1、Section Writing a journal entry学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠释教材原文名师论道Friday8 SeptemberFinally, its Friday! I cant believe the first week is coming to an end.Things are going well, but there is always something new just around the corner.At junior high, I took lots of notes during class.So in physics class on M
2、onday, I did the same, but the teacher spoke so fast that I couldnt take everything down.The teacher found I was struggling with notetaking and told me to stop and just listen.“Thinking is a more important ability than notetaking and memorising，” he said.After class on Wednesday, I hurried to the sc
3、hool skateboarding club.I was running out of the classroom when I bumped into a girl literally.I said sorry to her and she smiled at me.At the club, I had my first try at skateboarding and fell off the board a lot.Suddenly, a girl bumped into me the same girl from the corridor! This time, both of us
4、 laughed.Her name is Sarah.We started to practise together and soon became friends.Im going to watch a film with Sarah tomorrow evening.Im looking forward to it！学语言本篇日记主要记录了作者开学第一周在学校学习、交友的经历。时态上，作者首先采用现在时，然后运用过去时，采用倒叙的方式以及使用词语cant believe表达了作者感叹时间的流逝。用词上，作者使用struggle，hurry，bump等词，表达更加准确、形象。衔接方面，作者恰
5、当使用but，so等连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。表达上，作者使用了较多高级表达方式，如：So in physics class on Monday, I did the same, but the teacher spoke so fast that I couldnt take everything down.以及I was running out of the classroom when I bumped into a girl literally.等显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色 添彩。学结构 结构上，全文采用总分总结构；以时间(
6、FridayMondayWednesdaytomorrow evening)为线索，使全文结构更加清晰、明确。第一段中，作者使用but将本段一分为二，前半部分感叹时间之快，后半部分使用around the corner表达对未来的期待，恰好与最后一段的look forward to形成呼应。佳句背诵1.The first days of school are meant to orient the freshmen to campus life.开学头几天用来让新生熟悉校园生活。2.When the bell rang, we were in our eagerness to gather o
7、n the playground.上课铃响了，我们急切地去操场集合。3.The teacher introduced campus life to the freshmen.老师向新生介绍校园生活。4.With butterflies in my stomach, I failed for the first time, yet I didnt lose heart.第一次失败了，我心里七上八下，但我没有灰心。5.From this lesson I came to see that one will become successful if he has persistence.从这件事中，
8、我明白了一个道理：一个人如果有毅力，他就会成功。6.Studying is not something you do just because your parents ask you to do it.学习不仅仅是因为你父母要求你去做就去做的事情。仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍题目要求2021年9月12日，星期天上午，你们班同学骑车到学校附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容用英语写一篇日记并发表你对此次活动的看法。活动内容一扫除：清理废纸、烟蒂、塑料袋等废弃物活动内容二宣传：树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花木活动内容三演讲：向游客宣传“白色污染”的害处以及保护环境的重要性你的看法仿写步骤S
9、tep 1一仿结构布局合理第一段：简要介绍事件。第二段：详细介绍活动内容。第三段：简要总结，表达期待。Step 2二仿语言规范美观今天上午，我们班在附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。This morning, our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park.一到那，我们把这次活动分为三个部分。As soon as we arrived there, we divided this activity into three parts.我们收集垃圾，如废纸、烟头、塑料袋等。We collected
10、the rubbish, such as waste paper, cigarette ends, plastic bags and so on.我们搭了几块牌子以提醒游客照看好花草树木。We set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees.我们给参观者做了一个关于“白色污染”的危害和保护环境的重要性的演讲。We gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance
11、 of protecting the environment.我认为，保护环境对我们来说是非常重要的。As far as Im concerned, it is very important for us to protect the environment.为了人们的健康和幸福，应该采取措施控制和预防污染。For the sake of peoples health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution.每个人都应该为此做出贡献。Everyone should make a contr
12、ibution to it.我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天！Ill never forget the memorable day!Step 3三仿句间过渡自然用on doing .改写句。On arriving there, we divided this activity into three parts.把句改为被动句。Several boards were set up to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees.用定语从句合并句和句。For the sake of peoples health and happi
13、ness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution, which everyone should make a contribution to.Step 4誊写Sunday 12 SeptemberThis morning, our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park.On arriving there, we divided this activity into three parts.First, we co
14、llected the rubbish, such as waste paper, cigarette ends, plastic bags and so on.Then several boards were set up to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees.After that, we gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.As far as Im concerned, it is very important for us to protect the environment.For the sake of peoples health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution, which everyone should make a contribution to.Ill never forget the memorable day!
