1、Section_Writing_主题句主题句一般位于段首,也可置于段末或段中。主题句为一个完整的句子,用以概括、叙述和说明该段的主题。它通常是一个观点 (opinion), 而不是一个事实 (fact)。主题句不仅会让文章条理分明,还能够很好地诠释文章主题思想,可谓是文章的灵魂。所以,写好主题句对写好一篇文章有着至关重要的作用。一、注意事项1主题句要概括一定内容,可以用扩展句来说明和支持它;2尽量使用简单句或简洁明了的句子;3主题句应该做到句子完整和表达的主题思想完整;4关键词是直接表达主题的词汇,它决定段落的内容和展开的方法,引导整个段落的发展。二、增分佳句1As the proverb s
2、ays/As the saying goes, “Time is money.”正像谚语所说的那样,“时间就是金钱。”2As we all know, it is a traditional Chinese virtue to respect the aged and take care of children.众所周知,尊老爱幼是中国的传统美德。3With the development of the Internet, computers play an important role in peoples life.随着因特网的发展,计算机在人们的生活中起着重要的作用。4Cooperati
3、on is a good way for us to learn from each other, which can save us a lot of time and energy.合作是我们彼此学习的一种好方式,它能节省我们许多时间和精力。5Ill raise both hands in favour of banning smoking inside the schoolyard.我举双手赞成校园内禁止吸烟。6In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.总之,好公民应该遵守交通规则。7In a wor
4、d, success is important, and so is failure, because its the mother of success.总之,成功很重要,失败也一样,因为失败是成功之母。8As far as I am concerned, all the students and teachers should work hard and keep safety in mind.就我而言,所有学生和老师应该努力工作并牢记安全。题目要求请以“Friends and Friendship”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,内容要包含下列要点: 1友谊在学习和生活中的作用;2朋
5、友之间应该怎么做;3恰当的结尾。注意:可以适当发挥,使文章通顺流畅。Friends and Friendship 第一步:审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁:本文介绍朋友和友谊,属于说明文;2确定人称:本文的主要人称为第一和第三人称;3确定时态:本文主要用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分,引入:总体介绍朋友在学习和生活中的作用。第二部分,阐述:朋友之间应该怎么做。第三部分,总结:友谊需要细心呵护才能长久。第二步:核心词汇想周全1play_an_important_part/role_in 在中起着重要作用2believe_in/trust_each_other 互相信赖3share_joys_and
6、_sorrows/share_happiness_and_sadness_together 同甘共苦4get_into_trouble/be_in_trouble/be_trapped_in 陷入/处于困境5try/do_ones_best 尽全力6help_sb._out/help_sb._out_of_trouble 帮某人摆脱困境7take_good_care_of 好好维护8care_about_and_help_each_other 互相关心和帮助第三步:由词扩句雏形现1我们大家都知道每个人都需要朋友。(that引导宾语从句)We_all_know_that_everybody_ne
7、eds_friends._2作为朋友,我们应该互相信赖、同甘共苦。(and连接两个并列谓语)As_friends_we_should_trust_each_other_and_share_joys_and_sorrows_together._3我们应该考虑能够为朋友做什么而不是朋友能够为我们做什么。(两个what引导的宾语从句作介词的宾语)We_should_think_of_what_we_can_do_for_our_friends_instead_of_what_they_can_do_for_us._4一旦朋友遇到困难,我们应该尽力帮助他们摆脱困境。(once引导状语从句)Once_o
8、ur_friends_are_in_trouble,_we_should_try_our_best_to_help_them_out._5正如著名谚语所说,“患难之交才是真正的朋友。”Just_as_the_famous_saying_goes,“A_friend_in_need_is_a_friend_indeed.”6我们也需要细心呵护友谊。(主谓宾结构)We_also_need_to_take_good_care_of_friendship._7一旦我们成为朋友,我们应该互相关心和帮助。(once引导状语从句)Once_we_become_friends,_we_should_care_
9、about_and_help_each_other._8这样我们的友谊才可以长久。(主谓结构)Our_friendship_can_last_long_in_this_way._第四步:句式升级造亮点1用as引导定语从句改写句1As_we_all_know,_everybody_needs_friends._2用被动语态改写句6Friendship_also_needs_to_be_taken_good_care_of.3用only开头的倒装句改写句8Only_in_this_way_can_our_friendship_last_long.第五步:过渡衔接联成篇Friends and Fri
10、endshipAs_we_all_know,_everybody_needs_friends._Friendship_plays_an_important_part_in_our_studies,_work_and_everyday_life.As_friends_we_should_trust_each_other_and_share_joys_and_sorrows_together._We_should_think_of_what_we_can_do_for_our_friends_instead_of_what_they_can_do_for_us._Once_our_friends_are_in_trouble,_we_should_try_our_best_to_help_them_out._Just_as_the_famous_saying_goes,“A_friend_in_need_is_a_friend_indeed.”Friendship_also_needs_to_be_taken_good_care_of._Once_we_become_friends,_we_should_care_about_and_help_each_other._Only_in_this_way_can_our_friendship_last_long.
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