1、第 3 讲怎样跳出“大众分”词汇要“美”，妙语要“多”在高考阅卷时，一份作文往往在 1 分钟内就被判定生死。大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳，如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！高考英语书面表达评分标准对第五档的要求有这样一段话：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。由此可以看出，高考英语书面表达要求考生尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇。何为较高级词汇？众所周知，词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分，但某个词一旦得到使用，放在了具体语境中，使用得极为得当，体现了该词的美妙价值，为句子增色，让文章添
2、彩，它就是较高级词汇；相反，使用时体现的价值平平，没有创意，它就是较低级词汇。一、巧用 4 招，实现由低级向高级的转化 1“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them
3、.(2016全国卷书面表达)So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.(2016全国卷书面表达)I should be free any time after school next week.I should be available any time after s
4、chool next week.(2016全国卷书面表达)The rain waters the trees and flowers.The rain moistens the trees and flowers.(2016四川高考书面表达)Of the two,I think the latter is better.Of the two,the latter wins my favor.(2015重庆高考写作)I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is so interesting a
5、s I have read.I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.(2015安徽高考书面表达)Successfully,I have helped her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.Successfully,I have lent a helping
6、 hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.2更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.If you want to participate,you can send your photos to .Any stud
7、ent who is interested is welcome to participate.If you want to join,you can send your photos to .(2016全国卷书面表达)We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may ha
8、ve various ways to deal with such a situation.(2015浙江高考书面表达)Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where the old playground used t
9、o be.3单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to help me.I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to do me a favor.(2016全国卷书面表达)I think everyone here is
10、 a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.In my opinion,everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.(2016天津高考书面表达)Quite a few things caused the traffic problem.Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem.(2015江苏高考书面表达)We should try to i
11、mprove ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.(2015福建高考书面表达)As the number of English learners is increasing,its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.As the number
12、 of English learners is on the rise,its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.(2014江苏高考书面表达)I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account.(2014浙江高考书面表达)We can look at this problem in many ways.We
13、can view this problem in many ways.(view 比 look at更有内涵)We all live on one and the same planet.We all share one and the same planet.(share 比 live on 更有“味感”)4尽量用高级阶段学到的词代替低级阶段学到的词This summer I want to do a part-time job in a foreign company,through which I would like to broaden my horizons,get some wo
14、rking experience and meet more new friends.This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company,through which I would like to broaden my horizons,gain some working experience and meet more new friends.(2016全国卷书面表达)As scheduled,we joined in several instructive activities.As scheduled,
15、we participated in several instructive activities.(2016天津高考书面表达)In my opinion,Internet voting has begun to show its negative effects on people and society.In my opinion,Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.(2016江苏高考书面表达)Thirdly,the voters or even the competito
16、rs in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.Thirdly,the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly made use of by the organizers for commercial purposes.(2016江苏高考书面表达)Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it impor
17、tant to obey traffic rules.Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江苏高考书面表达)So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up,we are sure to achieve success.So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up,we are bound to achiev
18、e success.(2014山东高考写作)二、注重积累，考前必备 6 组高级词汇下面针对考生的第一反应词，结合高考常考到的表达，为大家总结出如下 6 组高级替代词汇。第 1 组：代替 important 的高级词汇Developing a good habit is very important.Developing a good habit is of great/much/vital importance.A balanced diet is very important for us.A balanced diet is absolutely essential for us.Mone
19、y is the only thing thats important to him.Money is the only thing that matters to him.First impressions are very important.First impressions really do count.Childrens education is very important for Chinese parents.Chinese parents attach much importance to childrens education.第 2 组：代替 good 的高级词汇I h
20、ad a very good time at the party that night.I had a wonderful time at the party that night.This is a good place.This is a fantastic place.The view from my bedroom window was very good.The view from my bedroom window was absolutely breathtaking.This is a very good opportunity to learn about American
21、culture.This is a unique opportunity to learn about American culture.The schools examination results were very good.The schools examination results were impressive.第 3 组：代替 very 的高级词汇Self-confidence is very important to our success.Self-confidence is absolutely important to our success.Earthquakes a
22、re very difficult to predict.Earthquakes are extremely difficult to predict.Raising money for the homeless has been very difficult.Raising money for the homeless has been extraordinarily difficult.Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Im more than happy to hea
23、r from you and know about your beautiful home city London.It is a perfect day a little cloudy but very warm.It is a perfect day a little cloudy but nice/good andwarm.第 4 组：代替 make/cause 的高级词汇His actions could make him lose his job.His actions could lead to him losing his job.The accident caused two
24、passengers to die.The accident resulted in the death of two passengers.The floods caused the deaths of over a hundred people.The floods were responsible for the deaths of over a hundred people.Daily shaving can cause a number of skin problems.Daily shaving can give rise to a number of skin problems.
