1、书面表达山东省新泰一中英语组 王兴军 邮编：271200书面表达：如今，越来越多的年轻人喜欢过“洋节”了。下表是对古城市近十几年来过圣诞节的有关统计，请你根据图表中的信息，用英语陈述相关变化，并简要发表自己的看法。开头已给出。 （百分比）70%60%50%40%30%20%10%0 1980 1995 2000 2005 （年份）参考词汇：庆祝 celebrateAccording to the above survey of Gucheng city,_ _One possible version: According to the above survey of Gucheng city,
2、 a growing number of people are getting interested in and celebrating Christmas. In the 1980s, less than 10 percent of the people in the city knew about the festival, let alone celebrate it. However, by the year of 1995,more than 30 percent of the people had learned a lot about it and celebrated. At
3、 the turn of the 21st century, the number grew sharply. Up to 2005,an even larger population, nearly 70 percent, preferred the festival to Chinese festivals. From the point of my view, it is not a bad thing to have “Western festivals”, for it is necessary to have a better understanding of foreign cu
4、lture and customs. 学生习作：According to the above survey of Gucheng City, in 1980,the number of people celebrating the Christmas Day is less than ten percent, but in 2005,the number rapidly grew to almost sixty-five percent.(1) With the chinas opening to the world, more and more young people like to ce
5、lebrate foreign festivals, such as Valentines Day, Mothers Day and so on. They think this is a fashion. In fact, some of the festivals are really very good. For example, on Thanksgiving Day we can learn to thanksgive and love everything we have.(2) This will make a difference to our lives(3). But in
6、 the same time, we should not forget our own culture and traditions and should always keep it in mind that we are Chinese forever.(4) 【教师点评】： 这篇文章从整体来讲不错，涵盖了文章所要求的要点，把该说的都说到了。结构完整,行文流畅，条理清楚，表达得体生动。运用了较复杂结构的长句，衔接词和一些较好的句式，如跟复合宾语结构。 不足之处: (1)Christmas Day前不加冠词the ;(2)thanksgive改成give thanks. thanksgiving 为名词“感恩”，但并没有thanksgive这一动词;(3)lives改为life (4)in the same time改为at the same time，词组没记牢，或笔下误。