1、单元写作写作五步成文(概要写作)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。2019浙江卷Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, pa
2、rents think theyre building their childrens confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire (发生回火；事与愿违) and, when given in a way thats insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents prais
3、e has put them.Still, dont go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount
4、of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward.“ We should especially recognize our childrens efforts to push th
5、emselves and work hard to achieve a goal, ”says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if hes
6、out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise s
7、hould be given on a casebycase basis and be proportionate (相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.步骤一：把握关键，定位各段主题句第一段：Too_much_praise_can_backfire_and,_when_given_in_a_way_thats_insincere,_make_kids_afraid_to_try_new_things_or_take_a_risk_for_fear_of_not_being_able_to_stay_on_top_wh
8、ere_their_parents_praise_has_put_them.第二段：Not_giving_enough_praise_can_be_just_as_damaging_as_giving_too_much.第三段：Experts_say_that_the_quality_of_praise_is_more_improtant_than_the_quantity.第四段：But_whatever_it_is,_praise_should_be_given_on_a_casebycase_basis_and_be_proportionate_to_the_amount_of_effo
9、rt_your_child_has_put_into_it.步骤二：删除细节，提炼核心词语1too much praise can backfire2as damaging as giving too much 3the quality of praise is more important than the quantity4the amount of effort your child has put into it步骤三：尊重原文主旨，同义替换，变化表达方式1家长表扬孩子目的是提高孩子们的自信心。(主谓宾状)Parents_praise_their_children_to_promote
10、_their_confidence.2表扬孩子太多会产生相反的结果。(lead to)Praising_children_too_much_can_lead_to_an_opposite_effect.3表扬不足也有害，因为这使孩子失去动力。(as引导的原因状语从句)Not_enough_praise_is_also_harmful_as_it_drives_kids_to_lose_motivation.4重要的是表扬的质量而不是数量。(主谓)The_quality_of_praise_rather_than_the_quantity_matters.5表扬应该真诚并关注过程而不是结果。(a
11、nd连接两个谓语)Praise_should_be_sincere_and_concentrate_on_the_process_rather_than_the_result.6表扬提供了鼓励和认可。(主谓宾)Praise_offers_encouragement_and_recognition.7你给出表扬的数量要基于他们的努力程度。(定语从句)The_amount_of_praise_you_give_depends_on_how_hard_they_work.步骤四：斟酌打磨句式升级造亮点1把第1、2句变成but连接的并列句Parents_praise_their_children_to
12、_promote_their_confidence,_but_overpraise_may_lead_to_an_opposite_effect.2把第3句变成含which引导的限制性定语从句的复合句Inadequate_praise_is_also_harmful_which_drives_kids_to_lose_motivation.3把第4句和第5句变成含主语从句和非限制性定语从句的复合句What_really_matters_is_the_quality_of_praise_rather_than_the_quantity,_which_should_be_sincere_and_c
13、oncentrate_on_the_process_rather_than_the_result.4把第6句和第7句合成一个含though引导的让步状语从句的复合句Though_praise_offers_encouragement_and_recognition,_the_amount_of_praise_you_give_depends_on_how_hard_they_work.步骤五：连句成文逻辑衔接连成篇Parents praise their children to promote their confidence, but overpraise may lead to an op
14、posite effect. (要点1) However, inadequate praise is also harmful which drives kids to lose motivation. (要点2) Actually, what really matters is the quality of praise rather than the quantity, which should be sincere and concentrate on the process rather than the result. (要点3) Though praise offers encouragement and recognition, the amount of praise you give depends on how hard they work. (要点4) (72 words)
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