1、9th April.2018 by Zuo ZhongyiAn analysis of a typical composition常见书信写作高考作文答题卡通常是18行,写满17行为宜,书写时,单词之间必须有适当的距离,一般以空出一个小写字母a的宽度为宜。以估算字数。最好自己把高考真题范文在作业本或答题卡上抄写一遍。第一步、审题第一人称一般将来时:will+V原be going to+V原 be to+V原 be about to+V原要点可灵活处理今年暑假、地点可灵活可适当增加细节注意:一般都会给出格式来,如没有,注意书信格式。Para1:写作背景+写作目的 Para2:要点:Para3:信
2、件交际功能结尾 look forward to.等词.第二步、列提纲背景:美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。恰好你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动。目的:邀请他参加时间/地点/内容/报名方式/截至日期可直接写在问卷上面第三步,分析罗列要点及支点的用词1.名词:Chinese Summer Camp,foreign students,school,summer vacation,Chinese culture,daily Chinese,history,traditional culture,museums,deadline2.动词:is intended for,be desi
3、gned for,hold,take place,be interested in,be crazy about,like,invite,join,study,kown about,pay a visit to,sign up3.可能用到的句型1)、Id like to./It is+adj./n+to do sth.2)、not only.but also.可直接写在问卷上面Outline 书信开头 1.校办夏营-你感兴趣-邀请参与 2.活动时地-活动内容:3.报名参加-截止日期 书信结尾第四步,连词成句1、我们学校将为外国学生举办汉语夏令营。2、我知道你对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。3、我发邮件
4、邀请你加入此次夏令营。4、本次活动从7月18日持续到28日。5、有很多活动,包括:学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆。6、你可以在我们学校网站或通过电子邮件报名。7、此次活动截至日期7月10日。第五步,一句多译1、我们学校将为外国学生举办汉语夏令营。A Chinese Summer Camp for the foreign students will be held in our school.Our school will hold a Chinese Summer Camp for the foreign students.A Chinese Summer Camp whic
5、h is intended for the foreign students will be held in our school.2、我知道你对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。I know you are quite interested in chinese culture.I know you have got a strong desire to learn about chinese culture.I have always learned that you are crazy about chinese culture.I know you have showed great intere
6、st in chinese culture.3、我发邮件邀请你加入此次夏令营。I sent this E-mail to invite you to join the Camp.Im writing to invite you to join the Camp.Id like to invite you to join the Camp.目的状语4、本次活动从7月18日持续到28日。The Camp lasts 11days,from July 18 to July 28.The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days,from July 18 to July 28
7、.The Camp begins on July 18 and ends on July 28.5、有很多活动,包括:学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆。There are many activities for the participants,including studying daily Chinese,learning about Chinese history and traditional culture and paying visits to museums.It covers a wide variety of cultural activities,rang
8、ing from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture as well as paying visits to museums.varieties of activities are scheduled for the participants,includingstudying daily Chinese,learning about Chinese history and traditional culture and
9、paying visits to museums.6、你可以在我们学校网站报名。You can sign up for it at our school website.You can apply for it at our school website.You will be admitted to be part of it if you enroll yourself at our school website.7、此次活动的报名截至日期是7月10日。The enrollment ends on the 10th of July.Please be sure to sign up for
10、 it before July 10th.The deadline is July 10th.Dear Tom,Here comes a piece of good news.A Chinese Summer Camp for the foreign students will be held in our school.I know you are quite interested in chinese culture.I sent this E-mail to invite you to join the Camp.The Camp lasts 11days,from July 18 to
11、 July 28.There are many activities for the participants,including studying daily Chinese,learning about Chinese history and traditional culture and paying visits to museums.You can sign up for it at our school website.The enrollment ends on the 10th July.(84w)Yours,Li HuaSince,If you want to jion it
12、,I am looking forward to your coming.,which第六步,合并句子,连句成文(基础篇),you(提高篇)A Chinese Summer Camp which is intended for the foreign students will be held in our school.I have always learned that you are crazy about chinese culture.Iam writing to invite you to join the Camp.The Camp is scheduled to last 11
13、 days,from July 18 to July 28.It covers a wide variety of cultural activities,ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture.You will be admitted to be part of it if you enroll yourself at our school website.Please be sure to sig
14、n up for it before 10th July.(101w)基础好点的同学在用词上,尽可能的选用高级词汇,特殊句式等,增加亮点,可适当增加细节。Dear Tom,(提高篇)Here comes a piece of good news.A Chinese Summer Camp which is intended for the foreign students will be held in our school.I have always learned that you are crazy about chinese culture.Iam writing to invite
15、you to join the Camp.The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days,from July 18 to July 28.It covers a wide variety of cultural activities,ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture,paying visits to museums.You will be admitted to be
16、 part of it if you enroll yourself at our school website.Please be sure to sign up for it before 10th July.(101w)Yours,Li HuaSinceAs is reported,theNot only can youstudy,but alsoattend.In addition,the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums,which is the best way to learn about th
17、e country.Looking forward to your early reply.Dear Tom,Here comes a piece of good news.Chinese Summer Camp,which is intended for international students,is going to be held in our school this summer vacation.Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture,Id like to invite you to join it.The Camp is sche
18、duled to last 11 days,from July 18 to July 28.It covers a wide variety of cultural activities,ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture.As we all know,language is closely related to culture,so Im convinced that you can dig o
19、ut Chinese cultural features from language study.In addition,the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums,which is the best way to learn about the country.By admiring the historical relics,you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country.If you want to be part of it,
20、please sign up for it before July10th at our school website.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li HuaPossible version(高级版)assignment第二节 书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华。请你给美国笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会,并带给他他想要的那幅中国画,同时,询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:李明:高个子,戴眼镜;航班号:CA985 注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。Dear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that _ Looking forward to your reply.同学美文欣赏