1、广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练（1）及答案 短文改错I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from
2、 black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 【参考答案】6.1
3、.holding-hold此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号，故用动词原形。2.passes-passed根据前面was可知为一般过去时态。3.much-well/ clearly根据句意可知，我很清楚记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思，不合题意。4.shoulder-shoulders根据常理，人有两个肩膀，故用复数。5.toward-to/ into根据句意，这里指：黑胡子变成白胡子。所以用短语turn to或turn into。6.himself-him句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。故用him。7.he前加and根据句中结构可知He had a de
4、ep voice和he was strong and powerful是并列关系，故用and连接。8.去掉fact前a固定短语：in fact。9.during-whenduring为介词，后不能接句子；应用when这个连词引导时间状语从句。10.never-ever语义错误。根据句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。可知将never改为ever。短文改错-【例题解析】一 错词1.动词错误：（1） 时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。【1】整体时态： *Then I ask him “Grandma, how come you have so much lines on your hand”全文为故事，故as
5、k改为asked。*High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon.The hole became bigger and bigger.全篇使用过去时态，故改discover- -discovered【2】主谓一致*Having fun with their friends make them happy.动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数形式makes。*But the most wonderful thing about jack were his musical ability。主语为the most wonderful t
6、hing 故此，系词为was*But not all information are good to society.主语不可数，所以动词用is。（2.）动词错误：*In American big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.(buy)根据句子意思，数千人买票去看比赛。故sell改为 buy。（3）非谓语动词【1】动名词错误*I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.(seeing)解析：to 为介词
7、，故此see改为seeing* Not only play football makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.解析：主语应为动名词，故play football改为playing football【2】现在分词 *The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming down.解析：分词做定语，故keeps 改为keeping*I found a sma
8、ll house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.解析：with a light shone 改为with a light shining。a light和shining为主动关系。【3】不定式*I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.(become) 解析：help sb do sth 故改becoming为 become *He did not want share things with others.解
9、析：want to share sth. want后可跟不定式做宾语。【4】过去分词*I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.解析：have sth done, some records和give是被动关系，故改为given。2连词错误：*I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. 解析：根据句意，“我看到他们中的一个人走进厨房，并且打开灯。”两个分句子之间是并列关系。故
10、改but为and*We would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day.解析：考查宾语从句，pick up 缺宾语，故改that 为what *The classes helped me understand what the world works 解析：根据句子意思，“这些课程有助于我了解世界是怎么运转的”故改what 为how。*He was silent for a moment. So he answered slowly: “Each of these lines stands f
11、or a trouble”解析：根据句子意思，So 改为 Then/And3.形容词/副词错用：*You always gave me specially attention. 解析：名词应该被形容词special修饰。 *It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.解析：副词really修饰系词，故改real为really。*My hometown has taken on a new look.How great it has changed !解析：great修饰动词，故改为：greatly 4.冠词错误：*This is m
12、y first visit to a American family.(an)解析：American 第一个音标的音素是元音，故用an.*Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team.解析：有定语修饰，the特指captain.*Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.解析：固定搭配catch sight of.故此去掉冠词a。5.代词错误：【1】反身代词*I just smiled to me and thought, 解析：主语和宾
13、语相同，故此memyself 。【2】形容词性物主代词*Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interesting.(his -their)解析：主语是第三人称复数，因此try ones best 【3】it/that/them /us*I thought that was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to each other.解析：that不可以做形式主语，故改
14、为it。*It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.前后人称错误。故此改them为us.6.名词单复数和名词的所有格的错误*She marked strictly on students performance.(students)解析：根据句意，学生们的表演，故改为students performance*Physics is one of the most difficult subject for us (subjects )解析：on
15、e of说明后面为复数形式。*We practice three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.解析：常常看比赛，故此match改为matches.* I have no papers to write on.解析：纸不可数，所以改为paper7.介词错误*He left Shanghai at a cold night.解析：一天的部分被修饰时，介词用on,*I am a new comer of a small town.解析：根据句子意思，来自一个小镇come from a small tow
16、n.* I was caught by the rain last night 解析：固定短语be caught in the rain 遇上雨。8.语意错误*Thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.解析：句子意思：数千人卖掉票去看足球或者篮球比赛。故此错误，sellbuy *Not all people like to work and everyone like to play.解析：句子意思：并非所有的人都喜欢工作，并且所有的人喜欢玩。语意错误，应该为转折关系，andbut 。短文改错Dear John,
17、I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to ofgoing to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, Isharing experiences Muchwill be absent from your par
18、ty owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing. theWhats more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself. worse am Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam? I am true
19、 sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I truly acceptlook forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua短文改错（10分）错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Never shall I forget the first English lesson
20、giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldnt call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn
21、s. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didnt dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Dont be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.短文改错-参考答案givinggiven 去掉out her-herself they-we said-say turns
22、-turntoo-so kind-kindly do后加it that-what短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 This is a story told by my father: “When
23、I was boy, 66. the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 67. FestivalMy grandma was the best cooker in the world 68. but could make the most delicious dishesOne time, I just 69. couldnt wait for the Spring Festival dinnerAs I was70. about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma
24、 in 71. the kitchen looking at meShake her head, she said, It 72. isnt a good time to do that, dear At once I apologize73. and controlled me at my best till the dinner startedYou 74. know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month 75. 参考答案、66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook 69.but改为and 70. 71.about后加to 72.Shake改为Shaking 73.apologize改为apologized 74.me改为myself 75.month改为months