1、课时作业24模块话题应用文写作改写诗歌本单元的写作任务是改写诗歌。改写是用不同形式表达同一内容,使之成为与原文意思相同而表达方式、文体不同的作品。改写可以变换文章的名称、顺序,可以改变原文的体裁、结构,也可以灵活运用自己的语言,尽可能用多种方法来表达或替换原文的内容。一、基本结构具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,具体为:第一段:简要介绍诗歌的作者及内容。第二段:详细论述诗歌的主题。第三段:启迪与感想。二、注意事项1改写必须忠实于原作的中心思想。这就要求想象和联想要符合原作精神,不能任意想象,扯得漫无边际。2改写要注意创作性。改写是再创作的过程。作者并不是单纯地翻译诗歌,不能仅就诗歌的内容进行简单的
2、扩充,而是要进一步展开种种想象,使人物形象有血有肉,栩栩如生,使故事情节更加完整生动。3改写时可以插入丰富的想象,将原来文中没有的东西,如人物的表情、动作、语言、神态和行为等都加进去,在不改变原作主题思想的基础上,写成一篇完整的文章。总之,诗歌改写应该把握原文的主题,用通俗易懂的语言进行创作,加入自己的语言,使文章符合主题,流畅易懂。写作一:请阅读下面这首小诗,然后按要求与提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文。A Poem of an Iraqi ChildMum is tearing.Dad, where did you go?I am scared from heart to soul.Mum
3、and I needed you so much.But what happened? People say that I am too young to know.I heard the terrible sound and smelled the smoke.Dad, come back.But what happened? I dont know.Mum and I love you so much.Dad, where did you go?She says you will be back.Mum and I missed you so much.With good news and
4、 hope.要求与提示:1简述小诗内容。(诗中以一个小孩的口吻表明:伊拉克处于战乱之中,战争给伊拉克人民带来极大的痛苦)2简单谈谈你内心的感受。(小诗很感人,和平对于国家、人民是多么重要)3从欣赏的角度谈谈你对这首诗的看法。(语言简明扼要,但内涵丰富,体现出他们对和平的渴望)4可适当发挥想象。The_poem,_written_by_an_Iraqi_child,_shows_us_that_Iraq_is_at_war_and_the_boys_father_has_gone_to_the_battlefield_for_freedom._Iraqi_people_are_suffering
5、_a_lot_from_the_war._They_are_longing_for_peace._To_a_small_child,_war_seems_meaningless,_but_father_and_family_mean_much_to_him._The_poem_touches_me_deeply._One_obvious_meaning_of_the_poem_is_how_much_peace_means_to_a_country_and_its_people.Although_the_description_is_simple_and_to_the_point,_the_p
6、oem_is_rich_in_meaning._They_have_to_be_separated_at_the_moment,_but_they_still_have_hope_in_their_mind._They_believe_victory_will_belong_to_them_and_they_are_looking_forward_to_the_day.写作二:下面是唐朝诗人李绅的名作悯农(Sympathy on the Farmers),请写一篇80词左右的短文解释一下诗的意思及诗中所蕴含的作者的思想感情。悯农锄禾日当午,汗滴禾下土。谁知盘中餐,粒粒皆辛苦?The_poem_
7、entitled_“Sympathy_on_the_Farmers”_is_written_by_Li_Shen_in_the_Tang_Dynasty,_which_enjoys_great_popularity_among_Chinese_readers._It_goes_like_this:_Hot_as_it_is_outside_at_this_summer_noon_time,_the_farmers_are_still_working_in_the_fields._They_are_wet_all_over_with_their_sweat_frequently_falling_
8、into_the_soil,_where_the_crops_grow._But_who_on_earth_knows_exactly_all_the_delicious_dishes_on_our_table_come_from_the_hard_work_of_the_farmers?Li_Shen_wrote_this_poem_in_order_to_remind_people_of_the_importance_of_the_farmers_hard_work._Nowadays,_many_young_people_waste_a_lot_of_food._I_think_its_
9、of_great_importance_that_the_young_generation_today_should_understand_the_poem_and_treasure_every_grain.话题词汇1part v. 分手;分离2dynasty n. 朝;代3shadow n. 影子,阴影4altitude n. 高度;海拔5share v. 分享,共享6realist n. 现实主义作家7mental adj. 内心的;精神上的8disorder n. 混乱,失调;紊乱9channel n. 途径;渠道10prove v. 证明是,被发现是11appeal n. 魅力,吸引力
10、12glance v. 一瞥;迅速看一眼13launch v. 开始,(积极有力地)着手进行14cater v. 满足需求15correspond v. 通信16anniversary n. 周年纪念日17update v. 更新;刷新18whichever pron. 无论哪个19reflect v. 反映,显示;表达20approve v. 赞成;同意approval n. 赞成;同意21expense n. 费用expensive adj. 昂贵的22caution v. 警告;劝小心cautious adj. 小心的;谨慎的23donate v. 提供;捐donation n. 捐赠;
11、赠送24decorate v. 装点;美化decoration n. 装饰,装修25independence n. 独立independent adj. 独立的dependent adj. 依靠的;依赖的dependence n. 依靠;依赖depend v. 依靠;依赖26imagination n. 想象;空想imagine v. 想象;设想;胡思乱想imaginary adj. 想象的,虚构的imaginative adj. 富有想象力的27typically adv. 典型地,有代表性地;向来,一向typical adj. 典型的,有代表性的;向来的;一贯的28acquaintance
12、 n. 相识的人;泛泛之交acquaint v. 相识,了解29expansion n. 扩张expand v. 扩大,扩张;膨胀30tolerant adj. 宽容的;容忍的tolerance n. 宽容,忍耐tolerate v. 容忍;宽容;忍受31specialist n. 专家special adj. 特别的;特殊的32advance n. 进步;进展advanced adj. 先进的;高级的33failure n. 失败者fail v. 失败34corruption n. 腐败;堕落corrupt v. 使堕落;贿赂35irregular adj. 不规则的;无规律的regular
13、 adj. 有规律的;规则的;定时的,经常的36reflection n. 倒影;反映reflect v. 反映37suffering n. (肉体或精神上的)痛苦;苦难suffer v. 遭受(痛苦);蒙受.高频短语1as_far_as远至;就而言2part_from 与分离3hand_in_hand 齐头并进;联合;联手4think of.as. 把看作5take hold of 抓住6all_at_once 突然7on_second_thoughts 进一步考虑后8glance_at 一瞥;扫视9approve of 赞成10a chorus of 异口同声地11cater for 满足的要求12correspond with 与通信
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