1、表达作文巧升格UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUND旅行计划本单元的写作项目属于说明文类别中的“说明旅行计划类”的书信，这种题目要求我们针对旅行的地点、时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，学生应该注意描述的重点和顺序。在写作过程中力争做到：紧扣主题；句子结构完整；信息内容准确；篇章结构连贯。基本框架(一)Para.1.突出重点，开门见山，直接描述旅行的主要目的。(二)Para.2.介绍旅行中的其他计划和安排。(三)Para.3.交代出行方式及原因。(四)Para.4.总结此次旅行的心得体会。常用词块1take advantage of 利用2make a reservation 预订3t
2、ake a tour 游览4set out/off 出发5leave for 动身去某地6enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景7a seven-day trip 七日游8broaden ones horizons 开阔眼界9around the corner 即将来临10experience a different culture 体验不同的文化常用语句精彩开头1Im writing to share my travel plan to.with you.2Over the holiday，my parents and I are planning to go.3Im writing
3、to tell you my travel plan to.4You have asked for some information about/concerning my travel to.5We are planning to make a trip to.正文佳句1We are looking forward to.2We are anxious to do.3It is an amazing sight that I have ever seen.4We cant help going.5I have heard that.6There is no doubt that.7Well
4、go to the destination by train/air/bus.余味结尾1I think thats all for now.2Sp.is really worth your visiting.Looking forward to your coming.3Ill never forget the place.4Ill travel here again if I have time in the future.5I hope you will have a trip with me.6In a word，the travel makes me.假定你是李华，受你的邀请，你的英国
5、笔友 Tony 在即将来临的暑假要来你所在城市大连游玩，请你根据下列提示信息拟一份旅游计划，以便朋友到来时做到各方面有条不紊。1去机场接机；2游玩大连市区；3去海滩看海，等等。要求：1.可以适当添加信息，以使行文连贯；2词数 80 左右。_【学生习作】Travelling to DalianSummer holiday is coming.I have a good plan for it.My best friend Tony who is from Britain will spend the holiday with me.Tony is 17 years old and he like
6、s China very much.One week ago，I wrote him a letter and invited him to come to Dalian for the holiday.To my joy，Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next week.I will go to the airport to pick him up.Then Ill show him around the city.Well go to the beach to watch the sea first.At la
7、st,well visit some interesting places.Tony will live in my house during the holiday.I hope well have a good time.点评 1.句可合为一句。2.句可改为含非谓语动词的句子。3.句可省略主语合为一句话。【升格作文】Summer holiday is coming and I have a good plan for it.My best friend Tony who is from Britain will spend the holiday with me.Tony is 17 ye
8、ars old and he likes China very much.One week ago，I wrote him a letter inviting him to come to Dalian for the holiday.To my joy，Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next week.I will go to the airport to pick him up.Then Ill show him around the city and go to the beach to watch the
9、sea.At last，well visit some interesting places.Tony will live in my house during the holiday.I hope well have a good time.假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Ben 寒假想来北京旅游，请你帮他制订一个旅游计划。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封信。内容如下：1时长：15 天；2活动：参观北京的一些知名旅游景点、欣赏中国国粹京剧、在北京胡同和当地人一起欢度春节；3你的建议。注意：1词数 80 左右；2文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：京
10、剧 Peking opera 胡同 hutongDear Ben，Im glad that you are coming to Beijing for your winter vacation.Id like to make a travel plan for you._Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua参考范文Dear Ben，Im glad that you are coming to Beijing for your winter vacation.Id like to make a travel plan for you.I think the best time to
11、experience Chinese customs is the Spring Festival，so you can arrange your trip then.If you want to know how we Chinese celebrate the Spring Festival,youd better live with a local family in Beijing hutong.And you cant miss Peking opera,which is an important part of Chinese culture.Apart from the Chin
12、ese culture,there are many places of interest in Beijing and you will find it worthwhile to visit them,such as the Palace Museum，the Summer Palace and the Great Wall.In addition,I advise you to invite a friend who can speak Chinese fluently to travel with you.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 点击右图进入 单 元 综 合 检 测 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!