1、返回目录 Women of achievement Unit 1 返回目录 Section Guided Writing 返回目录 基础写作知识单元话题写作目录Contents 返回目录 基础写作知识名词性从句在主从复合句中，功能相当于名词的从句称为名词性从句，包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句及同位语从句。学习基本句子结构，掌握句法功能(一)返回目录 宾语从句在复合句中作动词、介词和部分形容词(afraid,sure,glad 等)的宾语的从句叫作宾语从句。宾语从句常由that,whether,if,who,whom,whose,whoever,what,whatever,which,whic
2、hever,when,where,how,why 引导。He asked me whether/if I had enough money to buy the book.他问我是否有足够买下那本书的钱。返回目录 I wonder who will teach us English next term.我想知道下学期谁教我们英语。Im sure that our team will win the game.我确信我们队会赢得比赛。返回目录【即时活用】根据汉语提示完成下列句子，注意宾语从句的使用。1(2015重庆卷书面表达)All the participants canget _(他们想要的
3、东西)2 (2015 全 国 卷 书 面 表 达)Im wondering_(你是否愿意和我们共度这段时光)what they want whether you would like to spend the time with us 返回目录 3 (2017 全 国 卷 书 面 表 达)Iwish_(你可以抓住这次机会)to learn traditional Chinese culture further.4(2019全国卷书面表达)I would appreciate it_(如果你们考虑我的申请)5Wecantimagine_(没有手机生活将是什么样子)(that)you could
4、grasp this opportunity if you could take my application into consideration what life will be like without cellphone 返回目录【文体感知】人物描写是记叙文的一种，是对人物的外貌、个性以及主要事迹和贡献进行描写，其基本结构为：单元话题写作如何写人物类记叙文返回目录 首先，对此人进行简要的介绍，比如姓名、出身、职业等；其次，挑选出此人一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写，要尽可能地详细；最后，对此人进行客观的评价，包括对其人格、贡献以及闪光点的评价。返回目录【增分佳句】1She is tall
5、 and slim with big eyes and curly hair.2His stories,most of which are short ones,givepeople surprising endings.3He/She is good at spoken English and evenbetter at using computers.返回目录 4Her story tells us that we should value what wehave,and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.5 He became
6、 famous for his newly createdtheory.6The people had come to love him as an inspiringleader.返回目录【写作要求】假定下周日是父亲节，某英语刊物正在进行以“我的父亲”为题的征文活动。请按照下面所提供的主要内容，以“我的父亲”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。返回目录 1你的父亲是个农村人，50多岁，没有文化，但他很关心你的学习情况；2探望父亲的一次经历；3评价父亲的品行。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。返回目录【审题谋篇】项目结论体裁记叙文话题描述“我的父亲”时态一般现在时和一般过去时人称第一人称和第三人称
7、结构第一部分：简要介绍父亲的情况(年龄、所受教育程度、重视知识等)第二部分：描写探望父亲的一次经历第三部分：评价我眼中的父亲：简朴、诚实、勤劳返回目录【词句推敲】1词汇_ 五十多岁_ 总共；加起来等于_重视in ones fifties add up to attach importance to/pay attention to/takeinto account 返回目录 _ 集中精力于_热泪盈眶concentrate on/focus ones attention on/devote oneself to/burst into tears/be filled with tears/cry
8、ones eyes out be absorbed in 返回目录 2句式我的父亲五十多岁了，住在农村。普通表达：My father is already in his fifties.Helives in the countryside.高级表达：_(用who引导的定语从句改写)My father,who is already in his fifties,lives in the countryside.返回目录 尽管他受教育仅仅一年的时间，但他深刻意识到知识对年轻人的重要性。Although his schooling adds up to no more than oneyear,he
9、isquiteawarethat_.他非常重视我的学习，总是鼓励我努力学习。He_andalways encourages me to study hard.knowledge is of great significance to young people attaches great importance to my study 返回目录 我深受感动，禁不住热泪盈眶。普通表达：I was deeply touched and couldnt helpcrying.高级表达：_(用sothat句式改写)I was moved so deeply that I couldnt help bur
10、sting into tears.返回目录【连句成篇】My FatherMy father,who is already in his fifties,lives in thecountryside.Despite the fact that his schooling adds upto no more than one year,he is quite aware thatknowledge is of great significance to young people,as aresult of which he attaches great importance to my stud
11、yand always encourages me to study hard.返回目录 To ensure that I can concentrate on my study,myfather does whatever he can do for me.Once he wasbadly ill and the doctor asked him to stay in bed forseveral days.When I went home to see him,I found himworking in the field.So deeply moved was I that Icouldnt help bursting into tears.Suchismyfather,asimple,honestandhardworking person.