1、Section 写作园地 |应用文写作关于旅游计划的电子邮件本单元的写作任务是应用文类别中的“电子邮件”。电子邮件的格式和普通信件一样,通常包括五部分,即信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。高考中邮件的信头通常不用写出,只需写出其他部分即可。其中,邮件的正文是重中之重。一、基本结构介绍旅游计划的电子邮件内容一般包括以下几部分内容:1第一部分旅游目的地和出行时间;2第二部分选择目的地的原因;3第三部分旅行中的活动安排。(还可以写关于旅游费用、同行者等内容。)二、注意事项1写作文体:电子邮件属于应用文,但高考中一般都会给出电子邮件的格式。2主体时态:文章通常以一般现在时和一般将来时为主,也可以根据需要
2、适当使用其他时态。3主体人称:主要为第一人称和第二人称。一、开头常用语1Im writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming summer holidays.我写信是想告诉你关于我接下来的暑假的计划。2I have an exciting travelling plan to share with you.我想和你分享一个令人兴奋的旅行计划。二、正文常用语1It is scheduled to take place on . 计划在2I prefer to go to . because . 我更想去因为3First, I
3、m going to . 首先,我打算4I plan to go to . 我计划去5The trip will last X days.旅行将持续X天。6The Xday trip costs about . 为期X天的旅行大概花费7I think this trip sounds really exciting.我觉得这次旅行听起来很让人兴奋。三、结尾常用语1Looking forward to hearing from you.期待收到你的来信。2Looking forward to your early reply.期待你尽快回复。3Do you have any advice?你有什
4、么建议吗?4Would you like to join me?你想和我一起去吗?5We will have a great time. 我们会玩得很开心。假定你是李华,你打算和妈妈一起去度假。请给你的英国笔友John写一封电子邮件,告诉他你们的度假方案并征求意见。内容包括:1出行时间;2目的地及选择此处的原因;3拟定的活动安排;4费用问题。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 精彩范文Dear John,Ive looked at several possible places where I can go on holiday together with my mom
5、. We prefer to go to the South Island in New Zealand because both of us have never been there before. We can explore the forests and walk along the beach, enjoying the natural beauty. We also plan to taste the traditional food.We plan to take the trip during the first week of October. The 7day trip
6、costs about 7,000 yuan per person. But my mom only wants to spend 3,000 yuan for each. Anyhow, I think this trip sounds really exciting and my mom likes it very much! Should we book it? Any advice? Please let me know.Yours sincerely,Li Hua总评本文用简洁明快的语言覆盖了试题中要求表达的所有信息。同时语言表达灵活,内容连贯,条理清楚;灵活地使用了连接词和过渡语。全文体现了作者较强的语言运用能力。 亮点呈现(1)本文应用了较丰富的语法结构:定语从句where I can go on holiday together with my mom的使用,非谓语动词enjoying的使用等。(2)较多的高级词汇及短语,如:prefer to, explore, natural beauty, taste, sound等。假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1参加者;2时间、地点;3活动:登山、野餐等。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 精彩范文