1、Section Writing如何介绍一位音乐家普通表达常用词汇普通句式让学生写作思路“活”起来写作任务你校英文报新开设的Popular Musicians栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克肖邦(Frdric Francois Chopin)的短文。生卒年份18101949生平简介6岁学习音乐，7岁作曲，8岁公开演出，20岁已是颇有名气的作曲家。21岁移居巴黎，以作曲和教学为生。成就及评价一生创作了约二百部作品，被誉为“钢琴诗人”。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_写作指导一、审题定调本写作要求介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克肖邦，
2、属于记叙文的写作范畴。其关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就，介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局此类文章一般采用“总分总”模式，对肖邦的主要经历和成就进行介绍，使读者对其有一个较为清晰和全面的了解。针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：第一部分：总体介绍(包括其身份及生卒年份等)；第二部分：介绍肖邦的主要经历；第三部分：总结全文(说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价)。三、组织语言第一部分：总体介绍(包括其身份及生卒年份等)。1He was_born_on/in (出生于) and died on/in.2Chopin, one_of_the_greatest_mus
3、icians (最伟大的音乐家之一) in the world, lived from 1810 to 1849.第二部分：介绍肖邦的主要经历。3肖邦6岁学习音乐，7岁作曲，8岁开始公开演出。Chopin_learned_music_when_he_was_six._He_started_composing_music_at_seven,_and_he_began_giving_public_concerts_at_eight.420岁时，肖邦已经成为非常有名的作曲家。By_the_time_he_was_20,_Chopin_had_become_a_well_known_composer.
4、5Chopin moved to Paris at 21 and earned_a_living (谋生) there as a composer and teacher.第三部分：总结全文(说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价)。6肖邦在他一生中，创作了约200部音乐作品，被誉为“钢琴诗人”。In_his_life,_Chopin_composed_about_200_pieces_of_music,_and_has_been_called_“the_poet_of_the_piano”四、连句成篇Frdric Francois Chopin, a great composer, was bor
5、n in 1810 and died in 1849.Chopin learned music when he was six. He started composing music at seven, and he began giving public concerts at eight. By the time he was 20, Chopin had become a wellknown composer. Chopin moved to Paris at 21 and earned a living there as a composer and teacher.In his li
6、fe, Chopin composed about 200 pieces of music, and has been called “the poet of the piano”我的写作体会：高级表达精彩词汇句式升级让学生满分作文“易”起来任务呈现假如你是Lily，学校文学社请你根据下列提示用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍当代歌星刘欢，以便发表在某个对国外发行的英文杂志上。1刘欢，中国流行歌王之一，主要作品有我心中的太阳(The Sun in My Heart)、弯弯的月亮(A Crescent Moon)等。2除流行歌曲外，刘欢还擅长多种风格的演唱，如摇滚和民乐等。他还为多部电影电视剧
7、插曲作词、作曲。3刘欢对公众事务很感兴趣， 多次应邀为大型体育盛会创作并演唱主题歌，在2008年北京奥运会上演唱主题歌我和你(You and Me)。4他除了对音乐有研究之外，对旅游、文学和美术等均有研究。写作步骤一、统筹安排体裁记叙文时态一般过去时和一般现在时主题名人介绍人称第三人称结构第一部分，引入：介绍主要成就及特长第二部分，阐述：介绍主要作品第三部分，结尾：总体评价二、词语储备想周全核心词汇 1inspire/motivate/encourage/drive 激励2enthusiasm/warmth 热情3be_famous_for/be_well_known_for 因而闻名4dif
8、ferent_styles/a_variety_of_styles 多种风格的5rang_from._to. 范围从到6as_well_as/not_only._but_also 也，不仅而且7show_interest_in 在方面显示兴趣8public_affairs 公众事务9draw_peoples_heart_close 把人们的心拉近三、备用句型罗列巧用重点句式、语法完成句子1刘欢是中国流行歌王之一，因优美的歌曲我心中的太阳、弯弯的月亮等而闻名。(and连接两个并列分句)Liu_Huan_is_a_prince_of_pop_singers_in_China_and_he_is_f
9、amous_for_his_beautiful_songs_such_as_The_Sun_in_My_Heart_and_A_Crescent_Moon.2他擅长多种风格的演唱，范围从摇滚到民乐等。(现在分词短语作状语)He_is_good_at_singing_songs_of_different_styles,_ranging_from_rock_to_folk_songs.3他不只是一位歌手，还是一位词作者和作曲者。(主系表结构)He_is_a_singer_as_well_as_a_songwriter_and_composer.4他还为多部电影电视剧插曲作词、作曲并演唱。(主谓结构
10、)He_wrote,_composed_and_sang_for_many_TV_plays_and_movies_as_well.5刘欢对公众事务很感兴趣。(主谓宾结构)Liu_Huan_shows_great_interest_in_public_affairs.6他多次应邀为大型体育盛会创作并演唱主题歌。(被动语态)He_has_been_invited_to_write_and_sing_songs_for_many_international_sports_meetings.7他在2008年北京奥运会上演唱主题歌我和你。(主谓宾结构)In_2008,_he_sang_the_Beij