25、第 5 组：代替 because/because of 的高级词汇Because of your great help weve reached our goal.Thanks to your great help weve reached our goal.Because the money isnt enough,the project will not continue next year.Owing to a lack of funds,the project will not continue next year.Because of the pilots strike,all fl
26、ights have had to be cancelled.As a result of the pilots strike,all flights have had to be cancelled.The fishes in the river have died because of water pollution.The fishes in the river have died as a consequence ofwater pollution.The restaurants success was mainly because of its new manager.The res
27、taurants success was due largely to its new manager.第 6 组：表示“大小多少”的高级词汇My new job will be a big challenge.My new job will be a tremendous challenge.More and more Americans are curious about Chinese culture.An increasing number of Americans are curious about Chinese culture.The shortage of teachers i
28、s a big problem.The shortage of teachers is a major problem.We have made some small changes to the program.We have made some minor changes to the program.Most of the students are short-sighted.The majority of the students are short-sighted.The policy benefits only a small group of people in the coun
29、try.The policy benefits only a small minority of the countrys population.特别提醒高级词汇的使用一定要遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，一定要注意使用的场合，并不一定难词就是高级词汇，例如：一大早我们买了些圣诞礼物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents.(purchased 太过于书面化，改为 bought 更地道).请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的低级词汇1We all have the same chance._答案：havepossess2More a
30、nd more visitors have been attracted to this place._答案：More and moreAn increasing number of3The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses._答案：difficultchallenging4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us._答案：developpromote5I can no longer bear
31、the way he speaks to us._答案：bearput up with6I met one of my classmates on my way to school yesterday._答案：metcame across7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up._答案：decideddetermined/made up his mind8Developing very quickly,the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication._答案：c
32、ausesgives rise to9When you are bored with the people sometimes,youd better find a quiet place,listening to some classical music._答案：bored withfed up with10He didnt listen to what I said in the class._答案：didnt listen toturned a deaf ear to11Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into
33、my house._答案：I thought of an ideaI came up with an idea/an idea occurred to me12As soon as he arrived,he began his research._答案：As soon as he arrivedOn/Upon his arrival.请用高级词汇提升下面考生作文(2016沈阳市东北育才学校第五次模拟)新学期开始，你校英语报为高三学生开设专栏，讨论高中生的学习问题。假定你是高三学生李华，请你结合自身实际，根据以下提示，用英语为该专栏写一篇稿件。1过去的三年中，你在学习上遇到了不少困难；2列举其
34、中的一次困难并阐述你是如何克服的；3从此次困难中，你认识到了什么；4谈谈你对解决高中生学习上遇到的困难的建议。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生作文When we get into high school,we are sure to meet with difficulties in our study.A difficulty I met with was that I had strong Chinese accent while communicating with others in English,making everyone laugh at
35、me.Facing the difficulty,I bought a lot of CDs of native speakers public speaking and tried to imitate every day.I often asked the teacher for help,who always helped correct my pronunciation.As a result,I made great progress.We do meet some difficulties in our study,but each man is the architect of
36、his own fate and success always grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties,due to which we become stronger.To solve our difficulties in study,we should find out the reasons first and then take effective measures.Besides,consulting our teachers can contribute a lot to solving the problems.Only i
37、n this way can we perform well and gain success.词汇升格作文When we get into high school,we are to meet with difficulties in our study.A difficulty I was that I had strong Chinese accent while communicating with others in English,making everyone laugh at me.the difficulty,I bought _ CDs of native speakers
38、 public speaking and tried to imitate every day.I often the teacher for help,who always helped correct my pronunciation._ _,I made great progress.boundencounteredFaced witha large quantityofturned toAs aconsequenceWe do meet some difficulties in our study,but each man is the architect of his own fat
39、e and success always grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties,due to which we become.To our difficulties in study,we _ _ find out the reasons first and then take effective measures.,consulting our teachers can contribute a lot to solving the problems.Only in this way can we perform well and gain success.toughercope/deal withsupposed toareIn addition/Whats more/Moreover
