1、英语书面表达English Composition WritingWhat makes a good essay?The essayA good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concluding paragraphTo many students,school
2、life is boring and tiring.However,I find my school life meaningful and colourful.general statementgeneral statementtopic statementtopic statementTopic paragraph(Introduction paragraph)General statement Topic statement Supporting Paragraphs(Body)ParagraphsTSSSSSSSSSFirstly,.Secondly,.Moreover,.Finall
3、y,.However,.In addition,Furthermore,.ConclusionPersonally,in conclusion,in brief,From what has been discussed above,we may draw the conclusion that.In summary,it is wiser.The paragraphWhat makes a good paragraph?A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.There
4、are different kinds of bee.Some live in large groups like the honey bee,and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks.Other species make their nests in holes in the ground.There are also varieties that do not live in groups at alltopic sentenceWherever you go in our school,you see green lawns
5、and trees and beautiful flowers.Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles.A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water.Topic sentence:_just like a garden.Our school isjust like a garden.Our school isjust like a garden.Our sch
6、ool isA good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons.First of all,English is spoken by a large number of people,and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries.Secondl
7、y,English is the most widely used language on the internet.It has become an on-line language.Thirdly,the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful.Lastly,正确使用有关连接词时间先后：first,then,later,in the end,eventually,since then,after a while 转折关系：but,however,on the contrar
8、y,nevertheless因果关系：because,since,as,thanks to,owing to,as a result of,for the reason that让步关系：though,although,even if,even though,in spite of the fact that递进关系：whats more,in addition,furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand,条件关系：if,unless,as long as,on condition that 表 列 举：for example/instance,t
9、akefor example,thats to say,in other words,as follows表 总 结：in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole,as has been statedA good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What a kind boy he is!How disappointed he was!感叹句强调句 e.g.Itwas this y
10、oung boy that helped the old granny.I do hope you can come if possible.e.g.Only in this way can you solve this problem.There comes the police car.Hardly had they got to the stationwhen they met the young man.e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.Come to me if necessary.e.g.I saw a young lad
11、y walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句省略句with短语 e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place where we canfind much useful information.Lets come to the main teachingbuilding,at the back of which standsthe school library.定语从句e.g.Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to
12、 whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句e.g.Time passed quickly before we knew it.The moment we reached the farm,we got down to harvesting.So long as we work harder at our lessons,well catch up sooner or later.各种状语从句1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）2.Though Im weak,Ill m
13、ake the effort.(使用倒装句)3.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not un
14、til he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)6.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says.（no matter
15、 what状语从句）8.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（祈使句+and）Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was se
16、nt abroad.(使用倒装句)10.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure.(turn out)12.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of him.The plan turned out to be a
17、failure.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphsand a concluding paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking
18、 words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.ASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divided into parts?Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切题)?LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words?Are there any mi
19、stakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）?Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）?Lets improve it:Good afternoon,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”.Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion.Somestudents live a very expensive life _._,
20、they hope to look smart and special._,they want to win others admiration and respect.In addition,it makes them feel cool._,we students should hold the right sense of values.We should practice thrift in our daily life._,it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that th
21、ose poor children in rural areas can return to school._,it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.Thank you for listening!A.the reasons why they do so are as follows B.B.firstly C.last but not least D.whats moreC.E.as far as I am concerned F.SecondlyABCDEF苏州市2009届高三
22、教学调研测试最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由反对方的理由你的看法及理由1可以促进对体育的重视；2可以增强学生的体魄；3更有利于提高学习效率。1学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2过高的要求学生难以达到；3长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥23点)注意：1词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好
23、，不计入总词数；2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。1.A good beginning makes a good ending.2.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs.3.Youd better use some linking words.4.Handwriting is of great importance.Suggestions:第一段：1.Some people agree to NO.One,because they usually think that.In the meantime,.In addi
24、tion.2.Some people think that A is right because.3.Some people suggest/say that.At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.4.Some people prefer NO.One.In their opinion A.In addition.第二段：1.On the other hand,some people hold that B is right.They think.2.But many more people dont agree wi
25、th them.They prefer B.They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary,some people hold that.4.Some people think that B is better.It is clear that.Whats more,.Also.在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.In my opinion B is better than A.There is no doubt that.2.I support A.The reason goes as
26、follows.3.As far as I am concerned,I agree to the latter.First.Second.Finally.4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions.I think that everything has both its positive and negative sides.We should keep an open mind.5.People will continue to argue over the questions,I think wed
27、 better keep an open mind because everything has two sides.It all relies on.6.Of these two ways of.I prefer.First of all,.Second,.Should we give more attention to students health or grades?The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance runnin
28、g activity.It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day,junior school students,1,500 and senior school students,2,000.Different people always offer various views.Some people say yes to this activity.They think,for one thing,it can make people pay more attention to physi
29、cal education;for another,running can improve students health and help them study efficiently so they can have good grades.However,others hold opposite opinions about the activity.They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future dependson their grades in their subj
30、ects.Meanwhile,many cant meet the high requirements.Whats worse,some will suffer cold and injuries.In my opinion,its all right for schools to care about students health and carry out the activity step by step.Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.What do you think about the concluding para
31、graph?Is it a good one?If not,how can you improve it?In my opinion,its all right for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step.Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.In my opinion,its better for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step,because a good body helps make high efficiency.Whats more,it not noly helps students get relaxed,but also will benefit them in their future life.
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