1、表达作文巧升格WELCOME UNIT学生简介学生简介属于记叙文的一种,内容可以介绍自己,也可以介绍别人。在写这类文章时,通常需要对人物进行由具体到抽象、由外貌特征到内在性格特征的描写。在文章结尾通常要做一个简单的小结或概括。同时也要根据写作题目的具体要求突出表达要点。基本框架1开头(beginning)介绍姓名、年龄、国籍、年级、学校等基本信息;2中间(body)描述外貌、性格特征、最喜欢的科目、学习风格等;3结尾(ending)介绍计划、梦想或对其评价等。常用词块warm-hearted 热心肠的active 主动的,活跃的able 有才干的,能干的attractive 有魅力的creat
2、ive 富有创造性的confident 有信心的easy-going 随和的,和善的gentle 有礼貌的friendly 友好的hard-working 勤劳的helpful 助人的,有益的expressive 善于表达的outgoing 外向的curious 好奇的have broad interests 兴趣广泛be willing/ready to help others 乐于助人be interested in 对感兴趣be popular with 受欢迎make friends with sb.和某人交朋友dream about/of doing sth.梦想做某事常用语句1外表
3、He is very tall and has a beard.他个子很高,留了胡子。She looks beautiful and attractive.她看上去美丽动人。My history teacher is a beautiful woman,with long hair and big eyes.我的历史老师是一位美丽的女士,长着一双大眼睛,留着长发。2兴趣爱好Im curious about everything.我对一切事物都很好奇。Not only does he show interest in science,but also he has a gift for musi
4、c.他不但对科学有兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。In my spare time,I read a lot.I am also crazy about music.在业余时间,我读很多书。我也非常喜欢音乐。Being an active young person,I like sports and outdoor activities.作为一个积极活跃的年轻人,我喜欢运动和户外活动。3梦想和理想My dream is to start my own IT company.我的梦想是成立自己的 IT 公司。I plan to become a physicist in the future.我计划将来成
5、为一名物理学家。I wish my dream can come true.我希望我的梦想成真。I am looking forward to laying a solid foundation for my future profession,which is based on three years of hard study here.我期待在这里三年的努力学习能够为我的未来职业打好牢固的基础。假如你是李华,进入新学校新班级,同学们互相还都不熟悉。英语课上,老师让你们相互介绍,请你按下表提供的信息用英语写一篇自我介绍:姓名李华年龄17性别男国籍中国住址上海市黄浦路 26 号电子邮箱LH其
6、他 1.性格外向,热心肠,喜欢交友;2.爱好集邮、足球、钓鱼;3.想成为一名工程师。【学生习作】My name is Li Hua.I am a high school student of seventeen.I live at No.26 Huangpu Road,Shanghai,China and study in No.21 Middle School of Shanghai.I like playing football and collecting stamps in my spare time like many teenage boys.Besides,Im quite in
7、terested in fishing.It has been three years since I started learning to fish.点评 1.、两句可合为一句,用并列连词或同位语均可。2.句可变换词汇,同时应用高级句式。As an outgoing boy,Im very glad to make new friends with you.Im a kind-hearted boy.If you need help,Ill do my best to help you.I plan to be an engineer in the future.3.句中 very 可替换
8、为 more than。【升格作文】My name is Li Hua,a high school student of seventeen.I live at No.26 Huangpu Road,Shanghai,China and study in No.21 Middle School of Shanghai.In common with many teenage boys,I like playing football in my spare time,and collecting stamps is also my favorite.Besides,Im quite interes
9、ted in fishing.It has been three years since I started learning to fish.As an outgoing boy,Im more than glad to make new friends with you.Im a kind-hearted boy.If you need help,Ill do my best to help you.I plan to be an engineer in the future.假如你是某校高一(6)班学生李华,学校英语社团(the English society)现在要招募新成员,你有意参
10、加该社团。请用英文给社长Johnson 写一封自荐信。内容要点如下:1写信目的,愿意参加;2个人情况介绍(兴趣、英语情况、技能以及性格等)。注意:1.词数 80 左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_参考范文Dear Johnson,Im Li Hua from Class 6,Grade 1.Im glad to hear that new members are wanted in the English society.Im willing to join it.Im interested in English and have a good knowledge of it.Havin
11、g learnt English for more than ten years,I can communicate with others in English fluently.Whats more,I have some special skills,such as singing songs,telling stories and making speeches.Above all,Im easy to get along with and enjoy working with others.Im looking forward to being accepted.Yours,Li Hua点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 点击右图进入 单 元 综 合 检 测 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!