1、1Unit 14 Careers Communication Workshop-Writing:A Letter of Application北师大版Module 5单位：汝阳一高姓名：郭 玲近几年高考英语书面表达关注应用文。要求考生掌握各种应用类信件的写作要领，并熟悉各种相关的题材和句式。内容上体现文明，和谐，诚信，友善等社会主义核心价值观，以及传播优秀传统文化的话题。应用文写作的十大话题：申请 介绍 建议 咨询 推荐邀请 道歉 感谢 祝贺 投诉3Writing:A Letter of Application (申请信/求职信)41.To appreciate and analyze a c
2、omposition about application;2.To write a letter of application.Learning aims:As a senior high school student,what can you possibly apply for?Lead-inI am writing to apply forindependent recruitment(自主招生);a job/position as an English editor/a volunteer a chance of studying aboard.joining various scho
3、ol clubs;winning a scholarship;Pre-writingAppreciate a composition and discuss in groups to solve the three questions.1)The structure of the letter.2)The excellent words and expressions.3)The sentence patterns.范文展示return Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announce
4、ment of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet.And I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it.Ive been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.So I can offer language service.Whats more,I will take the
5、 chance to learn the different cultures.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply.范文展示1.Whats the layout(布局)of the letter?Structure Para.1Para.2Para.3Return to questions简单自我介绍；信息来源、内容及写信目的正文：申请原因和自我优势(qualifications,qualities,strengths,ability,talent)希望获
6、准及对对方的期待return Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet.And I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it.Ive been learning English for
7、10 years,and I speak fluent English.So I can offer language service.Whats more,I will take the chance to learn the different cultures.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply.范文展示1.Introduction.I am Li Hua,a middle school student from China.2.Reasons fo
8、r writing or purpose of writing.I read the announcement.that you have posted on the that you have posted on the Internet.And Internet.And I am interested in itI am interested in it.Sentence patterns-try to remember3.reasons for applying and personal qualities,qualifications,abilities,advantages and
9、so onI know that you welcome.Id like to take part in it.welcome.Id like to take part in it.Ive been learning English for 10 years,and I speak speak.(.(So I can offer language service.)Whats more,I will take the chance to.take the chance to.3.Ending.I hope I will be accepted as a member of.Looking fo
10、rward to your early reply.1.self-introduction.I am Li Hua,a boy/girl,aged 18,a senior high school student from China.I am Li Hua，an 18-year-old girl student in Class One,Grade Three.I am Li Hua,an 18-year-old student from Xinhua Senior High School.more useful sentence patterns2.Purpose of writing.I
11、am writing to tell you that Id like to be a I am writing to tell you that Id like to be a volunteer/advisor/an editor for the volunteer/advisor/an editor for the Games/newspapers.Games/newspapers.I am writing in response to your advertisement for a position as a volunteer,which is really appealing t
12、o me.Im writing to apply for the position advertised in the newspaper as a volunteer.I am very interested in it/Id like to apply for it.Your advertisement online for a position in an International camp has caught my attention.I am very interested in itmore useful sentence patterns3.reasons for apply
13、ing I am quite interested in the position I am quite interested in the position as it as it can improve my English and other abilities.can improve my English and other abilities.I really want to obtain the precious I really want to obtain the precious opportunity because by offering my service oppor
14、tunity because by offering my service I will be able to improve my organisational I will be able to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.confidence in speaking English in public.4.skil
15、ls(English language,writing,computer etc)Im good at English and can speak English fluently and freely/speak fluent English.I have a wide knowledge of English and I have been always good at spoken English.Ive been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.I have such a good command of
16、English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher successfully.I think I would be a good journalist due to my language skills.I won the first prize at our District English Writing Competitiion in 2016.In addition,I am good at reading and writing,which I think is of great help to a reporte
17、r.I am able to use the computer skillfully,and I type very fast,which is very important for office work.补充：more useful sentence patterns5.advantages(sports etc)Im fond of sports and Ive worked as a volunteer at several great games in our country before.I am fond of sports and especially do well in f
18、ootball.Doing outdoor activities is my favourite6.personal qualities and abilitiesI am a hard-working and easy-going girl.I am outgoing,reliable and helpful.I feel I can get on well with people from different backgrouds since I have worked with lots of different people.Besides,I am so strong and hea
19、lthy,and I really enjoy making friends with others,especially communicating with foreignersMost importantly,Im always ready to help others and good at cooperating with others.I am a good partner/have good(strong)teamwork spirit and communication skills.I am good at communicating with others.I can he
20、lp organize activities such as 描述性格常用词汇：open-minded,enthusiastic,helpful,active,hardworking,easy-going,out-going,warm-hearted,kind,well-organised,reliablebe willing to help others,be ready to help others,etc7.examples(working experience)What is the most important for me is that I have got a I have g
21、ot a part-time job,from which I got some valuable part-time job,from which I got some valuable experience.experience.Most importantly,I worked with children in my,I worked with children in my community centre last munity centre last summer.8.Ending.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your activ
22、ity/club/camp.Id appreciate it if you could consider my application/take my application into consideration.I will be grateful if I can be accepted as a member of.Thanks for your consideration.I would be very happy if I could be chosen as a volunteer.Looking forward to your early reply.I am sure that
23、 I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I would be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.return SummaryAbout how to write to a letter of application1.The structure of the letter2.Useful words and expressions3.Sentence patternsUp to now,we have learntWhile-writing假如你是李华，你从某广告得知需要招聘
24、一名英语助教。你对此很感兴趣。请你用英语写一封申请信。Post-writing 1.Exchange your writing in groups and correct mistakes.2.Group presentation.Four aspectsDetailed evaluationYour score1.Structure:(5 points)Transitional words (过渡的)2.Content:(6 points)Interest;Strengths;Characteristics;Talent3.Language:(11 points)Grammar;Sentence structures4.Handwriting:(3 points)Neat and tidy;Good handwritingAssessment standardsHomework Rewrite the letter on your own writing books for further correction.23