1、Unit 1 Living wellSection Guided Writing建议信写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。其目的是要使对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。因此建议性书信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、理由充分、具有说服力。正文是建议信的主体部分，其结构如下：1首段表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。2主体建议的内容。围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，用科学委婉的语言提出自己的建议、方法。注意要充分考虑到对方的实际问题，表达时应选择得体的语言。切忌用语生硬呆板，泛泛而谈。3尾段简单地提出希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。亮点句
2、式1建议信开头常用的句式Im writing to express my views concerning.Thanks for trusting me.I would like to suggest that.You have asked me for my advice with regard to.，and I will try to make some suggestions.2表达建议常用的句式I feel that it would be helpful if.If I were you，I would.As far as Im concerned.In my opinion.As
3、 for me.3建议信结尾常用的句式I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.I hope you will take my advice into account.I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务假设你是李华，你市将建一个大型图书馆，考虑到残疾人的需要，请你给负责该项目的总工程师写一封 100 词左右的信，提出一些合理化建议。要点如
4、下：1入口处应建轮椅坡道，馆内应设残疾人专用通道和卫生间；2阅览室应设在一楼，并配备盲人专用软件；3书架高度的设计应考虑到坐轮椅的残疾人。参考词汇：坡道 ramp审题谋篇体裁建议信时态以一般现在时为主 主题一些合理化建议人称以第一人称为主 结构第一段：表明写作意图第二段：提出自己的建议第三段：表达希望遣词造句.对接单元词汇1n 建筑师2n.软件3n.轮椅4残疾人5有机会使用wheelchairarchitectsoftwarehave access todisabled people/the disabled6对适合7和；也8适合as well asbe suitable foradapt t
5、o.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1我听说你将成为我们城市新图书馆的建筑师。I have heard that you are to the new library in our city.2我考虑到残疾人的需要，我想提出一些建议。I consider，and I would like to offer several suggestions.be the architect forthe needs of disabled people3首先，我建议在图书馆的入口处设计一个适合轮椅的坡道。First，I suggest a ramp that be designed at the entr
6、ance to the library.4建造一些残疾人适合使用的特殊通道以及厕所。Special passages toilets that the disabled should be built.5他们可以很容易地使用它们。They can is suitable for wheelchairsuse them easilyadapt toas well as6所有的电脑都应该配备专门的盲人软件。All the computers should be equipped with 7这样，他们就可以自由地使用这些书籍。Thus，they can the books freely.speci
7、al software for the have access toblind(二)句式升级8用现在分词作状语改写句 2.9用 and 和 so that.合并句 3、4、5.First，I suggest a ramp that is suitable for wheelchairs be designed Considering the needs of disabled people，I would like to offer at the entrance to the library，and special passages as well as toilets thatthe di
8、sabled adapt to should be built so that they can use them easilyseveral suggestions妙笔成篇【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam，I have heard that you are to be the architect for the new library in our city.Considering the needs of disabled people，I would like to offer several suggestions.First，I suggest a ramp that
9、is suitable for wheelchairs be designed at the entrance to the library，and special passages as well as toilets that the disabled adapt to should be built so that they can use them easily.Besides，reading rooms should be on the first floor.Whats more，all the computers should be equipped with special software for the blind.In addition，book shelves should be designed to be reached by people in wheelchairs.Thus，they can have access to the books freely.I hope you will find these suggestions practical.Yours faithfully，Li Hua点击右图进入 英 美 文 化 欣 赏 Thank you for watching!