2020高考英语新素养大二轮专题突破江苏版讲义：专题5 书面表达 第二节 三 WORD版含解析.docx

1、三、读写任务类说明文典例请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。1.The other day，a netizen(网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo.It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane，and insisting that it leave the track.The photo drew about 7,000 comments on the social media platform.Despite the thu

2、mbs-up(点赞) given to the old lady，some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.2.Some riders of e-bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions，ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles.Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic.Thus the avoidable road accident

3、s become unavoidable.写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；3.根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。满分作文The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life，but may also threaten peoples lives. Three selections present

4、ed above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problems.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways，there is still much room for improvement，because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do no

5、t think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact，traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them，people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone dont secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that mat

6、ter.It is everybodys duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.阅卷老师点评1.本文在高级词汇的使用，过渡词句的运用，以及句式结构的多样化等方面做得非常到位。要点齐全，层次分明，过渡自然，结构紧凑。2.范文严格按照“三步走”的格局：第一段用30词(不含标点)概括了所给材料，得益于使用了not only.but also.这一经典句型。第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因，使用了give rise to，large-scale construction of，the

7、increasing number of，(be) vital to等高级词汇，同时whats worse衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。3.第三段句型多样，使用了without虚拟语气，it is.that.强调句型，it is ones duty to do sth.等句型，为文章增色不少。一、说明文的概括技巧说明文通常会有明确的主题句，先抓住关键词，并根据各段落的主题，有序地组织语言，完整表达出文章的中心内容。如果是分析型说明文，概括时要找出文章所说明的现象、产生该现象的原因及解决问题的方法或建议，然后用自己的话重组信息点。概括时要找出：1.文章说明的是什么现象？2.造成这种现象的原因是

8、什么？3.解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议是什么？二、说明文读写任务类常用句型1.This article deals with/discusses/analyzes/strongly emphasizes the impact of.2.This article not only describes.but also suggests.3.This article compares the disadvantages/benefits of.and summarizes key findings.4.This article gives an account of/provides an an

9、alysis of/provides a method of.5.This article shows/tells us that.6.The author finds it necessary to./The purpose of the report is to show that.7.The author holds the idea that.，giving it an example of sb.who.8.The author strongly emphasizes the benefits of getting up early such as.9.This article po

10、ints out the common phenomenon，which.(补充解释)Xue Zhaofeng，a professor from Peking University，reportedly has more than 170,000 subscribers to his online teaching course and could be making about 35 million yuan ($5.3 million) a year.Xue is only one among the hundreds of online teachers making millions

11、of yuan a month.According to iResearch，an agency specializing in Internet data collection，the online education market was worth 156 billion yuan by the end of last year，and it is expected to reach 260 billion yuan by 2019.Online education has also found mention in this years Central Government Work

12、Report，which Premier Li Keqiang delivered to the annual National Peoples Congress.We can thus conclude that online education not only has huge economic potential，but it also enjoys government support.Online education is not without problems，though.Some online “educators” are extremely popular yet th

13、ey hardly teach students anything useful.Worse，there is hardly any supervision of online education agencies.A China Central TV report on Nov 17 said quite a high percentage of such agencies are being operated without the education bureaus acknowledgement.写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述网络课程流行的原因以及你对

14、网络课程健康发展的建议。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文With the availability of rich educational resources，online education is becoming increasingly popular，bringing online teachers and agencies a large fortune.However，online education has caused some problems worth

15、 paying attention to.There are many reasons accounting for its popularity.Nowadays，Chinese parents attach great importance to education，willing to pay for extra courses to ensure their childrens academic success.Besides，it is convenient for students to get access to online courses and follow their o

16、wn pace of study.Thus online education also helps people save time and money.From my point of view，online education is a wise option，but essential measures should be taken to guarantee its healthy development.Education authorities should strictly regulate the national standards.Moreover，online teachers and agencies are expected to offer quality education.Above all，students should realize，no matter how useful online education is，it cannot completely replace school education.