11、ing_Olympic_Theme_You_and_Me.8我和你激发了人们对运动的热情，也拉近了全世界人民的心。(and连接两个并列谓语)You_and_Me_inspires_peoples_enthusiasm_to_sports_and_draws_world_peoples_heart_close.9他对旅游、文学和美术等其他事情均有研究。(主系表结构)He_is_also_interested_in_many_other_things,_such_as_tourism,_literature_and_fine_art.句式升级10用名词短语作同位语改写句1Liu_Huan,_a_p
12、rince_of_pop_singers_in_China,_is_famous_for_his_beautiful_songs_such_as_The_Sun_in_My_Heart_and_A_Crescent_Moon.11用Not only. but also.改写句3Not_only_is_he_a_singer_but_also_a_songwriter_and_composer.12用which引导的定语从句连接句7和句8In_2008,_he_sang_the_Beijing_Olympic_Theme_You_and_Me,_which_inspires_peoples_en
13、thusiasm_to_sports_and_draws_world_peoples_heart_close.四、扩充要点，连词成句_高级范文：Liu Huan, a prince of pop singers in China, is famous for his beautiful songs such as The Sun in My Heart and A Crescent Moon. Apart from pop songs, he is good at singing songs of different styles, ranging from rock to folk song
14、s. Not only is he a singer but also a songwriter and composer.Liu Huan wrote, composed and sang for many TV plays and movies. He shows great interest in public affairs. And he has been invited to write and sing songs for many international sports meetings. In 2008, he sang the Beijing Olympic Theme
15、You and Me, which inspires peoples enthusiasm to sports and draws world peoples heart close.Liu Huan is a man of many abilities who is also interested in many other things, such as tourism, literature and fine art.我的写作体会：写作训练一、你校学生会准备办一期主题为Great Musicians的英语墙报。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍中国著名音乐家冼星海。内容主要包括：主要
16、经历及贡献1905年出生于澳门一个贫苦家庭。1928年在上海国立音乐专科学校(Shanghai National Music Conservatory)学习小提琴和钢琴；1931年，考入了巴黎音乐学院(the Paris Conservatory)。留法期间，创作了许多优秀作品；1935年回国后，在中日战争(the SinoJapanese War)期间写了许多鼓励人们战斗的歌曲，如著名的黄河大合唱(Yellow River Cantata)；1945年，在莫斯科(Moscow)因病去世。评价因对中国音乐的贡献获得了“人民音乐家(Peoples Composer)”的称号。注意：1词数100左
17、右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文：Xian Xinghai, a great Chinese composer, was born into a poor family in Macao in 1905.When he was young, he showed great musical talent. In 1928 Xian entered Shanghai National Music Conservatory to study violin and piano. In 1931 he was admitted to the Paris Conservatory. Duri
18、ng this period he composed many excellent works. Xian returned to China in 1935. During the SinoJapanese War he wrote works to encourage Chinese people to fight, including the famous song Yellow River Cantata. Unfortunately, he died from an illness in Moscow in 1945.Xian Xinghais contributions to Ch
19、inese music won him the title “Peoples Composer”二、请根据下列表格提示，介绍音乐人周杰伦的个人事迹。姓名周杰伦英文名Jay Chou出生1979.1.18籍贯中国台湾个人简介(1)杰出的歌手、出色的演员，现在也是导演(2)14岁父母离异，性格孤僻，但对音乐表现出惊人的天赋(3)专长R & B和rap，有“亚洲流行天王”之称(4)创造出多变的演唱表演风格，他的歌曲受到全世界华人的喜爱注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文：Zhou JielunZhou Jielun, whose English name is Jay C
20、hou, was born on January 18, 1979, in Taiwan. When he was 14, his parents split up. Because of this, he changed a lot and became silent. On the other hand, he had a great talent for music and was crazy about music, especially R & B and rap. The talented boy is honored as “Asian Pop Star”. He created and developed many different kinds of singing and acting styles. His songs are very popular with Chinese people all over the world.Zhou Jielun is famous at home and abroad. He is a successful singer, excellent actor and even director at present.
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