1、Unit 3 Life in the futureSection Guided Writing想象性作文写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导本单元的写作项目属于新课标中说明文或记叙文中的“想象性”作文。这类题目要求学生在头脑中创造出从未接触过的甚至根本不存在的新的形象。想象性写作允许自由想象、自主发挥的空间较大，因此需要灵活的思维能力和丰富的想象能力。要写好此类文章，应注意以下几点：1首先要确定写作主题确定主题，明确写作中心，是写好文章的前提，想象性写作也不例外。因为想象虽然可以海阔天空，但总要围绕一个中心进行，这个中心就是主题。2想象美好，立意深刻想象性作文必须要有一个“美好”的中心思想。如果只
2、是瞎编一个热闹离奇的故事，就失去了想象的意义。3构思要巧妙，想象要合理构思和想象是写好此类文章的关键，既要合乎逻辑，又要匠心独运，或启迪思维，或引人入胜。4列出写作提纲，合理安排顺序通过合理想象列出写作素材，然后筛选确定；最后再根据写作对象的特点合理安排顺序。5前后一致，自圆其说不管允许想象的空间有多大，都要做到符合逻辑，顺理成章，这一点对于写好此类文章尤其重要。6此类文章大多采用三段式结构首先可以简要、巧妙地引出文章的话题，引起读者的阅读兴趣。其次为文章主体，要按照一定顺序展开想象，说明想象的主体内容。在最后一部分中，可以再进行总结或对前景进行期待。亮点句式开篇常用：1Sometimes I
3、 dream about life in the future.2I imagine life in the future from time to time.3It is fascinating to imagine life in the future.4I am curious about our future life.表达可能性常用：1There is a possibility that human beings will.2It is likely that.3Maybe in the future，we can.文章结尾常用：1I believe the dream will
4、come true one day.2As far as I am concerned，we will realize the dream sooner or later.3In my opinion，the dream will be turned into reality one day.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务根据以下内容，通过合理的想象，以“Our Future Life”为题写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文，展望一下未来的科技生活。1有些人可以到月球上度假。2有些科学家能在海底生活。3每家都有可视电话(videophone)，通过可视电话人们可以进行体检和购物。4孩子们可以在家
5、通过电视和广播接受教育。5机器人为你做家务。审题谋篇体裁说明文时态以将来时为主 主题描述未来生活人称以第一人称为主 结构第一段：简要引出话题“未来生活”第二段：对理想中的未来生活进行具体刻画第三段：文章总结遣词造句.对接单元词汇1梦想2adj.立即的3各种各样的商品4开始；从事5打扫；清扫6对乐观dream of/aboutinstantvarieties of goodstake upsweep upbe optimistic about.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1或许每个家庭中都有可视电话。Maybe every home 2通过可视电话我们足不出户就可以马上体检或购买各种货物。T
6、hrough videophones we can have or buy without leaving home.varieties of goodswill have videophonesan instant medical examination3另外，孩子不必每天去学校。Whats more，children dont need every day.4他们可以在家里从事学习活动，因为收音机和电视上有更多的教学节目。They can at home，because there will be more educational programmes on the radio or TV
7、.take up learningto go to school5此外，未来每个家庭都有机器人。Besides，in the future，each family 6每天我们只需要告诉它们干什么购物、打扫房间等。Every day we only need shopping，and so on.sweeping up the housewill have robotsto tell them what to do(二)句式升级7用定语从句合并句子 1、2Maybe every home will have videophones，we can have an instant medical e
8、xamination or buy varieties of goods without leaving home.through which 8用 there be no need for sb.to do.改写句子 3，然后再用 and 连接句子 3、4Whats more，every day they will take up learning at home，because there will be more educational programmes on the radio or TV.9用 what 引导主语从句改写句子 6，然后再用 so 连接句子 5、6Besides，i
9、n the future，each family will have robots，is tell them what to doshopping，sweeping up the house and so on.so every daythere is no need for children to go to schoolandwhat we only need to do妙笔成篇【参考范文】Life in the FutureSometimes I dream about what life in the future will be like.Perhaps，some people wi
10、ll go to the moon for a holiday，and some scientists will live under the sea.Maybe every home will have videophones，through which we can have an instant medical examination or buy varieties of goods without leaving home.Whats more，there is no need for children to go to school every day and they will
11、take up learning at home，because there will be more educational programmes on the radio or TV.Besides，in the future，each family will have robots，so every day what we only need to do is tell them what to doshopping，sweeping up the house and so on.In a word，Im optimistic about such a future life and I believe the dream will come true some day.点击右图进入 英 美 文 化 欣 赏 Thank you for watching!