1、广西柳江县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（2）及答案短文改错。One Sunday morning, there were much people in the park. In a shop, a woman was buying an ice-cream while a young man behind her took his handbag away. She shouted, “Stop thief! Hes robbed me from my bag!” Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There wa
2、s an old man sit quietly on a bench nearby, reading a newspaper. As the robber was running passed him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put between the robbers legs. The young man fell down on the ground hardly. Soon two policeman came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanke
3、d for the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness. 【参考答案】4.1. muchmany 2. whilewhen 3. hisher 4. fromof 5. sitsitting 6. passedpast 7. put后加it 8. hardlyhard 9. policemanpolicemen 10. thanked后的for去掉假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在
4、缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain atthat moment,but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had d
5、ifficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didnt tell anyone but even refusedthe offer of helpof my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know Im wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. In this way, we can g
6、et along to each other happily and peacefully.【参考答案】5.Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that lesson greatmoment,but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had haddifficulty walk back to my classroom, I st
7、ill didnt tell anyone but even refusedthe offer of help walking andof my classmates. As result, the hurtin my foot became bad. Now I know Im wrong. We a worsecan tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in theirreturn. In this way, we can get along to each o
8、ther happily and peacefully. With【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2015江西省八所重点中学高三联考)It is reported that t
9、hirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (销毁) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we hold a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about them. Some think it necessarily. Firstly, with cellphones, students would have foc
10、used their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk message. Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, s
11、tudents can use cellphones for study.Personally spoken, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them more than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.答案：It is reported that thirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (销毁) in
12、front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about . Some think it . Firstly, cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk . Secondly, the examination
13、will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing, the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.Personally ， even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educat
14、e them than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.1taken前加werecellphones是take的动作承受者，应用被动语态。故taken前加were。2holdheld根据语境应用过去时，故hold改为held。3themit此处代词是代替前文的discussion。故them改为it。4necessarilynecessarythink 后跟形容词作宾补，故necessarily应改为necessary。5withwithout根据句意，应是“没有手机，学生将能集中注意力上课”。故with改为without。6messagem
15、essagesmessage是可数名词，前没有限定词，应用复数形式，故message改为messages。7the others前的the去掉与前文的some对应，用others，故去掉the。8atinin the age of information“在信息时代”，故应将at改为in。9spokenspeakingpersonally speaking“在我看来”。故spoken改为speaking。10moreratherrather than而不是。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多
16、余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, hi
17、s money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great j
18、oy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. Its true what honesty is more important than money!【参考答案】6.1. deepdeeply, 2. the 去掉 3. bad-worse 4. direction-directions或者前面all-any 5. rush-rushed 6. knowing-knowing 7. pick后加up 8. missed-missing / lost 9. your-our 10. what-that短文改错The other day a
19、fter work，I was walking down the street I saw a boy riding a unicycle，one of those with only one wheel. in all pink from head to toe，he was singing a song which was sounded like a kids song.I thought he must be crazy.Just then，a lady dropped 20dollar bill on the ground，but didnt realize it and start
20、ed to walk away.The guy in pink picked the money and gave it back to her.After that，he rode on soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. a strange and good guy!短文改错(假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词
21、下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit th
22、e girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldnt move. The young man didnt know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down whi
23、le was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.参考答案、 短文改错(共10小题)I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebrahappen 去掉tocrossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, wh
24、en andbut he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldnt his badlymove. The young man didnt know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the policewhatarrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and sent policemen wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast. 加he或去掉was