Way Out To Go To College?050percentage6040301020上大学不上大学无所谓Views方法一：使用高级词汇Which is better?1. a) 60% of the students want to go to college. b) The majority of us consider it very necessary to go to college2. a) Very few students, that
2、is about ten percent of the students think it no use going university, because its too expensive b) Very few students, that is about ten percent of the students think it no use going university, because the tuition is too high for their family to affordHAVE A TRY1. Only 10% of the students are not w
3、illing to go to college. According to the graph, those who are not willing to go to college only _10%.2. a) They think they can learn more knowledge and improve themselves.b) They think it can broaden _and improve their qualitiesExx3.周末我们会有很多作业要做. A .We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B.
4、 We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 4. 在我所有的老师里,张老师给我留下了很深的印象.A Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr Zhang.B Of all my teachers, Mr Zhang gave me the deepest impression.5. 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired.B. His
5、wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. 6. 他没听我课上讲的东西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class. B He didnt listen to what I said in the class. 方法二：使用多种句子结构Which is better?a) 30% of them think its nothing. 1. b) 30% of them hold the opinion that it doe
6、snt make any difference whether they go to college or not2. a) Only 10% dont want to go to college. b) Few students, that is about ten percent of them think it no use going to university.HAVE A TRY1. They can find better jobs after graduation in this way_find better jobs after graduation(倒装结构)2. We
7、can receive a better education at college and then we can serve our motherlandWe can receive a better education at college _we can serve our motherland(状语从句)Exx3. If she is compared with other teachers , we find she pays more attention to her way of teaching.(-ed) _4. You should keep silent at the m
8、eeting unless you are invited to speak. (连词+分词)_5. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.(倒装/强调)_6. How should we protect eyesight? It still remains a question among us.(主语从句)_方法三：利用模板 表示数据说明类写作套语开头常用套语:The graph above shows that As is shown by the graph / in the chart, From the gr
9、aph / chart above, we can see From the figures given in the table, it can be seen / noticed that数据说明常用套语:The number of nearly doubled The number was 5 times as much as that of. It rose from It decreased twice than that of 1906.The total number was lowered by 10%.Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 t
10、o 10%.The number of amount to/add up to/sum up to/reach (数量总计) increase (rise / fall / drop) from to ）Compared with make up about 原因说明常用套语:vThere are several reasons that account for it. vA number of factors account for .vThe change in. largely results from the fact that.vFirstly/ First of all/ To b
11、egin with, . Secondly, . Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover,. Finally/ Last but not least/, .结尾常用套语:We can draw the conclusion thatIn my opinion/Personally, As far as Im concerned, In short/ in brief/ in a word, It seems clear that Its clear from the chart thatWe can know/learn thatThe resu
12、lts seem to suggest that方法四:把握好文章结构:Part 1: General idea (conclusion/ tendency ) Part 2 Facts: (to support the idea) Part 3 Reasons Part 4 Solutions or personal opinion/suggestions (if needed)A good sample:Is It The Only Way Out To Go To College ?Recently we have had a discussion about whether it is
13、 the only way out for senior students to go to collegeViews vary from person to person. The majority of us consider it very necessary to go to collegeThey think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualitiesOnly in this way can they find better jobs after graduationVery few students, that
14、is about ten percent of the students think it no use going to a university, because the tuition is too high for their family to affordWhats more, its rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory jobsThirty percent of the students, however, believe “All roads lead to Rome” Therefore it does
15、nt make any difference whether they go to college or not In my opinion, we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherlandII. Exercises据所给图表，写一篇题为“电影与电视”的短文。须包括以下要求：(a):Number of TV watchers (b):Number of film goers1 电影观众呈逐年下降趋势。2 电视观众越来越多。（原因：方便，经济，选择范围）3 然而还是有人喜欢看电影。（
16、原因：气氛，娱乐）注意：1 短文要包括主要内容；可适当增减，使内容连贯； From the table, we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city. For example,_From the table, we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city. For example, in 2000, there were less than 10 thousand TV watchers, more than 80 thousand film goers, while in
17、 2010, we have about 1 million TV watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers. The number of film goers is decreasing and that of TV watchers is increasing. Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide range of programs for them to choose from. At the same time, there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment.版权所有：高考资源网()