1、上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 课时 12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 试题 对点训练 规范练(2016高考全国卷)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()画掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11
2、 处起)不计分。上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 试题 对点训练 规范练 The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didnt seem to think such.They always
3、tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time，I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to when
4、ever need help.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 答案 对点训练 规范练 答案：The teenage yearyears from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worseworst years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourselfmyself.However,my parents didnt seem
5、to think suchso.They always telltold me what to do and how to do it.At one time,I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freelyfree from them.I showed them I was independent by wearwearing strange clothes.Now I am leaving home tofor college.At last，I will be on my own，but I
6、 still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 一、句法错误 高考英语短文改错常见的句法错误有动词的时态、语态错误，非谓语动词使用错误，主谓一致错误，名词性从句中的连词的误用，定语从句中的关系代词和关系副词的误用等。这些错误通常与句子成分的分析紧密相关，所以难度较大。上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 1.动词的时态、语态错误 近几年短文改错题涉及时态的考查点通常为一般现在时和一般过去时的混用。有时也涉及对其他
7、时态的考查。而语态错误主要包括主动语态与被动语态的误用以及不及物动词用了被动语态。一般来说，在高考短文改错中必有一个时态错误。(2016高考全国卷)However，my parents didnt seem to think so.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.试题 解析 答案 句法错误。由前句的 didnt 和后句的 felt 可判断用一般过去时。答案：telltold 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 试题 解析 对点训练 规范练 答案 2.非谓语动词使用错误 非谓语动词使用错误在短文改错中较为常见。该
8、类错误主要体现在以下几个方面：动词不定式的符号 to 赘余或残缺，过去分词和现在分词的混用等。(2016高考全国卷)I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.wear 放在介词 by 之后，应当用动名词形式 wearing。答案：wearwearing 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 试题 解析 对点训练 规范练 答案 (2015高考四川卷)Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you
9、 some of the problems I have been experiencing.want 后跟不定式作宾语，所以 share 前应当加上不定式符号 to。答案：share 前加上 to 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 试题 解析 对点训练 规范练 答案 3.主谓一致错误 主谓一致错误是指谓语动词的形式跟主语不一致。其错误类型表现为：主语是复数形式，而谓语动词却用了单数形式，或者主语是单数形式，谓语动词却用了复数形式。主谓一致错误也是考生在书面表达中常犯的错误，考生也通常忽略这方面的问题。(2016高考浙江卷)He would ask who we was
10、and pretend not to know us.本句的主语是 we，故系动词 was 改成 were。答案：waswere 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 试题 解析 对点训练 规范练 答案 4.主从句连接词误用 此类错误主要指名词性从句中的连词的误用，定语从句中的关系代词和关系副词的误用等。(2016高考四川卷)The dishes what I cooked were Moms favorite.句法错误。分析句子结构可知，dishes 后跟的是定语从句，what 不能引导定语从句，应用 that/which 引导。引导词在定语从句中作 cooked 的宾语，
11、可以省略，此时就相当于把 what 删除。答案：whatthat/which 或去掉 what 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 二、行文逻辑错误 行文逻辑错误常见的有代词的指代错误，连词的逻辑意义错误等。这类错误很难被发现，而此类错误基本上都会有所涉及，所以针对这类题考生必须通过阅读全文来综合考虑。1.代词的指代错误 代词的指代错误常见的是代词的指代对象、单复数及代词的格与文章的逻辑意义不一致，此外还有反身代词的错用等。这类错误通常较为隐蔽。上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误 试题 解析 对点训练 规范练 答案 (2016高考全国卷)
12、At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.行文逻辑错误。此处谈论的都是“我”的事情。答案：yourselfmyself 2.连词的逻辑意义错误 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 试题 对点训练12 句法和行文逻辑错误 A(2016高考四川卷)It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival，its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job，so sh
13、e has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked i
14、n kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 答案 答案：It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival，its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job，sobut she has to do most of
15、 the houseworkshousework.She is a great mother.Both Dad orand I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We getgot up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 答案 When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in herhis hand.I asked Mom to s
16、tay in the sitting room and I cooked in the kitchen.The dishes whatthat/which（或去掉what）I cooked were Moms favoritestfavorite.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and movingmoved.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 试题 B(2016高考浙江卷)When I was a very young children，my father crea
17、ted a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day，wed greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they
18、chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 答案 答案：When I was a very young childrenchild，my father created a regular pra
19、ctice I remember well years latelater.Every time he arrived home at the end of the day，wed greet herhim at the door.He would ask who we waswere and pretend not to knowingknow us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While th
20、ey chatchatted，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit inon the top of the fridge.It was both excitedexciting and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 试题 C(2016济宁曲师大附中高三检测)It was on Sunday so I didnt have t
21、o go to school as usually.My parents went to the countryside to see my grandparents，left me alone.After finishing my homework，I began to play football at home.All of a sudden，I kicked the ball so hardly that it flew right onto a vase and broke it.It was great favorite of my mothers.I decided to tell
22、 my parents it was the fault of the cat for fear that she should punish me.Therefore，when they got home，I hesitated for a moment and told them that truly happened.Instead of punishing me，they just hoped that I will never make so a foolish mistake again.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 答案 答案：It wa
23、s on Sunday so I didnt have to go to school as usuallyusual.My parents went to the countryside to see my grandparents，leftleaving me alone.After finishing my homework，I began to play football at home.All of a sudden，I kicked the ball so hardlyhard that it flew right onto a vase and broke it.It was a
24、 great favorite of 上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 答案 my mothers.I decided to tell my parents it was the fault of the cat for fear that shethey should punish me.ThereforeHowever，when they got home，I hesitated for a moment and told them thatwhat truly happened.Instead of punishing me，they just ho
25、ped that I willwould never make sosuch a foolish mistake again.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 试题 D(2016河南睢县一中模拟)For students learning instruments，summer is always a“music season”.During vacation times，we are always busy attending variously lessons，taking exams and participating in competitions.
26、This summer I joined a music competition but was lucky to get the second place.It was the first time that I had played on the stage in front of such many people.I felt very upset at first，but the encourage from my teacher keeps me going ahead.Surprising，I was given the silver medal，that increased my
27、 confidence.If we try our best to get ahead，we will be able to achieve what we desire and deserve it.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误对点训练 规范练 答案 答案：For students learning instruments,summer is always a“music season”.During vacation timestime，we are always busy attending variouslyvarious lessons,taking exa
28、ms and participating in competitions.This summer I joined in a music competition butand was lucky to get the second place.It was the first time that I had played on the stage in front of suchso many people.I felt very upset at first,but the encourageencouragement from my teacher keepskept me going ahead.SurprisingSurprisingly，I was given the silver medal,thatwhich increased my confidence.If we try our best to get ahead,we will be able to achieve what we desire and deserve it.上页 下页 课时12 短文改错(二)句法和行文逻辑错误规范练(十二)本课内容结束对点训练 规范练