1、人物描写本单元的写作项目是描述一个有毅力的人物,属于人物描写的写作范畴。基本框架1开头(the beginning)总体介绍2主体(the body)详细介绍3结尾(the ending)简要总结常用词块1be keen on 喜欢2adapt himself to.使自己适应3have difficulty/trouble (in) doing sth.做某事有困难4be eager/thirsty/dying to do sth.渴望做某事5gain reputation for获得荣誉6have a talent/gift for.有天赋常用词块精彩开头1Allan Stewart,of
2、 Australian nationality,was born on March 7th,1915.艾伦斯图尔特,澳大利亚国籍,出生于1915年3月7日。2Born in 1911 in Shanghai,Qian Xuesen is one of the greatest scientists in the world.钱学森,1911年出生于上海,是世界上最伟大的科学家之一。3Born into a rich family in Shanghai on Nov. 4th,1933,Charles Kuen Kao showed great interest in doing differ
3、ent experiments during his childhood.1933年11月4日出生于上海一个富裕的家庭,高锟从小就对做不同的实验表现出极大的兴趣。正文佳句1He is clever as well as friendly.他既聪明又友好。2He is such an honest man that all think highly of him.他是如此诚实的一个人,以至于所有人都高度评价他。3His modesty leaves us a deep impression.他的谦虚给我们留下了深刻印象。余味结尾1All in all,in my view,Yang has a
4、good future considering his ability and faith.总之,在我看来,考虑到他的能力和信念,杨有一个美好的未来。2Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist on account of what she did.她不仅为科学界做出了巨大贡献,而且因为她的所作所为她被认为是最伟大的女科学家。3His scientific achievement has shaped t
5、he foundations of todays communication.他的科学成就为今天的通信奠定了基础。请根据以下信息,介绍一位热门人物。姓 名:莫言(管谟业)出生日期:1955年2月17日出 生 地:山东省高密市一个穷苦人家兴趣爱好:自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy)性格特征:开朗、幽默主要成就:2011年凭借蛙获中国最高文学奖“茅盾文学奖”;2012年获诺贝尔文学奖(Nobel Prize in Literature)。评 价:第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家,被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。_【学生习作】 Mo Yan is born into a poor
6、 family in Gaomi,Shandong Province in February 17,1955.His original name is Guan Moye.He showed great interest in reading and calligraphy in his early years.He is outgoing and has a strong sense of humor.He won Chinas highest literature prize,Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frog in 2011.A year
7、later he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature,which will certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature.点评1.该习作语言准确,句子结构完整,但也存在一些问题。2.文章没有分段,缺少框架意识。3.文中出现了一些语言错误。如时态错误Mo Yan is born,介词错误in February 17,1955。4.语法结构不够多样,句式不够丰富多变。如复合句太少
8、。5.衔接不够顺畅。【升格作文】Born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955,Mo Yan,whose original name is Guan Moye,showed great interest in reading and calligraphy in his early years.Whats more,not only is he outgoing but he also has a strong sense of humor.With a talent for literature,h
9、e won Chinas highest literature prize,Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frog in 2011.To all Chineses excitement,a year later he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature,which will certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature.为了弘扬科学
10、家精神,丰富学校科技艺术节活动内容,请你用英文介绍一位你最尊敬和爱戴的科学家。内容包括:1对该人物的简单介绍;2尊敬和爱戴的原因;3从其身上得到的启示。注意:词数应为80左右。_参考范文The scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping,who is known as “father of hybrid rice”Ever since graduation,he has devoted his life to increasing rice production in China and spreading his technology to other countries to feed more people.Meanwhile,he has tried out growing new rice in deserts and seas successfully.As Dr.Yuan says,one dream is not enough,which impresses me deeply.From him I have learned the spirit of devotion and exploration.I decide to be a person like him.