高考2008级英语书面表达专题讲座课件.ppt

1、书面表达专题讲座 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文 结构紧凑。完全达到预期的写作目的。一、书面表达评分标准（第五档 21-25分）二、影响书面表达得分的因素：1.语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如：1)When we crossed the crossroads,there are two persons standing there.2)The doctor suggeste

2、d him to give up smoking.3)There were a lot of girl students of our class took part in the sports meet.4)Any mistake cant escape his eye.“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面（这种错误主要是为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高词汇所致），如：1)The biscuit tastes delecious.2)Mother reminded me what I should take with me on the trip.3)The worke

3、r gave us a warmly welcome.4)Now Im going to give you a detail description of the room.2.要点有所遗漏1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求。2.把内容要点列成提纲。3.重新检查一遍，确信无一遗漏。4.动笔开始写。一定要注意：3.离题句太多历年来书面表达词数都要求在80120个词范围之内，按一般长度的句子计算，也就是十句左右，没有盲目发挥的余地。再者过度发挥浪费了时间，影响了成绩。所以必须注意，写作中不可乱加花样，只能在紧扣主题,保证要点全面的前提下适当发挥，增加有限的相关细节。4.没有避开难点而错误使用不准确的结

4、构2)家家有存款、余粮。1)The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer.Every family has more grain and money than they can use.3)看完了这本书,我写了一些读后感。I wrote something after reading this book.5.没有使用高级词汇和复杂句6.书写是否工整清晰在某种程度上也会影响答卷得分She doesnt like sports.We had t

5、o go home.She cares nothing for sports.What we had to do was go home.三、怎样运用复杂结构：1.改变时态The bell is ringing now.(一般)2.改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般)There goes the bell.(高级)It is suggested that the conference be put off.(高级)3.使用不定式4.使用过去分词He is so kind that he can help me.(一般)He

6、 is so kind as to help me.(高级)She walked out of the room and many students followed her.(一般)Followed by many students,she.(高级)Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.(一般)Once seen,it can .(高级)5.使用v-ing形式When he arrives please give me an e-mail.(一般)If the weather permits,Ill come tomorrow.(一般)On hi

7、s arriving/arrival,please give.(高级)Weather permitting,Ill come tomorrow.(高级)Now Zhang Zhuang primary School has three teachers.They teach 48 pupils.(一般)Now Zhang Zhuang Primary Schol has three teachers,teaching 48 pupils.(高级)It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(一般)I happened to have met

8、him.(一般)6.使用名词性从句The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.(高级)It happened that I had met him.(高级)To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(一般)What surprised him is that the girl.(高级)7.使用状语从句I wont believe what he says.(一般)If you come back before six oclock,you can go out.(一般

9、)The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much.(一般)No matter what he says,I wont believe.(高级)You can go out on condition that you come back before.(高级)The meal was so nice that we all.(高级)8.使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(一般)The girl whose composition was we

10、ll written was spoken highly of.(高级)I studied Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer at school.(一般)The subjects I studied at school included Chinese,maths,English.(高级)9.使用虚拟语气The ship didnt sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.(一般)I wasnt invited to the

11、party,so I didnt attend it.(一般)If I had been invited to the party,I would have attended it.(高级)But for the efforts of the captain,the ship would have sunk with all on board.(高级)10.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(一般)It was not until 1920 that regular radio.(高级)Weak as I am,Ill ma

12、ke the effort.(高级)Though Im weak,I will make the effort.(一般)How glad we were to see the crops and.!(高级)We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.(一般)11.使用并列句If you go through the gate,youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(一般)Go through the gate,and youll find.(高级)I got up lat

13、e this morning,otherwise I could have caught the early bus.(高级)I got up late this morning.I didnt catch the early bus.(一般)The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.(高级)When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(一般)四、怎样运用高级词汇：As a result,the plan was a failure.(一般)She went to Austria in order to s

14、tudy music.(一般)Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.(一般)The plan turned out to be a failure.(高级)She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.(高级)Thanks to the good weather,our journey.(高级)At the news of her death,he went.(高级)She has trouble in pronouncing the word.(高级)Wh

15、ose turn is it to be on duty today?(高级)When he heard she had died,he went pale with sorrow.(一般)She cant correctly pronounce the word.(一般)Who will be on duty today?(一般)怎样运用高级词汇：五、常见语法错误分析：1.句子缺谓语1)The building like a match box.2)He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.1)A worker of

16、 the farm lead us to the field.2)All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。3.时态错误4.词性混用1)When he came back,he found that his wife has gone to bed.2)What are you doing this time yesterday?1)She enjoys study English.2)If anyone against the plan,please le

17、t me know.5.介词误用6.冠词误用1)In my surprise,he has got the first prize.2)He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.3)Dont read under the sun.1)We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.2)Once upon a time,there was an one-eyed lion.3)The history is actually a very interesting subject.7.名词的数混淆8

18、.动词用法错误1)It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.2)There is always traffic jam.1)Where are you come from?2)When I arrived Hong Kong,my mother was there waiting for me.3)He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.4)The accident was happened in 1999.9.习惯用法错误1)The actor in this mov

19、ie is very beautiful.2)I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.3)The reason is because he does not know what to do next.六、学会使用恰当的关联词：1.表示平行、对等或选择关系and，bothand,as well as,together with,neithernor,also,not onlybut also,eitheror,as well.2.表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),in spite

20、 of,although,otherwise,while,after all.3.表示对比关系4.表示因果关系on the contrary,instead of,on one handon the other hand,just like,unlike,in the same way,at the same timeso,for,therefore,as a result(of),because,owing to,due to,thanks to,on account(理由)of.5.表示时间、顺序关系6.表示递进、强调关系shortly afterwards,first,second,th

21、en,next,finally,for one thing,for another,in the end,eventually(最后,终于)besides,furthermore(此外),whats more,in addition,moreover(而且),worse still,to make matters worse,indeed,certainly,surely,above all7.表示解释、说明关系8.表示结论namely(也就是),actually,such as,for example,for instance,that is to say,in other words,an

22、d so on,to tell you the truth,according to thisin short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the whole,in conclusion,at last,finally七、背诵一些题材的常识性语句：通知：开头语:结束语:Attention,please.May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.Dont forget the time and the address

23、.Im sure you will have a lot of fun.Thats all,thank you.欢迎词：开头语:结束语:Welcome to Now let me tell you something about Im going to give you a detailed description ofLet me show you aroundIm sure youll have a good trip.Thats all,thank you.写信：开头语:结束语:Im glad to hear from you.Im writing to tell you something aboutHow are you getting along with your?I really dont know how to thank you forPlease give my best regards to.Remember me to your parents.Im looking forward to hearng from you soon.Best wishes.