1、Section Writing about a family memory学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠解教材原文名师论道Sunday 20 OctoberI was tidying my room yesterday and found an old photo in a notebook.As I was looking at it, the lovely memory of that day came back to me.It was my mothers birthday ten years ago, and I decided to surprise her with hom
2、emade scrambled eggs.I woke up really early and tiptoed to the kitchen.I had never cooked anything before, so I tried to copy how she did it.But somehow they ended up burnt.I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.I showed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened.To my surpr
3、ise, she tasted them and said they werent bad! I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.In fact, we ended up laughing and ate them all.This weekend is her 45th birthday. Ill make her scrambled eggs again, and this time they wont be burnt！学语言本文主要讲述了作者十年前为母亲制作生日礼物的回忆。文章主要以过去时态为主，讲述了给母亲悄悄制作礼物却失败的故事。
4、为了给母亲惊喜，作者在文中使用了surprise，tiptoe等动词，使语言更加形象；失败后作者使用了sadly表达作者的失望之情。最终，母亲品尝后说还不错。作者使用了 . love is indeed a magical ingredient, 将爱比喻成“神奇的调料”，由此“爱”得到升华学结构本文写作主要借助时间顺序：yesterdayten years agothis weekend。文章内容：一张老照片(引起回忆)十年前给母亲制作生日礼物失败下周母亲45岁生日，将再次制作同样的生日礼物(新的愿望)。佳句背诵开头回忆1.Three years ago when I just attend
5、ed junior school, I spent much time playing and was rather lazy in my study.三年前我刚上初中。我花了大量时间去玩，学习上很懒惰。2.Every time I look at the watch on my wrist, a lovely memory will come into my mind.每次我看着手腕上的手表，一段美好的回忆就会浮现在我的脑海里。3.Although it happened three years ago, I never forgot the evening party.尽管这场晚会发生在三
6、年前，但我永远不会忘记。事件描述1.I was walking in the street when I met a friend of mine.我正在大街上走着，就在那时遇见了我的一位朋友。2.As a junior student, you should know how to manage your time.作为一名中学生，你应该知道如何管理时间。3.I took it over eagerly, falling in love with it at first sight.我迫不及待地接过了它，我第一眼就喜欢上了它。感触或愿望1.I have been following Fath
7、ers words and have benefited a lot from it.I am thankful for my father.我一直遵循父亲的话，并从中受益良多。我感谢我的父亲。2.This was really the most unpleasant trip I have ever had！这是我曾经经历过的最不愉快的旅行！ 仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍题目要求假如你是李华，你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经写给你的一堆卡片。刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励你并帮助你摆脱压力而写的，最后你开始了快乐的学习。请你把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友Tom。仿写步骤
8、Step 1一仿结构布局合理 第一段：引起回忆的事物。第二段：时间、地点、人物、事件、特点等。第三段：一个新的希望或愿望。Step 2二仿语言规范美观这个周末，我在清理我的书架时，发现了一堆卡片。While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend, I found a stack of cards.当我读每一张卡片上的字时，我的眼睛湿润了。When I read the words on each card, my eyes watered.这些鼓励的卡片帮助我度过了挫折。These encouraging cards helped me go
9、through my frustration.高中刚开始的时候，我感到压力很大，每一分钟都害怕被落在后面。I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid of falling behind every minute of the days.妈妈很体贴，她发现了我的问题。Mum was so considerate that she found my problem.从那以后，我每天早上都能在我的书桌上发现一张特别的卡片。From then on, I could find a special card on my
10、desk every morning.我不再那么焦虑，开始在学习中找到乐趣。I became less anxious and began to find pleasure in my studies.妈妈让我明白压力是无法避免的。Mum makes me understand that pressure cant be avoided.重要的是如何恰当地处理它以及如何把它变成快乐或挑战。What is important is how to deal with it properly and how to turn it into pleasure or challenges.Step 3三
11、仿句间过渡自然 将句改为现在分词作状语。Reading the words on each card, my eyes watered.将句改为强调句型。It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.用count或matter改写句。What matters/counts is how to deal with it properly and how to turn it into pleasure or challenges.Step 4誊写Dear Tom，While I was cleani
12、ng up my bookshelf this weekend，I found a stack of cards.Reading the words on each card, my eyes watered.It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid of falling behind every minute of the days.Mum was so consi
13、derate that she found my problem.From then on, I could find a special card on my desk every morning.Gradually, I became less anxious and began to find pleasure in my studies.Mum makes me understand that pressure cant be avoided.What counts is how to deal with it properly and how to turn it into pleasure or challenges.Yours，Li Hua
