1、劝说信本单元写作任务是写劝说信。劝说信要求对有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题劝说某人采纳自己的建议或看法。基本框架1开头：说明写信目的；2主体：分析问题并阐述理由；3结尾：提出自己的建议或劝告。常用词块1give rise to the traffic problems 引起交通问题2live up to parents expectations 不辜负父母的期望3pass our love and friendship to others 把我们的友谊和爱传递给别人4take some measures to protect rare animals 采取措施保护稀有动物5use public
2、 transport as much as possible 尽可能多使用公共交通6make a contribution to protecting the environment为保护环境做贡献常用语句精彩开头1I am writing this letter to raise your awareness of air pollution.我写信旨在提高你们对空气污染的意识。2I am writing to persuade you to .我写信想说服你3I will try my best to make some constructive suggestions.我会尽力提出一些建
3、设性的建议。丰满主体1The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.我的建议如下。2In my opinion/Personally/As far as Im concerned，it would be wise to take the following actions.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。3By the way，you may take Bus No.322 and it will take you directly to the club.顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱
4、乐部。余味结尾1I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.我希望这些建议会对你有用。2I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway.无论如何，我希望这些建议能对你有所帮助。3If you have any questions or requirements，please do not hesitate to tell me.如果你还有任何问题或要求，请及时告诉我。假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary因为缺乏运动而生病。请给她写一封信，劝说她康复以后多参加体育活动，每天至少锻炼一个小时，以增
5、强身体素质。注意：1词数80左右，开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mary， I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now._Yours，Li Hua学生习作Dear Mary，I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have studied too hard，and you have no
6、 time for exercise.I feel you take more exercise will be good for your health，so you should take more exercise in the future.Exercise will improve our body health.When we have a good body，we can keep on studying a long time and dont feel tired.Exercise is useful to our body and study.I hope you to t
7、ake exercise at least one hour every day.I will be very happy to see you very strong.Yours，Li Hua名师点评：1习作中出现了一些错误，例如第一段最后一句I feel后面的you take more exercise应作主语，可在其前加that或改为动名词复合结构。2习作中出现了汉语式表达，例如our body health，have a good body，I hope you to take exercise。3尽可能多使用句型使表达更地道，例如第一段第二句可用so .that .句式，第三句可用i
8、t作形式主语，第二段第二句可用倒装句。升格作文Dear Mary，I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise.I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in the future.Exercise can improve yo
9、ur physical health and refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling exhausted.Exercise is as useful and important as your study.I hope you can take at least one hours exercise every day after you recover.I would be more than happy to see you have a stro
10、nger body.Yours，Li Hua假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在考试中没有及格，但是他的妈妈对他寄予厚望，为了不让妈妈失望，他不得不撒了谎。请你给Tom写一封信，给他提出一些建议，解决这个问题。内容要点如下：1表示安慰；2提出建议：坦诚相告，积极沟通；努力学习，用实际行动证明自己。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom，I have learned that you lied to your mother because you failed in the exam._Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear
11、 Tom，I have learned that you lied to your mother because you failed in the exam. I know you dont want to disappoint your mother.But lying cant solve the problem.My suggestions are as follows.First of all，youd better have a hearttoheart talk with your mother and apologize to her.I think your mother will forgive you because being honest is more important than scores.Secondly，you should focus your efforts on your study and prove yourself by actions.I believe that as long as you work hard，youll succeed sooner or later.I sincerely hope these suggestions can be of use to you.Yours，Li Hua