1、Unit 16 Stories Period SevenWriting叙事类记叙文叙事记叙文一般要求学生根据题目中提供的情景来组织语言材料,要求讲清楚事件发生的时间、地点,事件所涉及的人物、事件的起因、经过和结果,即我们通常所说的5W1H (Who, What, When, Where, Why, How)。1要把握叙事性记叙文的结果。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物,然后写事件的原因及发展过程,最后写结果,同时在结尾处要尽量自然,点明文章主题。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文,使整个文章融为一体。2要把握好人称。此类文章通常用第一人称和第三人称。3要注意时态的运用。在故事写作过程中,一般用
2、过去时态。在描写背景或景象时,常用过去进行时,这样显得更加形象生动。4要润色简单句,增加过渡性词汇,使文章前后通顺自然,成为一个有机整体。1It is such an interesting experience that I will not forget it forever.2All of us have learned a lot from this activity.3It was a beautiful day and the sun was shining.4I felt happy to have spent such a nice day with them.5On the
3、way to school, I met a stranger.6The children were so happy that they all jumped with joy.7In my opinion, its such a meaningful day that we should remember it.8The students all benefited a lot from this long journey.根据下面的提示,描述你和同学的一次春游。内容:1上周四,你和同学们一起去学校附近的一座山。2内容要点:上山的路行走困难;同学们互相支持;终于登上山顶;安全返回。注意:1
4、词数100左右;2为使行文连贯,可以适当增加细节。审题谋篇1时态:一般过去时态2人称:第一人称3结构:以时间顺序写作,写作重点是春游的过程,叙述要详略得当,结尾写自己对这次春游的感受,使主题更加突出。.用词造句1到达某地 get_to/arrive_at/reach_sp.2在山脚下 at_the_foot_of_the_hill3休息一会儿 have_a_short_rest4开始做某事 begin/start_to_do_sth.5我们自己开辟道路前进。We_made_our_way_by_ourselves.6好像我们是世界上最幸福的人。It_seems_that_we_are_the_
5、happiest_people.7我们盼望春天永远和我们在一起。We_wish_the_spring_will_be_with_us_forever.连句成篇A_Spring_OutingLast_Thursday_we_went_to_the_mountain_near_our_school_for_our_spring_outing._We_reached_the_foot_of_the_hill_at_9_am._After_having_a_short_rest,_we_began_to_climb._There_was_no_road_but_stones_and_bushes._W
6、e_had_to_make_a_way_by_ourselves.With_the_help_of_the_grass,_we_moved_on._While_walking,_the_strong_students_helped_the_weak_ones._After_some_time,_we_were_all_tired._How_we_wanted_to_have_a_rest,_but_we_couldnt_stop._We_walked_on._At_last,_we_got_to_the_top_of_the_hill._On_the_top_of_the_hill,_we_laughed_and_jumped._It_seemed_that_we_were_the_happiest_people_in_the_world._We_took_some_photos_there,_and_then_sat_down_and_had_something_to_eat.At_3_pm_we_began_to_go_down._We_wish_the_spring_of_our_country_will_be_with_us_forever.