1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT5 WORKING THE LAND如何写议论文本单元要求写一篇议论性的文章。议论文通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张。作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意自己的看法，提出若干理由，企图说服他人。基本框架议论性的文章一般分为以下三段：第一段：先阐述议论的问题并表明自己的观点；第二段：阐述自己支持观点的原因或者是另一方的观点及原因；第三段：做一个总结。常用词块1according to a recent survey 根据最近的一项调查2with the rapid development of economy 随着经济的快速发展3a widespread con
2、cern over the issue 这个问题引起了广泛的关注4advantages and disadvantages 利弊；优点和缺点5several positive aspects as follows 如下几个积极的方面6reduce the disadvantages to the minimum 把弊处减少到最低限度7become more and more popular 变得越来越受欢迎8two different opinions toward it 对于这件事有两种不同的观点9for the following three reasons 由于以下三个原因10on th
3、e basis of the above discussion 基于以上讨论常用语句精彩开头1Many students have been faced with the problem of.许多学生一直面临的问题2Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.最近这种现象已经成为一个热门话题。3Recently the issue has aroused a great concern among.最近问题已引起的很大担忧4Nowadays there is a growing concern over.如今人们越来越担忧5Recent
4、ly we held/have held a discussion about whether.最近我们举行了一个关于是否的讨论正文佳句1As is known to all，.play(s)an important part/role in our daily life/modern society.However，different people have different opinions about.众所周知，在我们的日常生活/现代社会中起着重要的作用。然而，不同的人对有不同的观点2Some people/The majority of the students think it(i
5、s)a good idea/important/useful/convenient for.to do.有些人/绝大多数的学生认为对来说做某事是一个好主意/重要/有用/方便。3Others argue/claim that the opposite is true.其他人认为/声称，情况恰恰相反。4However，as every coin has two sides，.also has its disadvantages.然而，事物都有两面性，也有它的劣势。余味结尾1There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements，but.两
6、种观点/说法可能都有些道理，但是2From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that.从以上讨论，我们可以得出结论3It is high time that we took measures to./Wed better take effective measures to prevent.是我们采取措施的时候了/我们最好采取有效措施以防止4In summary，if we continue to ignore the issue，more problems will come up.总而言之，如果我们继续忽视这
7、个问题，就会出现更多的问题。5Taking all these into account，we.把所有这些都考虑在内，我们升格示例近日，你们班就中学生该不该进行军训进行了讨论。针对这一讨论，请你写一篇英语短文，发表你的看法。内容要点如下：1军训目的；2军训内容；3你的看法。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：军训 military training学生习作 Military training can develop a sense of discipline and teamwork in students.Students are expected to
8、improve their strong will.Training programs have played a role in the development of students.For a student,the military training is often considered boring.Because he just follows a dull way of exercise,for example,standing in the sun or running for a long time.The exercise is too much for some stu
9、dents.Students should be permitted to do it based on their physical conditions.It is necessary for students to be trained.点评：1.文中出现了一些语言错误。如第二段第二句 because 引导的原因状语从句独立成句。2.要点虽然齐全，但内容不充分，造成行文不太连贯。3.句式不够亮丽，高级句式一般。4.没有有效地使用语句衔接手段，以至于全文不太清晰，上下文不太连贯。升格作文The aim of military training is to develop a sense o
10、f discipline and teamwork in students and students are expected to experience the hardships to improve their strong will.But for a student,the military training is often considered boring because he just follows a dull way of exercise,for example,standing in the sun or running for a long time.The ex
11、ercise is too much for some students who are weak physically.Though asked to do basic exercise,students should be permitted to do it based on their physical conditions.In a word,it is necessary for students to be trained.假如你是李华，你班就化学农业和有机农业进行了讨论，请写一篇文章阐述一下你的观点。内容包括：1有机农产品更健康，让人放心；2有机农耕对环境不造成破坏；3有机农耕
12、让农民增加收入。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：pesticide residues 农药残留As far as Im concerned,organic farming is preferable to chemical farming.Here are some reasons._All in all,Im in favour of organic farming.I hope more and more farmers will turn to organic farming in the future.参考范文As far as Im conce
13、rned,organic farming is preferable to chemicalfarming.Here are some reasons.Firstly,in organic farming,farmers are forbidden to spray chemical pesticides on the plants,so there are no pesticide residues left on them.Secondly,farmers use natural waste from animals,which will be good for improving the
14、 condition of the soil.Thirdly,organic farming can increase the farmers income.With more and more people caring most about their health,they tend to buy organic fruit and vegetables when theyare shopping in stores,despite the high prices of these products.All in all,Im in favour of organic farming.I hope more and morefarmers will turn to organic farming in the future.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!