1、表达 作文巧升格Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 经历感受类写作 该类写作描述个人经历，常以短文或日记等文体呈现；以一般过去式为主，按照事件发展的顺序来记叙。可以用一些与时间相关的副词如 then，later，next 衔接句子。至于感受部分，同学们平时可以多积累相关的单词或短语。基本框架 1开头(beginning)引出主题 2主体(body)介绍事件 3结尾(ending)发表感受 常用词块 1an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 2to my joy/delight 令我高兴的是 3see sb.off 为某人送行 4a fiveda
2、y tour 为期五天的旅行 5live a.life 过着样的生活 6win the first prize 获得一等奖 7think highly of 高度赞扬 8set a good example for sb.给某人树立好的榜样 常用语句 精彩开头 1Last week I went to Mount Emei in Sichuan Province with my family.上周，我和家人去了四川省的峨眉山。2I will never forget the experience when I went to Beijing last year.我永远不会忘记去年去北京的经历。
3、3Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.昨天晚上我正忙于准备考试，突然我听到一个很大的声音。正文佳句 1On the hot afternoon of last Saturday，Li Yu went downtown and walked from one store to another.上周六炎热的下午，李玉去了市中心，从一家商店逛到另一家商店。2I looked in the direction of the call and saw a boy falling into the ri
4、ver.我朝呼喊的方向看去，看见一个男孩掉进河里。3Throwing the fishing pole，I dashed over like an arrow，jumped into the river and swam very quickly towards the boy.我扔下钓竿，像箭一样冲了过去，跳进河里，飞快地向男孩游去。余味结尾 1However，maybe all of my efforts are not made in vain.然而，也许我所有的努力都没有白费。2How I wish I could go back to enjoy middle school life
5、 once more!我多么希望我能再次回到中学生活中去！3But they will remain a happy memory all my life.但它们会成为我一生的快乐回忆。人人都在渴望幸福，人人都在感受幸福。请用英语写一篇短文，描述你体验幸福的一次经历，并谈谈你对幸福的理解。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。I still remember _ _ _ _ _ 学生习作 I still remember the late afternoon when it was cold and showering.I didnt have an umbrella t
6、o shelter me from the heavy rain.I had to stand still and wait for my father.My father finally arrived.I was about to rush home.I found that my English teacher，Miss Wang was also waiting for the rain to stop.I went to her and gave my umbrella to her.She accepted it.I smiled with happiness.点评：1要点不完整，
7、只是叙述了一次经历，缺少对幸福的理解。2文章松散，缺少有效的衔接。3句式单一，没有复杂句式。升格作文 I still remember the late afternoon when it was cold，and it was showering.Without an umbrella，I had to wait for my father.After seemingly long hours waiting，he arrived.I was about to rush home when I found my English teacher，Miss Wang was also waiti
8、ng for the rain to stop.Without any hesitation，I gave my umbrella to her.Surprised but happy，she accepted it.Seeing Miss Wang walking in the rain with my umbrella，I smiled with happiness.In fact as long as we are willing to share，well find happiness everywhere.你校英文报正在举办主题为“A moving experience”的征文活动，
9、你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次让你感动的经历，并谈谈你的感悟。注意：词数 80 左右。_ _ _ _【参考范文】Last Sunday，while eating in a restaurant，I noticed a bowl full of dumplings on the table next to ours.They must have been left by someone.Just then，an old man entered.Judging from his clothes，I believed he was poor.He saw the dumplings le
10、ft on the table.Looking shy，he sat down and started eating.The others around looked at him，puzzled，and some even laughed.However，after finishing the dumplings，he went up to the donation box on the counter，put one hundred yuan in it and left，which left us all shocked and ashamed.We shouldnt judge a person just from his or her appearance.A person with a loving heart is the richest in the world.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!