1、Unit 1Living well Section Writing建议信一、基本结构建议信的主体部分是正文，其结构如下：第一部分：写信的目的及建议的理由。可以包括某种现象或危害，然后很自然地引出建议的理由，理由要合情合理，语气得当，委婉且有礼貌。第二部分：建议的内容。根据问题所在有针对性地提出建议，同时可以适当地阐述这种建议的理由，以使人信服和接受。第三部分：希望对方采纳并表示感谢。二、增分佳句(一)建议信的开头常用句式提出观点1I am writing to express my views about.2You have asked for my advice on.and I will
2、try to make some suggestions.(二)建议信的主体常用句式建议内容1If I were you, I would.2I would like to suggest that.3It would seem to me that you could.4I think it would be more beneficial if you could.5In my opinion, you should.6In my experience, it seems that.(三)建议信的结尾常用句式表达希望1I hope you will take my advice into
3、account.2I hope you will find these proposals/recommendations practical/helpful.题目要求假设你叫李华，你的美国朋友Johnson想和家人来中国定居，请你帮他在A、B两座城市中做出选择。下图是这两座城市在就业、娱乐和环境等方面的对比情况。请根据相关信息用英语给他写封电子邮件，提出你的建议并说明理由。词数100左右。注意：图表左边的数字说明了人们对这两座城市的喜爱程度。_第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为建议信；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第二人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般将来时和一般现在时。二、构思第
4、一部分，根据所给信息，给出建议。第二部分，给出建议的三条理由：环境、娱乐和就业。第三部分，表达希望。第二步：核心词汇想周全1suitable/fit适合的2environment 环境3as_well_as 和；也4amusement/entertainment 娱乐5in_your_spare_time 闲暇6enjoy_oneself/have_fun 玩得愉快7employment 就业8opportunity/chance 机会9meet_with 获得；遇到10approval 赞成第三步：由词扩句雏形现1A市更适合居住。City A is more_suitable_to_live
5、_in.2A市的环境和气候比B市好。The environment as well as the climate in City A is_better_ than_those in City B.3有很多休闲娱乐的地方。There are many places for entertainment.4闲暇之余，你可以在那里玩得愉快。You can enjoy_yourself there in your spare time.5A市的就业机会不如B市好。The opportunities for the employment are_not_so_good_as in City B.6由于你
6、是英语教师，我认为这不是问题。I dont think its_a_problem_for_you as you are a teacher of English.7我希望我的建议能得到您的认可。I hope my suggestions will meet_with_your_approval.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用The reason why.is that.连接句1和句2The reason why City A is more suitable to live in is that the environment as well as the climate in City A i
7、s better than those in City B.2用where引导的非限制性定语从句连接句3和句4There are many places for entertainment, where you can enjoy yourself in your spare time.3用though引导的让步状语从句连接句5和句6Though the opportunities for the employment are not so good as in City B, I dont think its a problem for you as you are a teacher of
8、 English.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear Johnson，After a careful study of the information about the two cities, I suggest you choose to live in City A.First of all, the reason why City A is more suitable to live in is that the environment as well as the climate in City A is better than those in City B. Besides, the
9、re are many places for entertainment, where you can enjoy yourself in your spare time. Last but not least, though the opportunities for the employment are not so good as in City B, I dont think its a problem for you as you are a teacher of English.I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval.Yours，Li Hua