1、2016届四川省南江县高考英语书面表达(二轮)赏析新编(3)及参考范文书面表达(满分30分)假设你是高中学生王敏,当你听说当地政府打算把你所在的有着百年历史的老学校从市中心迁至郊区时,你决定给市长写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:1. 简述你写信的目的及你对此事的观点; 2. 说明你的理由。Dear Sir, _ Wang Ming, A student of xxx School 【参考范文】书面表达A possible versionDear Sir,It is said that our local government is going to move our school
2、 to the suburb. I am now writing to express my opinion that it is more advisable to keep the school where it is.For one thing, it is more convenient for both students and teachers to get to the present school which is located in the center of the city. If it is moved to the suburb, it surely will br
3、ing students, especially their parents, much trouble.For another, as a school with a history of one hundred years, her value mainly lies in the signs left by time. We can put up new buildings and plant new trees, but we cannot rebuild such reminders of memory. Therefore, I suggest the school not be
4、moved. Wang Ming, A student of xxx School【陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟考试】书面表达(满分30分)假如你是李华,请你根据以“老人摔倒你会扶吗?”为主题的班会调查结果及你自已的意见给英语周报写一篇演讲稿,要点如下:注意: 1.总词数不少于100;2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Ladies and gentlemen,Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street? A recent survey from our class meeting sh
5、ows that_更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】本文的亮点在于连接词的使用,让整个文章成为了一个有机的整体。如However、Why not? First、Second、In my opinion 等等;同时句中还有一些高级的句式,如such a case occurs to us one day when were old中的定语从句when were old。在以后的写作中一定
6、要注意这些技巧的使用。考点:考察提纲短文【陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟试题】书面表达(满分30分)假定你是李华,当你看到公益广告片鼓励人们常回家看看,向父母表达“爱”时,你很有感触。请以Ways to express love to parents为题,写一篇英语演讲稿. 提示:1.在父母生日时,当面向他们说“我爱你们”; 2.经常关心父母的生活和身体健康状况; 3. 注意:1.总词数不少于100;2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数; 3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 【参考范文】One possible version:Ways to express love to parents My
7、dear fellows, Today Id like to talk about ways to express love to our parents. As everyone knows, recently people have been encouraged by public service advertising on TV to go home to see their parents and express their love to them. As a middle school student, I feel moved every time I see it. As
8、far as I am concerned, there are various ways to express love to our parents. First, it is necessary to remember their birthdays, and expressing our wishes to them is a good way to let them know how we love them. Besides, we have the duty to care for the condition of their life and health. Most impo
9、rtantly, we should often help our parents as much housework as we can, particularly when they are tired. No matter what we do, remember showing respect for our parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values. Thank you!【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。BEIJINGA 50city q
10、uarterly survey conducted by the Peoples Bank of China (PBOC) found that in the first quarter,49.2 percent of the 20,000 respondents said prices had become intolerable.While 47.5 percent of the respondents felt prices were rather high but still tolerable.Mr.Dou Lanqing,one respondent,said,“The goods
11、 in supermarkets are apparently more expensive than before.In the meanwhile,I have to pay a bigger bill if my family go out for dinner now.”The report also found that many families began to take different measures to reduce the stress from the increasing prices.It shows that 35.4 percent of those su
12、rveyed generally put their money into banks,and that 27.6 percent tended to invest in stocks and mutual funds,down 8.2 percentage points quarteronquarter.Besides,most people prefer to work out a family budget.Mr.Dou said,“With a reasonable budget,I can save more than 20% of my money every month,whic
13、h used to be spent on unnecessary things.As long as we manage our money properly,the increasing prices,I think,should be not that terrible.”写作内容1以约30词概括短文的内容要点。2然后以约120词就“物价上涨及中学生节省开支”这一话题写一篇发言稿,发表看法,并包括如下要点:(1)你在日常生活中对物价上涨的体会;(2)中学生在日常生活中应如何精打细算,节省开支;(3)呼吁同学们从小事做起,发扬节约的中华美德。写作要求1可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点
14、,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2发言稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。Dear boys and girls,Its my great honour to make a speech here.Recently,the Peoples Bank of China conducted a quarterly survey on prices in 50 cities. _读写任务【参考范文】Dear boys and girls,Its my great honour to make a speech here.Recent
15、ly,the Peoples Bank of China conducted a quarterly survey on prices in 50 cities.Nearly half of the respondents said they couldnt tolerate the increasing prices,while some others considered it OK although they acknowledged the truth.As a result,many families began to seek various ways to save money.
16、The survey does draw my attention to the rapidly increasing prices in my daily life.Take food as an example,the prices of pork,beef,fish,chicken,as well as various vegetables,have risen at least 20%.It seems that money is flowing out of our pockets more quickly,but silently.Although we middle school
17、 students feel less stress than our parents do,we should also have a proper budget for our pocket money.For example,we can make the most of each exercise book and reuse some waste paper.Or we can also try to cut down our expenses on unnecessary magazines,CDs and so on.In a word,we can save money in
18、many aspects in our daily life.All in all,saving money is a great Chinese virtue and it is especially needed in this period.Thank you!2016书面表达训练假如你叫李华,是一名高中学生。你发现很多学生都有3G手机、iPod 或MP4.他们在课余时间忙着听音乐、打游戏、上网聊天,严重影响了学习。你打算给某英语报刊的编辑写一封信反映这种情况。内容包括:1. 3G手机、iPod 或MP4带来的好处; 2. 它们对中学生产生的负面影响;3. 提出自己的一些想法或建议。注意
19、:词数:110左右; 2. 开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。Dear Editor, I am a student in a senior high school. I am writing to share my worries about my classmates._I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Editor, I am a student in a senior high school. I am writing to share my worries about my class
20、mates.With the development of IT industry in recent years, many of my classmates have 3G mobile phones, iPods or MP4. Although the modern equipment can inform us of the latest news, make us relaxed and keep in touch with our friends, they have negative effects on us. I have noticed that some of them
21、 play computer games, watch movies or chat online after class, even in class. This has caused them to lose their interest in their lessons and want to play with their 3G mobile phones, iPods or MP4. So I am worried about them.I hope 3G mobile phones, iPods or MP4 should be banned at school. Do you a
22、gree with me?I am looking forward to your early supply. Yours, Li Hua【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)写作内容人们完成工作的方式通常有两种:独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以此为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。1独立完成:自行安排,自己解决问题;2合作完成:一起讨论,相互学习;3我喜欢的方式及理由。写作要求1只能使用5个句子表达全部所给内容;2将5个句子组成连贯的短文;3开头已经给出但不计入总句数。评分标准句子结构准确,信息内容完整,语篇连贯。Working Individually or W
23、orking in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done.One is to work individually._基础写作【参考范文】Working Individually or Working in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done.One is to work individually.In this way,people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it.Wha
24、ts more,they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.People may also choose to work in a team,where they can learn from each other and help each other.Besides,they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.Personally,I prefer to work in a team,which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.